<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><?xml-stylesheet href="http://www.blogger.com/styles/atom.css" type="text/css"?><feed xmlns='http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom' xmlns:openSearch='http://a9.com/-/spec/opensearchrss/1.0/' xmlns:georss='http://www.georss.org/georss' xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0'><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785</id><updated>2012-03-02T19:57:16.416-05:00</updated><category term='kickstarter'/><category term='Picture Books'/><category term='donate'/><category term='Illustrating'/><category term='Young Adult Novels'/><category term='Adventure'/><category term='Editors. children&apos;s Authors'/><category term='Agents'/><category term='Struggling with life skills'/><category term='open submissions'/><category term='Things'/><category term='Ideas'/><category term='Query'/><category term='work'/><category term='growing up'/><category term='Giveaways'/><category term='Quotes'/><category term='Middle Grade Book Review'/><category term='Weekend Reads'/><category term='Spiritual Awareness'/><category term='Trees'/><category term='rejection'/><category term='mourning'/><category term='Retreats'/><category term='manuscript'/><category term='Anthology'/><category term='Kendra'/><category term='craft'/><category term='middle grade fiction'/><category term='MG'/><category term='Living'/><category term='Love'/><category term='Novels'/><category term='Inner Peace'/><category term='editing'/><category term='character'/><category term='blogging'/><category term='Mom'/><category term='story arc'/><category term='Middle Grade'/><category term='Summer'/><category term='Writer'/><category term='Illustrators'/><category term='Motherhood'/><category term='Matched'/><category term='Writing Retreats'/><category term='Family'/><category term='beach'/><category term='Summer reading'/><category term='winter'/><category term='Teens'/><category term='Historical Fiction'/><category term='book covers'/><category term='small press'/><category term='ebook'/><category term='toolbox'/><category term='Young Adult'/><category term='2012'/><category term='Dysfunction'/><category term='picture books publishing'/><category term='SCBWI'/><category term='Writers'/><category term='Conference'/><category term='Poetry'/><category term='Life in a small town'/><category term='spread the love'/><category term='Writing'/><category term='Picture Boks'/><category term='#atozchallenge'/><category term='Spring'/><category term='Critique Group'/><category term='Dyslexia'/><category term='friends'/><category term='Middle Grade Novels'/><category term='revision'/><category term='NESCBWI'/><category term='children&apos;s Authors'/><category term='Mothering'/><category term='YA historical romance'/><category term='submissions'/><category term='Agent Interviews'/><category term='Authors'/><category term='Happiness'/><category term='blog'/><category term='Editor'/><category term='life'/><category term='publishing'/><category term='saying goodbye'/><category term='Reflection'/><category term='Fantasy'/><category term='Conferences'/><category term='bronze casting'/><category term='old friends'/><category term='Agent'/><category term='Lake'/><category term='Novels Lake'/><category term='Dystopian'/><category term='Queries'/><category term='habits'/><category term='Dysfunctional Families'/><category term='Books'/><category term='Pugs'/><category term='awesomness'/><title type='text'>The Write Joyce</title><subtitle type='html'>An author writing about middle grade and young adult books, the process of writing,and trying to juggle being a mom and a wife, teacher, keeper of the family calendar, dog walker, chef, and housekeeper. Did I mention I'm a writer?</subtitle><link rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#feed' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/posts/default'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default?max-results=100'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/'/><link rel='hub' href='http://pubsubhubbub.appspot.com/'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><generator version='7.00' uri='http://www.blogger.com'>Blogger</generator><openSearch:totalResults>85</openSearch:totalResults><openSearch:startIndex>1</openSearch:startIndex><openSearch:itemsPerPage>100</openSearch:itemsPerPage><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-3272583345224503362</id><published>2012-03-02T19:56:00.001-05:00</published><updated>2012-03-02T19:57:16.425-05:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Authors'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='MG'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='NESCBWI'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='YA historical romance'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='SCBWI'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Picture Books'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='children&apos;s Authors'/><title type='text'>SCBWI Crystal Kite - Vote Now</title><content type='html'>&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-uN5vyuj3bT4/T1Fr9Yzdn2I/AAAAAAAAA8c/5gRVLd036n4/s1600/LiveImage.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-uN5vyuj3bT4/T1Fr9Yzdn2I/AAAAAAAAA8c/5gRVLd036n4/s1600/LiveImage.jpg" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I love them all, so this is going to be a difficult choice!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The first round of voting for the SCBWI Crystal Kite award has been &lt;br /&gt;completed, and we now have 6 finalists for the New England region:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;ul&gt;&lt;li&gt;      Leslie Bulion for AT THE SEA FLOOR CAFE&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;      Lita Judge for RED SLED&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;      Jo Knowles for PEARL&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;      Beth Krommes for SWIRL BY SWIRL: SPIRALS IN NATURE&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;      J. C. Phillipps for WINK: THE NINJA WHO WANTED TO NAP&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;      Padma Venkatraman for ISLAND'S END&lt;/li&gt;&lt;/ul&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Congratulations to all of you!!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Let's join together to choose the successor for Brian Lies who won last &lt;br /&gt;year's award.  Voting will be open from now until March 16th.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;To vote, go to &lt;a href="http://www.scbwi.org/" target="_blank"&gt;www.scbwi.org&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;1. Select the yellow "MEMBER LOGIN" button at the top of the page and &lt;br /&gt;log in with your email address and password (If the button says "LOG OUT," &lt;br /&gt;then you're already logged in.)&lt;br /&gt;2. Click on the "MEMBER HOME" button, and then, from your member &lt;br /&gt;homepage, choose "See what's going on in your region!"&lt;br /&gt;3. Click on the "Crystal Kite" tab at the top of your Regional Chapter's &lt;br /&gt;Homepage.&lt;br /&gt;4. Choose the title you wish to vote for, and click on "VOTE FOR THIS &lt;br /&gt;TITLE" to make your selection!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Good luck to all the finalists!&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-3272583345224503362?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/3272583345224503362/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2012/03/scbwi-crystal-kite-vote-now.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/3272583345224503362'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/3272583345224503362'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2012/03/scbwi-crystal-kite-vote-now.html' title='SCBWI Crystal Kite - Vote Now'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-uN5vyuj3bT4/T1Fr9Yzdn2I/AAAAAAAAA8c/5gRVLd036n4/s72-c/LiveImage.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-5046792652250531065</id><published>2012-02-19T12:37:00.001-05:00</published><updated>2012-02-19T13:05:49.663-05:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Young Adult'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='submissions'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='YA historical romance'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='ebook'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Anthology'/><title type='text'>New &amp; Emerging Author Opportunities</title><content type='html'>Do you have a young adult historical fiction romance with fantasy  elements or other cross genre elements? Pugalicious Press is looking for short stories  to include in their first e-book YA anthology, titled &lt;i&gt;Timeless&lt;/i&gt;!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a data-mce-href="http://pugaliciouspress.files.wordpress.com/2012/02/timeless-cover1.jpg" href="http://pugaliciouspress.files.wordpress.com/2012/02/timeless-cover1.jpg"&gt;&lt;img alt="" class="aligncenter  wp-image-367" data-mce-src="http://pugaliciouspress.files.wordpress.com/2012/02/timeless-cover1.jpg?w=662" height="614" src="http://pugaliciouspress.files.wordpress.com/2012/02/timeless-cover1.jpg?w=662" title="timeless-cover1" width="397" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;br /&gt;If  your short story is &amp;nbsp;between 3000 and 7500 words and fits into the  genre of YA historical romance they want to read it. They would love if you  story included any of the following elements: steampunk, fantasy, magic,  or adventure. They ask that you follow the guidelines below:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;ol&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;b&gt;Submit the whole manuscript to &lt;/b&gt;&lt;i&gt;pugaliciouspress (at) gmail (dot) com&lt;/i&gt;&lt;b&gt;, as a Word .doc file (no .docx) by March 30, 2012, with the subject heading: submission–YA anthology.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;b&gt;Please include a bio, publishing credits if any, and a synopsis.&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/li&gt;&lt;/ol&gt;Since  so many of you were asking, They've posted the minimum offering on the payment and  royalties for this anthology: $25.00 at time of publication, plus 10%  royalty and they are asking for first&amp;nbsp;e-book and printing rights for two  years.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Inside info: They are only going to take seven authors and are splitting the royalty 70% authors (hence 10% per author)/30% publisher (to cover costs). This a great opportunity for new authors to get published.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-5046792652250531065?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/5046792652250531065/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2012/02/do-you-have-young-adult-historical.html#comment-form' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/5046792652250531065'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/5046792652250531065'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2012/02/do-you-have-young-adult-historical.html' title='New &amp; Emerging Author Opportunities'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-5127851536251264341</id><published>2012-02-13T10:50:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2012-02-13T10:50:07.267-05:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='life'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Conferences'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Picture Books'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Illustrating'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='children&apos;s Authors'/><title type='text'>The Cat In The Hat &amp; Springfield, MA</title><content type='html'>&lt;style&gt;&lt;!-- /* Font Definitions */@font-face {font-family:Cambria; panose-1:2 4 5 3 5 4 6 3 2 4; mso-font-charset:0; mso-generic-font-family:auto; mso-font-pitch:variable; mso-font-signature:3 0 0 0 1 0;} /* Style Definitions */p.MsoNormal, li.MsoNormal, div.MsoNormal {mso-style-parent:""; margin:0in; margin-bottom:.0001pt; mso-pagination:widow-orphan; font-size:12.0pt; font-family:"Times New Roman"; mso-ascii-font-family:Cambria; mso-ascii-theme-font:minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family:Cambria; mso-fareast-theme-font:minor-latin; mso-hansi-font-family:Cambria; mso-hansi-theme-font:minor-latin; mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-theme-font:minor-bidi;}@page Section1 {size:8.5in 11.0in; margin:1.0in 1.25in 1.0in 1.25in; mso-header-margin:.5in; mso-footer-margin:.5in; mso-paper-source:0;}div.Section1 {page:Section1;}--&gt;&lt;/style&gt;       &lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;When I was nineteen, I lived in La Jolla, California for two years. During that time, I worked as a floral designer. Richard (who liked to be called Dick) owned the florist and he was an interesting guy. He knew many celebrities and often had me “do up” the floral arrangements for the events he hosted or was attending.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;One of his closest and dearest friends was, Ted Geisel. I met Ted several times. He had an opinion about everything! Some of which I just can’t divulge. He did think I was talker and called me Voyce instead of Joyce after he got to know me. &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;I’ve been thinking about him lately because I have been to Springfield several times in the last few months as I help organize this years NESCBWI “Keeping It Real” conference taking place April 20-22. &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;He used to joke about Springfield and that is all I going to say about what he would say about Springfield.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Just to keep this post interesting, here are the inscriptions in the two books he signed for me.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;tbody&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td style="text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-2_pZAjFCGCI/TzkkmmYTAqI/AAAAAAAAA7Q/JwUuoVFNfyU/s1600/Cat1.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="400" src="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-2_pZAjFCGCI/TzkkmmYTAqI/AAAAAAAAA7Q/JwUuoVFNfyU/s400/Cat1.jpg" width="298" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"&gt;This a 1957 printing.&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/tbody&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;tbody&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td style="text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-BxWU22lChOE/TzkoyqeqK3I/AAAAAAAAA7Y/9EOR-DbXsMQ/s1600/cat4.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="255" src="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-BxWU22lChOE/TzkoyqeqK3I/AAAAAAAAA7Y/9EOR-DbXsMQ/s400/cat4.jpg" width="400" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"&gt;My 4 year-old signature&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/tbody&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;tbody&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td style="text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-lkwdJeoumDY/TzkpAy_XtRI/AAAAAAAAA7g/7NJAyekc-ac/s1600/cat2.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="277" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-lkwdJeoumDY/TzkpAy_XtRI/AAAAAAAAA7g/7NJAyekc-ac/s400/cat2.jpg" width="400" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"&gt;His opinion of my love of his book.&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/tbody&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&amp;nbsp;Shortly before I returned to the East Coast he gave me this book.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-fKPdbB6TKDA/TzktuES1IjI/AAAAAAAAA8Q/CZrQdzfCKEE/s1600/cat9.jpg" imageanchor="1"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="400" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-fKPdbB6TKDA/TzktuES1IjI/AAAAAAAAA8Q/CZrQdzfCKEE/s400/cat9.jpg" width="308" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;And a warning!&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-x9khNo8Dx1c/TzkqEuXst5I/AAAAAAAAA74/C8fu7dCJBjI/s1600/cat3.tiff" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="251" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-x9khNo8Dx1c/TzkqEuXst5I/AAAAAAAAA74/C8fu7dCJBjI/s400/cat3.tiff" width="400" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&amp;nbsp;I often wonder how he was able to sum up my life in these two captions? He was just amazing!&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Oh yeah, Springfield is also where my husband and I lived right after we were married. So here’s to you, Dr. Suess &amp;amp; Springfield, MA!&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-5127851536251264341?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/5127851536251264341/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2012/02/cat-in-hat-springfield-ma.html#comment-form' title='5 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/5127851536251264341'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/5127851536251264341'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2012/02/cat-in-hat-springfield-ma.html' title='The Cat In The Hat &amp; Springfield, MA'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-2_pZAjFCGCI/TzkkmmYTAqI/AAAAAAAAA7Q/JwUuoVFNfyU/s72-c/Cat1.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>5</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-8750894050870987906</id><published>2012-02-06T13:59:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2012-02-06T13:59:01.887-05:00</updated><title type='text'>Wanted For Blazing to #1 Bestseller</title><content type='html'>&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-ANy6XXgQ3PE/TzAgq9enpBI/AAAAAAAAA7I/XjPjn-myvHo/s1600/small_img-1.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="320" src="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-ANy6XXgQ3PE/TzAgq9enpBI/AAAAAAAAA7I/XjPjn-myvHo/s320/small_img-1.jpg" width="264" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;b&gt;WANTED:&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;b&gt;A MG historical novel about 12 year-old Robyn who yearns for red-hot crucibles full of molten bronze and the roaring fires of her father's foundry. Robyn’s life changes forever the day she accidentally sets fire to the foundry,&amp;nbsp; burning it to the ground and causes her father to go up in a blaze. &lt;/b&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;script src="http://www.linkytools.com/basic_linky_include.aspx?id=128854" type="text/javascript"&gt;&lt;/script&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-8750894050870987906?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/8750894050870987906/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2012/02/wanted-for-blazing-to-1-bestseller.html#comment-form' title='3 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/8750894050870987906'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/8750894050870987906'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2012/02/wanted-for-blazing-to-1-bestseller.html' title='Wanted For Blazing to #1 Bestseller'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-ANy6XXgQ3PE/TzAgq9enpBI/AAAAAAAAA7I/XjPjn-myvHo/s72-c/small_img-1.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>3</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-3223102615368563099</id><published>2012-02-06T12:01:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2012-02-06T12:01:02.085-05:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Middle Grade Book Review'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='blogging'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Middle Grade Novels'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='middle grade fiction'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Middle Grade'/><title type='text'>Hapenny Magick by Jennifer Carson</title><content type='html'>&lt;a href="http://www.goodreads.com/book/show/12837104-hapenny-magick" style="float: left; padding-right: 20px;"&gt;&lt;img alt="Hapenny Magick" border="0" src="http://photo.goodreads.com/books/1318637854m/12837104.jpg" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.goodreads.com/book/show/12837104-hapenny-magick"&gt;Hapenny Magick&lt;/a&gt; by &lt;a href="http://www.goodreads.com/author/show/461073.Jennifer_Carson"&gt;Jennifer Carson&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;My rating: &lt;a href="http://www.goodreads.com/review/show/223461854"&gt;5 of 5 stars&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I loved this story! The illustrations are wonderful.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Maewyn may be the smallest of the small, but she has so much heart and determination on her side. When she learns the terrible secret to her brutally mean guardian, and finds out that she has magick she finds two wizards to teach her how to use it to protect the villagers she loves. Through all of her travails, Maewyn learns about friendship and family and sacrifice.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Beautifully written. If you enjoy fairytales, then you'll enjoy Hapenny Magick! &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;For more about Jennifer, go to her &lt;a href="http://www.thedragoncharmer.com/thedragoncharmer.com/My_Books%21.html" target="_blank"&gt;website&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.goodreads.com/review/list/1387047-joyce"&gt;View all my reviews&lt;/a&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-3223102615368563099?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/3223102615368563099/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2012/02/hapenny-magick-by-jennifer-carson.html#comment-form' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/3223102615368563099'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/3223102615368563099'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2012/02/hapenny-magick-by-jennifer-carson.html' title='Hapenny Magick by Jennifer Carson'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-7420033970396717538</id><published>2012-01-25T11:40:00.002-05:00</published><updated>2012-01-25T18:45:08.944-05:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='blogging'/><title type='text'>What to Say?</title><content type='html'>I always feel as though I don't have anything important to say about writing when it comes time to blog. Today I realized that this isn't true. I say so much to so many people, everyday!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I teach!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;And everyday I am asking questions, giving suggestions and talking my high school kids through writing. But I never have a moment to stop and digest what I say, I just know that when they listen and actually try some of the things I suggest, they reap the rewards of better writing. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Just what did I say to my student about writing from the place where they are most passionate?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Just now one of my students peeks into my office.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;"What are you writing?" she asks.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;"Junk!"&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;"Not you."&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;"Yes, me! I'm trying to blog about writing but I don't have anything to say"&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;"You always have something to say."&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I smirk, think she's being cheeky.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;"No, you really do."&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;"Like what? What do I tell you?"&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;She sighs and comes into my office. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;You ask me stuff?"&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;"Like what? I can't remember."&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;"Like, how does it make me feel? Why is it uncomfortable? Does it make me angry?"&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I think about this a moment.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;"Thanks!" I smile. Wish she would go so I can get back to writing this blog post. But she stays a moment longer.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;"My favorite question you ask me," she says, "is w&lt;i&gt;hat's the worst thing that can happen?&lt;/i&gt;"&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I look up from my laptop, she's grinning, we both both laugh.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;"You can always revise!"&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-7420033970396717538?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/7420033970396717538/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2012/01/what-to-say.html#comment-form' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/7420033970396717538'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/7420033970396717538'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2012/01/what-to-say.html' title='What to Say?'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-5205918674395943741</id><published>2012-01-21T12:43:00.001-05:00</published><updated>2012-01-21T12:43:26.897-05:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='story arc'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Young Adult'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='character'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='manuscript'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='revision'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Middle Grade'/><title type='text'>Revision Checklist</title><content type='html'>&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Revising is often the most dreaded part of the writing process. But having a checklist can help you in the process. Here are 10 things I think about when revising.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst" style="text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;1.&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;What is the real story that I am telling?&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;2.&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;How will my character change?&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="margin-left: 63pt; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Symbol;"&gt;·&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;Does my character get to where s/he needs to be?&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 81pt;"&gt;No – How do I make her change?&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 1.5in; text-indent: -13.5pt;"&gt;~&amp;nbsp; Introduce a crisis situation that makes my character &amp;nbsp;change.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 1.5in; text-indent: -27pt;"&gt;Yes – Do the things that happen along the way help get my character where s/he needs to be?&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 135pt; text-indent: -27pt;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst" style="text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;3.&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;What does it mean to move forward?&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="margin-left: 63pt; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Symbol;"&gt;·&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;Reveal something about the character.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="margin-left: 63pt; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Symbol;"&gt;·&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;Propel the plot.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="margin-left: 63pt; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Symbol;"&gt;·&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;Build a relationship that is important later in the book.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst" style="text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;4.&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;Summarize the things that don’t move the story forward.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="margin-left: 63pt; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Symbol;"&gt;·&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;An example of this is Charlie Brown, Linus, and Lucy speaking, but the adults always sound like, “Blah, blah, blah.” &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="margin-left: 63pt; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Symbol;"&gt;·&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;One sentence summary of the scene.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 45pt;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst" style="text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;5.&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;Is my main plot a character development arc?&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="margin-left: 63pt; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Symbol;"&gt;·&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;Subplots&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 63pt;"&gt;~&amp;nbsp; Do they fit in?&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 63pt;"&gt;~&amp;nbsp; When do they resolve?&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 63pt;"&gt;~&amp;nbsp; How do they resolve?&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst" style="text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;6.&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;Characters&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="margin-left: 63pt; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Symbol;"&gt;·&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;What are my character's quirks and personality traits?&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="margin-left: 63pt; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Symbol;"&gt;·&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;Do my secondary/minor characters grow with each appearance they make in the book?&amp;nbsp;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst" style="text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;7.&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;Dialogue&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="margin-left: 63pt; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Symbol;"&gt;·&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;Do my characters have unique voices?&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="margin-left: 63pt; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Symbol;"&gt;·&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;Do they reveal everything about their characters?&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 63pt;"&gt;An example of this is sub vs grinder (sandwich)&amp;nbsp;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 63pt;"&gt;Their socio-economic placement&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst" style="margin-left: 63pt; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Symbol;"&gt;·&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;Does the dialogue let their relationships evolve?&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="margin-left: 63pt; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Symbol;"&gt;·&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;How authentic do they sound?&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst" style="text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;8.&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;Setting and Description&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="margin-left: 63pt; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Symbol;"&gt;·&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;Picture it then brushstroke the description. Let the reader envision it, unless it must be specific. &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="margin-left: 63pt; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Symbol;"&gt;·&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;For it to be specific, it must be important later in the book. If not, take it out.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 45pt;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst" style="text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;9.&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;Wordsmith&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="margin-left: 63pt; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Symbol;"&gt;·&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;Search for commonly used, but unnecessary words. &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 63pt;"&gt;~&amp;nbsp; Examples are just, so, next, that, but.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 63pt;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;10.&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;Show, don’t tell.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-5205918674395943741?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/5205918674395943741/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2012/01/revision-checklist.html#comment-form' title='7 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/5205918674395943741'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/5205918674395943741'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2012/01/revision-checklist.html' title='Revision Checklist'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>7</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-4135752540663300598</id><published>2012-01-16T16:30:00.001-05:00</published><updated>2012-01-16T17:40:37.431-05:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Teens'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Summer reading'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Authors'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='YA historical romance'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='open submissions'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writers'/><title type='text'>YA Anthology Open to Submissions</title><content type='html'>Today Pugalicious Press posted on their blog the following, "We are looking for YA short stories to include in our first ebook anthology, titled &lt;i&gt;Timeless&lt;/i&gt;!"&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;If  your short story is &amp;nbsp;between 3000 and 7500 words and fits into the  genre of YA historical romance we want to read it. The story can include  steampunk, fantasy, or adventure, as long as it includes some  historical elements then we are interested in reading it. For more information go to &lt;a href="http://pugaliciouspress.com/"&gt;http://pugaliciouspress.com&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Submit  the whole manuscript as a Word .doc file (no .docx) by March 30, 2012,  with the subject heading: submission--YA anthology.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;b&gt;Please include a bio, publishing credits if any, and a synopsis.&lt;/b&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Good luck! And we look forward to reading your short story!&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-4135752540663300598?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/4135752540663300598/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2012/01/ya-anthology-open-to-submissions.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/4135752540663300598'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/4135752540663300598'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2012/01/ya-anthology-open-to-submissions.html' title='YA Anthology Open to Submissions'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-7640137719458462822</id><published>2012-01-04T10:41:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2012-01-04T10:41:09.006-05:00</updated><title type='text'>Hidden Talent NESCBWI</title><content type='html'>There is so much hidden talent and so many dedicated people who work behind the scenes to support the NESCBWI Spring Conference every year. The planning for each conference starts long before the preceding conference usually kicks off (2013 is already in process). So over the next several weeks, I want to introduce them to the dedicated volunteers who make the magic happen.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://kathrynhulick.com/" target="_blank"&gt;Kathryn Hulick&lt;/a&gt; is a workhorse. While I was wrapping presents and drinking eggnog, Kathryn was working on the upcoming NESCBWI 2012 Spring Conference. While I was baking cookies, Kathryn was sending out faculty contracts. While I was decorating the tree, Kathryn was collecting faculty bios. While I was lighting the menorah and eating latkes, Kathryn was answering conference question emails. Kathryn is amazing and I am just having such a wonderful time working with her. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.linkedin.com/pub/shirley-pearson/26/34a/27a" target="_blank"&gt;Shirley Pearson&lt;/a&gt; is also a amazing. Her dedication as the conference registrar is very behind the scenes. You don't see her until you arrive at the conference and walk up to the registration table, but she spends months working on the Regonline registration process and event website beforehand. So while I was doing all the holiday things, I mention above, Shirley was doing her NESCBWI Conference magic.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I just wanted to take a moment to thank them both for their dedication to NESCBWI. I've learned so much working with you both. Thanks and much gratitude!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Is there some someone that supports the NESCBWI Conference you think should be recognized for their dedication and work? Let me know. I'd like to thank them.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-7640137719458462822?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/7640137719458462822/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2012/01/hidden-talent-nescbwi.html#comment-form' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/7640137719458462822'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/7640137719458462822'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2012/01/hidden-talent-nescbwi.html' title='Hidden Talent NESCBWI'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-1554448239134096014</id><published>2011-12-06T10:18:00.003-05:00</published><updated>2011-12-11T19:20:22.930-05:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='NESCBWI'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='2012'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Conference'/><title type='text'>Co-Directing a Conference</title><content type='html'>I am so excited to be co-drecting the 2012 NESCBWI "Keeping it Real" Conference. The past eight moths have flown by and now we are truly in the throes (it's like giving birth, Really) of getting &lt;i&gt;it&lt;/i&gt; done.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I've traveled to the heart of Springfield, MA, twice, to tour the Sheraton Monarch Hotel and plan out where each workshop, academy, and event will take place. It is an amazing building, with an amazing soaring atrium, plenty of comfortable seating for intimate conversations or robust group gatherings between workshops.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;There are some excellent restaurants you can walk to if the weather is nice. Here are a few you can check out now.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="text vcard indent block" id="panel_A_2"&gt;&lt;div class="name lname" id="link_A_2"&gt;&lt;span class="pp-place-title"&gt;&lt;a href="http://maps.google.com/maps/place?cid=8585716465246814090&amp;amp;q=restaurants+in+springfield+ma&amp;amp;hl=en&amp;amp;gl=us&amp;amp;ved=0CHEQ-gswAA&amp;amp;sa=X&amp;amp;ei=z5reTsvsLsXZ8QaQ5pzvBA&amp;amp;sig2=8DIELm0pPUb6C735HItfVw"&gt;Pazzo&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/span&gt;  &lt;span class="actbar-local-wrapper"&gt;&lt;span class="actbar" id="actbar-A"&gt;&lt;span id="actbar-btns-A"&gt;&lt;span action="actbar-more" class="actbar-cmpct"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;   &lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="pp-coverphoto"&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;a href="http://maps.google.com/maps/place?cid=8585716465246814090&amp;amp;q=restaurants+in+springfield+ma&amp;amp;hl=en&amp;amp;gl=us&amp;amp;ved=0CHMQhgUwAA&amp;amp;sa=X&amp;amp;ei=z5reTsvsLsXZ8QaQ5pzvBA&amp;amp;sig2=8DIELm0pPUb6C735HItfVw"&gt; &lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;div id="photo-stack"&gt;&lt;div class="photo-shadow"&gt;&lt;div class="photo-border"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="pp-source-name pp-cover-source"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;span class="pp-headline-item pp-headline-address" dir="ltr"&gt;1000 West Columbus Avenue&lt;/span&gt;  &lt;br /&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;span class="pp-headline-item pp-headline-phone"&gt; &lt;span class="telephone" dir="ltr"&gt; &lt;nobr&gt;(413) 737-5800&lt;/nobr&gt;   &lt;/span&gt;  ‎ &lt;/span&gt;   ·  &lt;span class="pp-headline-item pp-headline-authority-page"&gt; &lt;a href="http://maps.google.com/local_url?q=http://www.pazzohof.com/&amp;amp;dq=restaurants+in+springfield+ma&amp;amp;hl=en&amp;amp;ie=UTF8&amp;amp;fb=1&amp;amp;gl=us&amp;amp;hq=restaurants&amp;amp;hnear=Springfield,+Hampden,+Massachusetts&amp;amp;sqi=2&amp;amp;t=m&amp;amp;vpsrc=6&amp;amp;fll=42.098827,-72.587399&amp;amp;fspn=0.012753,0.024312&amp;amp;st=115968771510351694523&amp;amp;rq=1&amp;amp;ev=zi&amp;amp;split=1&amp;amp;z=16&amp;amp;jsv=384c&amp;amp;mpnum=1000&amp;amp;vps=2&amp;amp;output=js&amp;amp;ved=0CHQQ5AQ&amp;amp;sa=X&amp;amp;ei=z5reTsvsLsXZ8QaQ5pzvBA&amp;amp;s=ANYYN7mJl4_OD0ObmBs_fW5oJ8jSsHPURw" target="_blank"&gt;pazzohof.com&lt;/a&gt; &lt;/span&gt;  &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="rescat-lhp2"&gt;&lt;span class="cats-teaser"&gt;Category: Italian &lt;b&gt;Restaurant&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="rescat-lhp2"&gt;&lt;span class="cats-teaser"&gt;&lt;b&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/b&gt; &lt;/span&gt;    &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;span class="pp-headline-item pp-clearfix pp-headline-review" id="pp-reviews-headline"&gt; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="rsw-pp rsw-pp-widget"&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;div class="rsw-picker" style="visibility: hidden; z-index: 999;"&gt;&lt;span class="pp-headline-item pp-clearfix pp-headline-review" id="pp-reviews-headline"&gt;&lt;span class="rsw-picker-message"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;span class="pp-headline-item pp-clearfix pp-headline-review" id="pp-reviews-headline"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="actbar-local-wrapper"&gt;&lt;span class="actbar" id="actbar-panel-A-pp"&gt;&lt;/span&gt; &lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;div class="one onmouseout" id="one_B_2"&gt;&lt;div class="lsicon"&gt;   &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="text vcard indent block" id="panel_B_2"&gt;&lt;div class="name lname" id="link_B_2"&gt;&lt;span class="pp-place-title"&gt;&lt;a href="http://maps.google.com/maps/place?cid=8583859330997630576&amp;amp;q=restaurants+in+springfield+ma&amp;amp;hl=en&amp;amp;gl=us&amp;amp;ved=0CHwQ-gswAQ&amp;amp;sa=X&amp;amp;ei=z5reTsvsLsXZ8QaQ5pzvBA&amp;amp;sig2=Rj6AECzmg6o_o67PYbjo1g"&gt;Theodore's Inc&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/span&gt;  &lt;span class="actbar-local-wrapper"&gt;&lt;span class="actbar" id="actbar-B"&gt;&lt;span id="actbar-btns-B"&gt;&lt;span action="actbar-more" class="actbar-cmpct"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;   &lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="pp-coverphoto"&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;a href="http://maps.google.com/maps/place?cid=8583859330997630576&amp;amp;q=restaurants+in+springfield+ma&amp;amp;hl=en&amp;amp;gl=us&amp;amp;ved=0CH4QhgUwAQ&amp;amp;sa=X&amp;amp;ei=z5reTsvsLsXZ8QaQ5pzvBA&amp;amp;sig2=Rj6AECzmg6o_o67PYbjo1g"&gt; &lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;div id="photo-stack"&gt;&lt;div class="photo-shadow"&gt;&lt;div class="photo-border"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="pp-source-name pp-cover-source"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;span class="pp-headline-item pp-headline-address" dir="ltr"&gt;201 Worthington Street,&lt;/span&gt;  &lt;br /&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;span class="pp-headline-item pp-headline-phone"&gt; &lt;span class="telephone" dir="ltr"&gt; &lt;nobr&gt;(413) 736-6000&lt;/nobr&gt;   &lt;/span&gt;  ‎ &lt;/span&gt;   ·  &lt;span class="pp-headline-item pp-headline-authority-page"&gt; &lt;a href="http://maps.google.com/local_url?q=http://www.theobbq.com/&amp;amp;dq=restaurants+in+springfield+ma&amp;amp;hl=en&amp;amp;ie=UTF8&amp;amp;fb=1&amp;amp;gl=us&amp;amp;hq=restaurants&amp;amp;hnear=Springfield,+Hampden,+Massachusetts&amp;amp;sqi=2&amp;amp;t=m&amp;amp;vpsrc=6&amp;amp;fll=42.098827,-72.587399&amp;amp;fspn=0.012753,0.024312&amp;amp;st=115968771510351694523&amp;amp;rq=1&amp;amp;ev=zi&amp;amp;split=1&amp;amp;z=16&amp;amp;jsv=384c&amp;amp;mpnum=1000&amp;amp;vps=2&amp;amp;output=js&amp;amp;ved=0CH8Q5AQ&amp;amp;sa=X&amp;amp;ei=z5reTsvsLsXZ8QaQ5pzvBA&amp;amp;s=ANYYN7nCgYRjvAozVbpmRFYZ7HSrCNMuRw" target="_blank"&gt;theobbq.com&lt;/a&gt; &lt;/span&gt;  &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="rescat-lhp2"&gt;&lt;span class="cats-teaser"&gt;Category: Barbecue &lt;b&gt;Restaurant&lt;/b&gt; &lt;/span&gt;    &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;span class="pp-headline-item pp-clearfix pp-headline-review" id="pp-reviews-headline"&gt; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="rsw-pp rsw-pp-widget"&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;div class="rsw-picker" style="visibility: hidden; z-index: 999;"&gt;&lt;span class="pp-headline-item pp-clearfix pp-headline-review" id="pp-reviews-headline"&gt;&lt;span class="rsw-picker-message"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;span class="pp-headline-item pp-clearfix pp-headline-review" id="pp-reviews-headline"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span class="pp-headline-item pp-clearfix pp-headline-review" id="pp-reviews-headline"&gt; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;div class="pp-story pp-description" id="pp-desc-ssj"&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;nobr&gt;&lt;span class="pp-hover-attribution"&gt; &lt;/span&gt; &lt;/nobr&gt; &lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="actbar-local-wrapper"&gt;&lt;span class="actbar" id="actbar-panel-B-pp"&gt;&lt;/span&gt; &lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;div class="one onmouseout" id="one_C_2"&gt;&lt;div class="lsicon"&gt;   &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="text vcard indent block" id="panel_C_2"&gt;&lt;div class="name lname" id="link_C_2"&gt;&lt;span class="pp-place-title"&gt;&lt;a href="http://maps.google.com/maps/place?cid=3516765149373016131&amp;amp;q=restaurants+in+springfield+ma&amp;amp;hl=en&amp;amp;gl=us&amp;amp;ved=0CIYBEPoLMAI&amp;amp;sa=X&amp;amp;ei=z5reTsvsLsXZ8QaQ5pzvBA&amp;amp;sig2=527fIj7kaeRt-J63yv8P6Q"&gt;Nadim's Mediterranean &lt;b&gt;Restaurant&lt;/b&gt; &amp;amp; Grill&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/span&gt;  &lt;span class="actbar-local-wrapper"&gt;&lt;span class="actbar" id="actbar-C"&gt;&lt;span id="actbar-btns-C"&gt;&lt;span action="actbar-more" class="actbar-cmpct"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;    &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;span class="pp-headline-item pp-headline-address" dir="ltr"&gt;1390 Main Street&lt;/span&gt;  &lt;br /&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;span class="pp-headline-item pp-headline-phone"&gt; &lt;span class="telephone" dir="ltr"&gt; &lt;nobr&gt;(413) 737-7373&lt;/nobr&gt;   &lt;/span&gt;  ‎ &lt;/span&gt;   ·  &lt;span class="pp-headline-item pp-headline-authority-page"&gt; &lt;a href="http://maps.google.com/local_url?q=http://www.nadimsmediterranean.com/&amp;amp;dq=restaurants+in+springfield+ma&amp;amp;hl=en&amp;amp;ie=UTF8&amp;amp;fb=1&amp;amp;gl=us&amp;amp;hq=restaurants&amp;amp;hnear=Springfield,+Hampden,+Massachusetts&amp;amp;sqi=2&amp;amp;t=m&amp;amp;vpsrc=6&amp;amp;fll=42.098827,-72.587399&amp;amp;fspn=0.012753,0.024312&amp;amp;st=115968771510351694523&amp;amp;rq=1&amp;amp;ev=zi&amp;amp;split=1&amp;amp;z=16&amp;amp;jsv=384c&amp;amp;mpnum=1000&amp;amp;vps=2&amp;amp;output=js&amp;amp;ved=0CIcBEOQE&amp;amp;sa=X&amp;amp;ei=z5reTsvsLsXZ8QaQ5pzvBA&amp;amp;s=ANYYN7lNoAWdaxTC3BktkeUX9BU7aOkZwQ" target="_blank"&gt;nadimsmediterranean.com&lt;/a&gt; &lt;/span&gt;  &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;div&gt;Middle Eastern · Lebanese · Eastern cuisine&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;nobr&gt;&lt;span class="pp-hover-attribution"&gt; &lt;/span&gt; &lt;/nobr&gt; &lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div align="left"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="pp-story pp-description" id="pp-desc-ssj"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="actbar-local-wrapper"&gt;&lt;span class="actbar" id="actbar-panel-C-pp"&gt;&lt;/span&gt; &lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;div class="one onmouseout" id="one_D_2"&gt;&lt;div class="lsicon"&gt;   &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="text vcard indent block" id="panel_D_2"&gt;&lt;div class="name lname" id="link_D_2"&gt;&lt;span class="pp-place-title"&gt;&lt;a href="http://maps.google.com/maps/place?cid=16922592581423952729&amp;amp;q=restaurants+in+springfield+ma&amp;amp;hl=en&amp;amp;gl=us&amp;amp;ved=0CI4BEPoLMAM&amp;amp;sa=X&amp;amp;ei=z5reTsvsLsXZ8QaQ5pzvBA&amp;amp;sig2=m5KvqGqkpZTAH0m7dUGWVA"&gt;Sitar &lt;b&gt;Restaurant&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/span&gt;  &lt;span class="actbar-local-wrapper"&gt;&lt;span class="actbar" id="actbar-D"&gt;&lt;span id="actbar-btns-D"&gt;&lt;span action="actbar-more" class="actbar-cmpct"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;   &lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="pp-coverphoto"&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;a href="http://maps.google.com/maps/place?cid=16922592581423952729&amp;amp;q=restaurants+in+springfield+ma&amp;amp;hl=en&amp;amp;gl=us&amp;amp;ved=0CJABEIYFMAM&amp;amp;sa=X&amp;amp;ei=z5reTsvsLsXZ8QaQ5pzvBA&amp;amp;sig2=m5KvqGqkpZTAH0m7dUGWVA"&gt; 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&lt;/span&gt;  &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;div class="pp-headline-item pp-knownforterms" dir="ltr"&gt;spices · tandoori · curry&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div align="left"&gt; &lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="pp-story pp-description" id="pp-desc-ssj"&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;nobr&gt;&lt;span class="pp-hover-attribution"&gt; &lt;/span&gt; &lt;/nobr&gt; &lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="actbar-local-wrapper"&gt;&lt;span class="actbar" id="actbar-panel-D-pp"&gt;&lt;/span&gt; &lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;div class="one onmouseout" id="one_E_2"&gt;&lt;div class="lsicon"&gt;   &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="text vcard indent block" id="panel_E_2"&gt;&lt;div class="name lname" id="link_E_2"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="name lname" id="link_E_2"&gt;&lt;span class="pp-place-title"&gt;&lt;a href="http://maps.google.com/maps/place?cid=6201314137778380187&amp;amp;q=restaurants+in+springfield+ma&amp;amp;hl=en&amp;amp;gl=us&amp;amp;ved=0CJgBEPoLMAQ&amp;amp;sa=X&amp;amp;ei=z5reTsvsLsXZ8QaQ5pzvBA&amp;amp;sig2=sDra10FbxssbBz1OxUlk9A"&gt;Max's Tavern&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/span&gt; 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&lt;nobr&gt;(413) 746-6299&lt;/nobr&gt;   &lt;/span&gt;  ‎ &lt;/span&gt;   ·  &lt;span class="pp-headline-item pp-headline-authority-page"&gt; &lt;a href="http://maps.google.com/local_url?q=http://www.maxtavern.com/&amp;amp;dq=restaurants+in+springfield+ma&amp;amp;hl=en&amp;amp;ie=UTF8&amp;amp;fb=1&amp;amp;gl=us&amp;amp;hq=restaurants&amp;amp;hnear=Springfield,+Hampden,+Massachusetts&amp;amp;sqi=2&amp;amp;t=m&amp;amp;vpsrc=6&amp;amp;fll=42.098827,-72.587399&amp;amp;fspn=0.012753,0.024312&amp;amp;st=115968771510351694523&amp;amp;rq=1&amp;amp;ev=zi&amp;amp;split=1&amp;amp;z=16&amp;amp;jsv=384c&amp;amp;mpnum=1000&amp;amp;vps=2&amp;amp;output=js&amp;amp;ved=0CJsBEOQE&amp;amp;sa=X&amp;amp;ei=z5reTsvsLsXZ8QaQ5pzvBA&amp;amp;s=ANYYN7mmjnXoVdBtQZZhAf_nwvcbEZOZlg" target="_blank"&gt;maxtavern.com&lt;/a&gt; &lt;/span&gt;  &lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="actbar-local-wrapper"&gt;&lt;span class="actbar" id="actbar-panel-E-pp"&gt;&lt;/span&gt; &lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;div class="one onmouseout" id="one_F_2"&gt;&lt;div class="lsicon"&gt; 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 &lt;br /&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;span class="pp-headline-item pp-headline-phone"&gt; &lt;span class="telephone" dir="ltr"&gt; &lt;nobr&gt;(413) 788-6628&lt;/nobr&gt;   &lt;/span&gt;  ‎ &lt;/span&gt;   ·  &lt;span class="pp-headline-item pp-headline-authority-page"&gt; &lt;a href="http://maps.google.com/local_url?q=http://www.studentprince.com/&amp;amp;dq=restaurants+in+springfield+ma&amp;amp;hl=en&amp;amp;ie=UTF8&amp;amp;fb=1&amp;amp;gl=us&amp;amp;hq=restaurants&amp;amp;hnear=Springfield,+Hampden,+Massachusetts&amp;amp;sqi=2&amp;amp;t=m&amp;amp;vpsrc=6&amp;amp;fll=42.098827,-72.587399&amp;amp;fspn=0.012753,0.024312&amp;amp;st=115968771510351694523&amp;amp;rq=1&amp;amp;ev=zi&amp;amp;split=1&amp;amp;z=16&amp;amp;jsv=384c&amp;amp;mpnum=1000&amp;amp;vps=2&amp;amp;output=js&amp;amp;ved=0CKYBEOQE&amp;amp;sa=X&amp;amp;ei=z5reTsvsLsXZ8QaQ5pzvBA&amp;amp;s=ANYYN7lg8BEwotY9URlBTt27Qmcbnk0g9Q" target="_blank"&gt;studentprince.com&lt;/a&gt; &lt;/span&gt;  &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="rescat-lhp2"&gt;&lt;span class="cats-teaser"&gt;Category: German Restaurant Deli&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="rescat-lhp2"&gt;&lt;span class="cats-teaser"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt; 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  &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="text vcard indent block" id="panel_G_2"&gt;&lt;div class="name lname" id="link_G_2"&gt;&lt;span class="pp-place-title"&gt;&lt;a href="http://maps.google.com/maps/place?cid=15417038801788723050&amp;amp;q=restaurants+in+springfield+ma&amp;amp;hl=en&amp;amp;gl=us&amp;amp;ved=0CK0BEPoLMAY&amp;amp;sa=X&amp;amp;ei=z5reTsvsLsXZ8QaQ5pzvBA&amp;amp;sig2=xujmTyS1H7A9gMOkOm94qw"&gt;Montenia's&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/span&gt;  &lt;span class="actbar-local-wrapper"&gt;&lt;span class="actbar" id="actbar-G"&gt;&lt;span id="actbar-btns-G"&gt;&lt;span action="actbar-more" class="actbar-cmpct"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;    &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;span class="pp-headline-item pp-headline-address" dir="ltr"&gt;137 State Street&lt;/span&gt;  &lt;br /&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;span class="pp-headline-item pp-headline-phone"&gt; &lt;span class="telephone" dir="ltr"&gt; &lt;nobr&gt;(413) 301-6286&lt;/nobr&gt;   &lt;/span&gt;  ‎ &lt;/span&gt;   ·  &lt;span class="pp-headline-item pp-headline-authority-page"&gt; &lt;a href="http://maps.google.com/local_url?q=http://www.montenia.net/&amp;amp;dq=restaurants+in+springfield+ma&amp;amp;hl=en&amp;amp;ie=UTF8&amp;amp;fb=1&amp;amp;gl=us&amp;amp;hq=restaurants&amp;amp;hnear=Springfield,+Hampden,+Massachusetts&amp;amp;sqi=2&amp;amp;t=m&amp;amp;vpsrc=6&amp;amp;fll=42.098827,-72.587399&amp;amp;fspn=0.012753,0.024312&amp;amp;st=115968771510351694523&amp;amp;rq=1&amp;amp;ev=zi&amp;amp;split=1&amp;amp;z=16&amp;amp;jsv=384c&amp;amp;mpnum=1000&amp;amp;vps=2&amp;amp;output=js&amp;amp;ved=0CK4BEOQE&amp;amp;sa=X&amp;amp;ei=z5reTsvsLsXZ8QaQ5pzvBA&amp;amp;s=ANYYN7kKka1lrmaIcTDumCNjoLON8Uv3xQ" target="_blank"&gt;montenia.net&lt;/a&gt; &lt;/span&gt;  &lt;/div&gt;&lt;span class="pp-headline-item pp-clearfix pp-headline-review" id="pp-reviews-headline"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;  &lt;br /&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;div class="pp-headline-item pp-knownforterms" dir="ltr"&gt;Down Home - sweet potato pie · mac and cheese · soul food · comfort cuisine · the ribs&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div align="left"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div align="left"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="pp-story pp-description" id="pp-desc-ssj"&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;nobr&gt;&lt;span class="pp-hover-attribution"&gt; &lt;/span&gt; &lt;/nobr&gt; &lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="actbar-local-wrapper"&gt;&lt;span class="actbar" id="actbar-panel-G-pp"&gt;&lt;/span&gt; &lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;div class="one onmouseout" id="one_H_2"&gt;&lt;div class="lsicon"&gt;   &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="text vcard indent block" id="panel_H_2"&gt;&lt;div class="name lname" id="link_H_2"&gt;&lt;span class="pp-place-title"&gt;&lt;a href="http://maps.google.com/maps/place?cid=6306844443852284070&amp;amp;q=restaurants+in+springfield+ma&amp;amp;hl=en&amp;amp;gl=us&amp;amp;ved=0CLUBEPoLMAc&amp;amp;sa=X&amp;amp;ei=z5reTsvsLsXZ8QaQ5pzvBA&amp;amp;sig2=K9OgNQOS5QvJVygX92faXg"&gt;Dillweedz Cafe&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/span&gt;  &lt;span class="actbar-local-wrapper"&gt;&lt;span class="actbar" id="actbar-H"&gt;&lt;span id="actbar-btns-H"&gt;&lt;span action="actbar-more" class="actbar-cmpct"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;   &lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="pp-coverphoto"&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;a href="http://maps.google.com/maps/place?cid=6306844443852284070&amp;amp;q=restaurants+in+springfield+ma&amp;amp;hl=en&amp;amp;gl=us&amp;amp;ved=0CLcBEIYFMAc&amp;amp;sa=X&amp;amp;ei=z5reTsvsLsXZ8QaQ5pzvBA&amp;amp;sig2=K9OgNQOS5QvJVygX92faXg"&gt; &lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;div id="photo-stack"&gt;&lt;div class="photo-shadow"&gt;&lt;div class="photo-border"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="pp-source-name pp-cover-source"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;span class="pp-headline-item pp-headline-address" dir="ltr"&gt;91 State St.&lt;/span&gt;  &lt;br /&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;span class="pp-headline-item pp-headline-phone"&gt; &lt;span class="telephone" dir="ltr"&gt; &lt;nobr&gt;(413) 306-3151&lt;/nobr&gt;   &lt;/span&gt;  ‎ &lt;/span&gt;   ·  &lt;span class="pp-headline-item pp-headline-authority-page"&gt; &lt;a href="http://maps.google.com/local_url?q=www.dillweedzcafe.com/&amp;amp;dq=restaurants+in+springfield+ma&amp;amp;hl=en&amp;amp;ie=UTF8&amp;amp;fb=1&amp;amp;gl=us&amp;amp;hq=restaurants&amp;amp;hnear=Springfield,+Hampden,+Massachusetts&amp;amp;sqi=2&amp;amp;t=m&amp;amp;vpsrc=6&amp;amp;fll=42.098827,-72.587399&amp;amp;fspn=0.012753,0.024312&amp;amp;st=115968771510351694523&amp;amp;rq=1&amp;amp;ev=zi&amp;amp;split=1&amp;amp;z=16&amp;amp;jsv=384c&amp;amp;mpnum=1000&amp;amp;vps=2&amp;amp;output=js&amp;amp;ved=0CLgBEOQE&amp;amp;sa=X&amp;amp;ei=z5reTsvsLsXZ8QaQ5pzvBA&amp;amp;s=ANYYN7kpTjfA6ze_0f0mjYwg0MS3IbKfNQ" target="_blank"&gt;dillweedzcafe.com&lt;/a&gt; &lt;/span&gt;  &lt;/div&gt;&lt;span class="pp-headline-item pp-clearfix pp-headline-review" id="pp-reviews-headline"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;    &lt;br /&gt;&lt;div align="left"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div align="left"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="pp-story pp-description" id="pp-desc-ssj"&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;nobr&gt;&lt;span class="pp-hover-attribution"&gt; &lt;/span&gt; &lt;/nobr&gt; &lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="actbar-local-wrapper"&gt;&lt;span class="actbar" id="actbar-panel-H-pp"&gt;&lt;/span&gt; &lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;div class="one onmouseout" id="one_I_2"&gt;&lt;div class="lsicon"&gt;   &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="text vcard indent block" id="panel_I_2"&gt;&lt;div class="name lname" id="link_I_2"&gt;&lt;span class="pp-place-title"&gt;&lt;a href="http://maps.google.com/maps/place?cid=10602938354102937691&amp;amp;q=restaurants+in+springfield+ma&amp;amp;hl=en&amp;amp;gl=us&amp;amp;ved=0CL8BEPoLMAg&amp;amp;sa=X&amp;amp;ei=z5reTsvsLsXZ8QaQ5pzvBA&amp;amp;sig2=GMG4QLrsylHBuEIQeYCQsg"&gt;Cornerstone Cafe&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/span&gt;  &lt;span class="actbar-local-wrapper"&gt;&lt;span class="actbar" id="actbar-I"&gt;&lt;span id="actbar-btns-I"&gt;&lt;span action="actbar-more" class="actbar-cmpct"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;   &lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="pp-coverphoto"&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;a href="http://maps.google.com/maps/place?cid=10602938354102937691&amp;amp;q=restaurants+in+springfield+ma&amp;amp;hl=en&amp;amp;gl=us&amp;amp;ved=0CMEBEIYFMAg&amp;amp;sa=X&amp;amp;ei=z5reTsvsLsXZ8QaQ5pzvBA&amp;amp;sig2=GMG4QLrsylHBuEIQeYCQsg"&gt; &lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;div id="photo-stack"&gt;&lt;div class="photo-shadow"&gt;&lt;div class="photo-border"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="pp-source-name pp-cover-source"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;span class="pp-headline-item pp-headline-address" dir="ltr"&gt;1414 Main Street&lt;/span&gt;  &lt;br /&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;span class="pp-headline-item pp-headline-phone"&gt; &lt;span class="telephone" dir="ltr"&gt; &lt;nobr&gt;(413) 746-1025&lt;/nobr&gt;   &lt;/span&gt;  ‎ &lt;/span&gt;   ·  &lt;span class="pp-headline-item pp-headline-authority-page"&gt; &lt;a href="http://maps.google.com/local_url?q=http://www.cornerstonecafe.net/&amp;amp;dq=restaurants+in+springfield+ma&amp;amp;hl=en&amp;amp;ie=UTF8&amp;amp;fb=1&amp;amp;gl=us&amp;amp;hq=restaurants&amp;amp;hnear=Springfield,+Hampden,+Massachusetts&amp;amp;sqi=2&amp;amp;t=m&amp;amp;vpsrc=6&amp;amp;fll=42.098827,-72.587399&amp;amp;fspn=0.012753,0.024312&amp;amp;st=115968771510351694523&amp;amp;rq=1&amp;amp;ev=zi&amp;amp;split=1&amp;amp;z=16&amp;amp;jsv=384c&amp;amp;mpnum=1000&amp;amp;vps=2&amp;amp;output=js&amp;amp;ved=0CMIBEOQE&amp;amp;sa=X&amp;amp;ei=z5reTsvsLsXZ8QaQ5pzvBA&amp;amp;s=ANYYN7mxpcXeavxn6g3k-mT6OBuGJla0DQ" target="_blank"&gt;cornerstonecafe.net&lt;/a&gt; &lt;/span&gt;  &lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;span class="pp-headline-item pp-clearfix pp-headline-review" id="pp-reviews-headline"&gt;&lt;/span&gt; &lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="actbar-local-wrapper"&gt;&lt;span class="actbar" id="actbar-panel-I-pp"&gt;&lt;/span&gt; &lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="lsicon"&gt;   &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="name lname" id="link_J_2"&gt;&lt;span class="pp-place-title"&gt;&lt;a href="http://maps.google.com/maps/place?cid=16784448513105691670&amp;amp;q=restaurants+in+springfield+ma&amp;amp;hl=en&amp;amp;gl=us&amp;amp;ved=0CMkBEPoLMAk&amp;amp;sa=X&amp;amp;ei=z5reTsvsLsXZ8QaQ5pzvBA&amp;amp;sig2=G_Gwc_PfkU8UcIBfjmCQnQ"&gt;Tower Grill&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/span&gt;  &lt;span class="actbar-local-wrapper"&gt;&lt;span class="actbar" id="actbar-J"&gt;&lt;span id="actbar-btns-J"&gt;&lt;span action="actbar-more" class="actbar-cmpct"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;    &lt;/div&gt;&lt;span class="pp-headline-item pp-headline-address" dir="ltr"&gt;1500 Main Street, Springfield, MA&lt;/span&gt;  &lt;br /&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;span class="pp-headline-hierarchies"&gt;  &lt;span class="pp-place-title"&gt;&lt;a href="http://maps.google.com/maps/place?cid=13404303643127937203&amp;amp;q=restaurants+in+springfield+ma&amp;amp;hl=en&amp;amp;gl=us&amp;amp;ved=0CMoBEP4M&amp;amp;sa=X&amp;amp;ei=z5reTsvsLsXZ8QaQ5pzvBA"&gt;Tower Square Parking Garage&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/span&gt;   &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;span class="pp-headline-item pp-headline-phone"&gt; &lt;span class="telephone" dir="ltr"&gt; &lt;nobr&gt;(413) 746-9435&lt;/nobr&gt;   &lt;/span&gt;  ‎ &lt;/span&gt;  &lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The train and bus stations are approximately 4 blocks from the hotel. So get planning! Want to reserve your room now? Go to &lt;a href="http://www.blogger.com/goog_1192721769" target="_blank"&gt;NESCBWI 2012 Conference,&lt;/a&gt;&lt;a href="https://www.starwoodmeeting.com/StarGroupsWeb/booking/reservation?id=1111011124&amp;amp;key=ACB13" target="_blank"&gt; Springfield, MA&lt;/a&gt;. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;See you in April!&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-1554448239134096014?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/1554448239134096014/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/12/co-directing-conference.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/1554448239134096014'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/1554448239134096014'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/12/co-directing-conference.html' title='Co-Directing a Conference'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-5153409562281907481</id><published>2011-12-01T09:00:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2011-12-01T09:00:59.644-05:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='small press'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='bronze casting'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='kickstarter'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='awesomness'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='middle grade fiction'/><title type='text'>22 Days Until 50!</title><content type='html'>&lt;div style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;That's right, I turn 50 in 22 days! Kind of shocking when I think about it. So many thoughts are racing around in the old gray matter but I won't go there now.&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;What I really want for my birthday, is for my friends and and family to pledge $15 and support my kickstarter Book Project, &lt;a href="http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/joycejohnson/the-casting-an-ancient-adventure" target="_blank"&gt;&lt;i&gt;The Casting&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/a&gt;. Not matter what happens, this book is debuting on April 1, 2012.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;Spending $15 gets you a dedicated and signed softcover copy ($25 gets you a hard cover copy), and some other awesome swag! Please make an old lady happy, and pledge $15 today!&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;Don't make me beg, it might get ugly.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;Please!&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;iframe frameborder="0" height="410px" src="http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/joycejohnson/the-casting-an-ancient-adventure/widget/video.html" width="480px"&gt;&lt;/iframe&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div style="background-color: white; color: #674ea7;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: large;"&gt;&lt;i&gt;&lt;b style="background-color: white; 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Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-2157628274204310567</id><published>2011-11-09T12:55:00.002-05:00</published><updated>2011-11-10T12:11:36.093-05:00</updated><title type='text'>Get More When You Give</title><content type='html'>It is a real pleasure being interviewed by Kristine Carlson Asselin for her blog, &lt;a href="http://krisasselin.blogspot.com/" target="_blank"&gt;Writing. For Real. &lt;/a&gt;Actually, she gave me a gift.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I found myself reflecting on the reasons for starting a small press. I realize that for me, much of it has been because books have always been available to me. My parents, although they never gave my sister, brother, or I any homework support, they did give us books. I may not have been the best student, but I could read and read well. My comprehension of any material I read, was reinforced by the follow up conversations I had with my parents about what I was reading.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I taught myself so many things by reading how-to books, and travel guides. If I was interested in something, I'd walk to the library and find a book. I learned about Machiavelli, and Plato, read about the American Revolution, learned how Penicillin was discovered by Alexander Fleming in 1928, and learned the names and legends of the constellations; all from the books I read. I loved getting lost in a new world or imagine I was the main character having a grand adventure. Sometimes I still do!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I love to turn pages and feel the paper between my fingers and miss this tactile element when I read on my Kindle.&lt;br /&gt;You can find the submission guidelines for Pugalicious Press &lt;a href="http://pugaliciouspress.com/submissions" target="_blank"&gt;here&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://pugaliciouspress.com/submissions/" target="_blank"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/--VTjRdohvj8/Trq9p4X0MXI/AAAAAAAAAR4/kIdmUV0QVdE/s1600/avatarpug.png" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-2157628274204310567?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/2157628274204310567/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/11/thank-you-kris.html#comment-form' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/2157628274204310567'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/2157628274204310567'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/11/thank-you-kris.html' title='Get More When You Give'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/--VTjRdohvj8/Trq9p4X0MXI/AAAAAAAAAR4/kIdmUV0QVdE/s72-c/avatarpug.png' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-4763829704689335028</id><published>2011-11-04T08:53:00.001-04:00</published><updated>2011-11-04T09:15:05.403-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Young Adult Novels'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Weekend Reads'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Matched'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Books'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='book covers'/><title type='text'>Matched</title><content type='html'>When I walked into the house, &lt;a href="http://www.amazon.com/Crossed-Matched-Ally-Condie/dp/0525423656/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&amp;amp;qid=1320410429&amp;amp;sr=8-1" target="_blank"&gt;Crossed&lt;/a&gt; by Allie Condie was on the kitchen island waiting for me.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-fH4bNH3ye4s/TrPdmgUiaRI/AAAAAAAAARw/fP3pXwHqo8E/s1600/41NJxpxCYoL._AA160_.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="200" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-fH4bNH3ye4s/TrPdmgUiaRI/AAAAAAAAARw/fP3pXwHqo8E/s200/41NJxpxCYoL._AA160_.jpg" width="200" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;My kids, both book lovers, were calling dibs before I could even rip the plastic wrap from it. Before I could enjoy the cover.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I smoothly and very mom-like, swatted away their grubby, little book-stealing hands, ran from the room and hid it from them until I can start reading.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I plan on reading it this weekend. Maybe, I'll start it tonight and read it straight through the night until finished. It's been a very long time since I've done that.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;What are you reading this weekend?&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-4763829704689335028?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/4763829704689335028/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/11/early-arrival.html#comment-form' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/4763829704689335028'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/4763829704689335028'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/11/early-arrival.html' title='Matched'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-fH4bNH3ye4s/TrPdmgUiaRI/AAAAAAAAARw/fP3pXwHqo8E/s72-c/41NJxpxCYoL._AA160_.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-4579604643754074265</id><published>2011-11-02T08:44:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2011-11-02T08:44:32.285-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Editor'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Books'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='craft'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Historical Fiction'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Picture Books'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Illustrating'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Agents'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Authors'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Illustrators'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='MG'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Conferences'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Conference'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Middle Grade Novels'/><title type='text'>NESCBWI 2012 Conference</title><content type='html'>&lt;style&gt;&lt;!-- /* Font Definitions */@font-face {font-family:"ＭＳ 明朝"; 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text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-MyYZAu0TKlA/TqSSCK2tadI/AAAAAAAAAQI/NHNRYyyGViA/s1600/2012SCBWI-final-front-sig.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="258" src="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-MyYZAu0TKlA/TqSSCK2tadI/AAAAAAAAAQI/NHNRYyyGViA/s400/2012SCBWI-final-front-sig.jpg" width="400" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div style="text-align: center;"&gt;But ... if you turn it over...&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-mK75Iqf9oSo/TqSbV6ltT7I/AAAAAAAAAQg/JWt8_59f9Vo/s1600/arrow-3D-green-down.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-mK75Iqf9oSo/TqSbV6ltT7I/AAAAAAAAAQg/JWt8_59f9Vo/s1600/arrow-3D-green-down.jpg" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-mK75Iqf9oSo/TqSbV6ltT7I/AAAAAAAAAQg/JWt8_59f9Vo/s1600/arrow-3D-green-down.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-mK75Iqf9oSo/TqSbV6ltT7I/AAAAAAAAAQg/JWt8_59f9Vo/s1600/arrow-3D-green-down.jpg" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-mK75Iqf9oSo/TqSbV6ltT7I/AAAAAAAAAQg/JWt8_59f9Vo/s1600/arrow-3D-green-down.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-mK75Iqf9oSo/TqSbV6ltT7I/AAAAAAAAAQg/JWt8_59f9Vo/s1600/arrow-3D-green-down.jpg" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div style="text-align: center;"&gt;You will see what's happening in April 20-22, 2012 at the &lt;span class="st"&gt;&lt;em&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Sheraton Springfield&lt;/em&gt; Monarch Place, Springfield, MA.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-Ypz2-m0k9w4/TqSTaCPANqI/AAAAAAAAAQY/2lLP0KvC9AY/s1600/2012SCBWIfinal-back.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="257" src="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-Ypz2-m0k9w4/TqSTaCPANqI/AAAAAAAAAQY/2lLP0KvC9AY/s400/2012SCBWIfinal-back.jpg" width="400" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div style="text-align: left;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-3500378325380573999?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/3500378325380573999/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/10/nescbwi-2012-conference-invitation.html#comment-form' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/3500378325380573999'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/3500378325380573999'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/10/nescbwi-2012-conference-invitation.html' title='NESCBWI 2012 Conference Invitation'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-MyYZAu0TKlA/TqSSCK2tadI/AAAAAAAAAQI/NHNRYyyGViA/s72-c/2012SCBWI-final-front-sig.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-6941179058199476113</id><published>2011-10-23T20:50:00.005-04:00</published><updated>2011-10-25T14:24:25.691-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Illustrators'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Books'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Picture Books'/><title type='text'>Calling All Illustrators! Ilustrators Day 11/19/2011</title><content type='html'>&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;Casey Girard (your new Illustrator Coordinator) and Anna Boll (Northern  New England Regional Advisor) are thrilled to announce Illustrator Day!&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;When: Saturday, November 19, 2011 (I know it?s short notice. Quick, go  sign up!)&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;Time: &lt;span style="color: blue;"&gt;1:00-6:00&lt;/span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;Where: Emma Blood French Auditorium (The French Building) on the New  Hampshire Institute of Art campus in Manchester, NH.&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="color: #e69138;"&gt;NEW ~ PRIZES! &lt;/span&gt;That's right you could with some cool illustrator stuff.&lt;br /&gt;Sketchbooks, drawing supplies, even a copy of Pocketful of Posies - A treasury of Nursery Rhymes By &lt;a href="http://www.indiebound.org/search/apachesolr_search/field_contributor_name:Salley+Mavor"&gt;Salley Mavor&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.indiebound.org/search/apachesolr_search/field_contributor_name:Salley+Mavor"&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;Registration: &lt;a href="https://docs.google.com/spreadsheet/viewform?formkey=dEthYUtSTl80bGVMQ1VqenNIVllrV0E6MQ"&gt;Click Here!&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;a href="http://tinyurl.com/illustratorday-registration" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;" target="_blank"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;The schedule for Illustrator Day 2011 will be as follows:&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;span style="color: blue;"&gt;1:00-1:30&lt;/span&gt; Registration&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;span style="color: blue;"&gt;1:30&lt;/span&gt; Welcome&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;span style="color: blue;"&gt;1:45-2:45&lt;/span&gt; Keynote: Salley Mavor, Golden Kite Winner 2011&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;span style="color: #674ea7;"&gt;5 min break&lt;/span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;span style="color: blue;"&gt;2:50-3:50&lt;/span&gt; Carol Goldenberg, Award Winning Book Designer&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div style="color: #674ea7;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;25 min snack break&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;span style="color: blue;"&gt;4:15-5:00&lt;/span&gt; Repeat of Carlyn Beccia and Jennifer Morris' Digital Painting Duels from NESCBWI Spring 2011 Conference&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div style="color: #674ea7;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;5 min break&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;span style="color: blue;"&gt;5:00-6:00&lt;/span&gt; continued Digital Painting Duels&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;You can find a map &lt;a href="http://www.nhia.edu/directions-hours-2/"&gt;Here!&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Arial,Verdana,Times; font-size: 12px;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;" /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt; To register and for additional information follow this link: &lt;/span&gt;&lt;a href="http://tinyurl.com/illustratorday-registration" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;" target="_blank"&gt;http://tinyurl.com/&lt;wbr&gt;&lt;/wbr&gt;illustratorday-registration&lt;/a&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Arial,Verdana,Times; font-size: 12px;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;Registration Fees for SCBWI Members and Students: $50 all day Public Registration Fee: $75 all day. &lt;/span&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;" /&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;" /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt; Send your check to Anna Boll at 17 Rich Rd. Brunswick, ME 04011, or you can pay at the door.&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Arial,Verdana,Times; font-size: 12px;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;More questions? Anna: &lt;/span&gt;&lt;a href="mailto:NorthernNERA@nescbwi.org" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;" target="_blank"&gt;NorthernNERA@nescbwi.org&lt;/a&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt; or Casey: &lt;/span&gt;&lt;a href="mailto:casey.girard@gmail.com" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;" target="_blank"&gt;casey.girard@gmail.com&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/span&gt;      &lt;/span&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-6941179058199476113?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/6941179058199476113/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/10/calling-all-illustrators-ilustrators.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/6941179058199476113'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/6941179058199476113'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/10/calling-all-illustrators-ilustrators.html' title='Calling All Illustrators! Ilustrators Day 11/19/2011'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-303008007429579057</id><published>2011-10-18T16:21:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2011-10-18T16:21:15.013-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Adventure'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='book covers'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Fantasy'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Middle Grade Novels'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writers'/><title type='text'>Kickstart a Dream!</title><content type='html'>&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;A close friend of mine, you may even know &lt;a href="http://www.thedragoncharmer.com/thedragoncharmer.com/About_Me.html"&gt;her&lt;/a&gt;, is looking for funding on &lt;a href="http://kickstarter.com/"&gt;Kickstarter.com&lt;/a&gt; to fund a fantastic middle grade book project. Check it out and think about giving!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;table cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="float: left; margin-right: 1em; text-align: left;"&gt;&lt;tbody&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td style="text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-uAFceYDQMiU/Tp3czb1P5XI/AAAAAAAAAPk/WmVafbKrPq4/s1600/shapeimage_3.png" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="200" src="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-uAFceYDQMiU/Tp3czb1P5XI/AAAAAAAAAPk/WmVafbKrPq4/s200/shapeimage_3.png" width="195" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"&gt;Jennifer Carson&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/tbody&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-ykvEG_LrrI4/Tp3dE38wMdI/AAAAAAAAAPs/mcEeMC5_wIA/s1600/To+Find+A+Wonder+sm-1.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;Jen's first book &lt;i&gt;&lt;b&gt;To Find A Wonder&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/i&gt;, was published by from LL Dreamspell.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-ykvEG_LrrI4/Tp3dE38wMdI/AAAAAAAAAPs/mcEeMC5_wIA/s1600/To+Find+A+Wonder+sm-1.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-ykvEG_LrrI4/Tp3dE38wMdI/AAAAAAAAAPs/mcEeMC5_wIA/s1600/To+Find+A+Wonder+sm-1.jpg" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Her second book &lt;a href="http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/jennifercarson/hapenny-magick-a-story-with-humor-and-heart?ref=live"&gt;&lt;i&gt;Hapenny Magick&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/a&gt;, with help from wonderful supporters, will be published through Pugalicious Press.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-Wc7abvxXmJQ/Tp3fPrlw-vI/AAAAAAAAAP8/cazGJn7PbS4/s1600/-1.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="200" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-Wc7abvxXmJQ/Tp3fPrlw-vI/AAAAAAAAAP8/cazGJn7PbS4/s200/-1.jpg" width="128" /&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;a href="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-Wc7abvxXmJQ/Tp3fPrlw-vI/AAAAAAAAAP8/cazGJn7PbS4/s1600/-1.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;a href="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-Wc7abvxXmJQ/Tp3fPrlw-vI/AAAAAAAAAP8/cazGJn7PbS4/s1600/-1.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-303008007429579057?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/303008007429579057/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/10/kickstart-dream.html#comment-form' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/303008007429579057'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/303008007429579057'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/10/kickstart-dream.html' title='Kickstart a Dream!'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-uAFceYDQMiU/Tp3czb1P5XI/AAAAAAAAAPk/WmVafbKrPq4/s72-c/shapeimage_3.png' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-8219087297291950759</id><published>2011-10-17T17:23:00.001-04:00</published><updated>2011-10-17T17:28:17.555-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Editor'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Young Adult Novels'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='blog'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Books'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='editing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='craft'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Picture Books'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Illustrating'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Agents'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Novels'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Authors'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Critique Group'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Illustrators'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Conferences'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Conference'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='publishing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Middle Grade Novels'/><title type='text'>Here it is! NESCBWI 2012 "Keeping it Real" Conferenece</title><content type='html'>I can only give you a glimpse of things to come but we did change things up. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Registration opens January 23, 2012. Get your manuscripts and agent quick queries ready! Deadlines for submitting for critiques close early for the upcoming conference due to the dates being in April.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-VVHqpgSNHPo/Tpya4R9r7LI/AAAAAAAAAPc/fFnMZTCUxsI/s1600/pigpost-front5x7.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="256" src="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-VVHqpgSNHPo/Tpya4R9r7LI/AAAAAAAAAPc/fFnMZTCUxsI/s400/pigpost-front5x7.jpg" width="400" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Kudos to Jen Carson for all she's done with her work on the newest version of the postcard and in such a teeny-weenie amount of time.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-8219087297291950759?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/8219087297291950759/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/10/here-it-is-nescbwi-2012-keeping-it-real.html#comment-form' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/8219087297291950759'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/8219087297291950759'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/10/here-it-is-nescbwi-2012-keeping-it-real.html' title='Here it is! NESCBWI 2012 &quot;Keeping it Real&quot; Conferenece'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-VVHqpgSNHPo/Tpya4R9r7LI/AAAAAAAAAPc/fFnMZTCUxsI/s72-c/pigpost-front5x7.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-3626580143163247087</id><published>2011-09-08T09:04:00.001-04:00</published><updated>2011-09-08T09:14:21.659-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Things'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='blog'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writers'/><title type='text'>Thursday's Things</title><content type='html'>The premise of Thursday's Things is based on &lt;a href="http://www.thingsthegame.com/"&gt;Things the Game&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;i&gt;&lt;b&gt;THINGS&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;i&gt;(a)game that presents players with provocative topics like "THINGS… people do when no one is looking", "THINGS… you wouldn’t do for a million dollars" or "THINGS…  your parents forgot to tell you"… and allows each player to say  whatever comes to mind. Pick a topic, get everyone to write a response,  read them out loud and then guess who said what. There are no right  answers. There are no wrong answers. &lt;/i&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Today's Things Game: Things You Love to Write About&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I'll start.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="color: #38761d;"&gt;Ancient Technology&lt;/span&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-3626580143163247087?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/3626580143163247087/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/09/thursdays-things.html#comment-form' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/3626580143163247087'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/3626580143163247087'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/09/thursdays-things.html' title='Thursday&apos;s Things'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-1578530578413759752</id><published>2011-08-24T09:00:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2011-08-24T09:00:13.383-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='submissions'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='blogging'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writers'/><title type='text'>Sabotage – We All Do It!</title><content type='html'>For the last Four weeks I have been trying to complete a final revision on my YA. I'm almost there. But if I finish it, I'll then have to submit. I think the prospect of subbing my manuscript is what is holding me back.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Sabotage. We all do it. But why?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;b&gt;7 Ways to Change from Saboteur to Successful!&lt;/b&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;ol&gt;&lt;li&gt;Plan your writing time. &lt;br /&gt;Pick a time and stick to it.&amp;nbsp;&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;Give yourself a goal. &lt;br /&gt;500 words, 3 pages. Whatever you think can get done in the amount of time you actually have to write.&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;Do not revise while writing.&lt;br /&gt;Just get the words down. You can revise later.&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;Give yourself a timeline. You can always change this, but it helps to know what your deadlines are, even if no one else knows. &lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;Believe you are a writer.&lt;br /&gt;Own it! This isn't difficult. &lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;Understand that rejection is not about you. &lt;br /&gt;This is the most difficult, but take away the emotion behind rejection and you become strong.&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;Seek support from your Writer friends.&lt;br /&gt;They understand.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/li&gt;&lt;/ol&gt;&lt;i&gt;Help me add to my list! &lt;/i&gt;What do you do to be successful?&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-1578530578413759752?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/1578530578413759752/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/08/sabotage-we-all-do-it.html#comment-form' title='4 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/1578530578413759752'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/1578530578413759752'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/08/sabotage-we-all-do-it.html' title='Sabotage – We All Do It!'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>4</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-6254763318147511635</id><published>2011-08-19T07:13:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2011-08-19T07:13:00.230-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Agents'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='NESCBWI'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Editors. children&apos;s Authors'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='2012'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Conference'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writers'/><title type='text'>NESCBWI 2012 Conference Reminder</title><content type='html'>&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-_icysFiLPIk/Tk5Eyk5ZeFI/AAAAAAAAAPA/r7n1v6zhj0w/s1600/scbwi2010-fox.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="320" src="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-_icysFiLPIk/Tk5Eyk5ZeFI/AAAAAAAAAPA/r7n1v6zhj0w/s320/scbwi2010-fox.jpg" width="248" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I'd like to remind everyone that proposals for workshops at the 2012  NESCBWI conference are due September 16th! Use the link on this page to  submit one:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.nescbwi.org/2011/07/nescbwi-2012-conference-call-f.php" target="_blank"&gt;http://www.nescbwi.org/2011/&lt;wbr&gt;&lt;/wbr&gt;07/nescbwi-2012-conference-&lt;wbr&gt;&lt;/wbr&gt;call-f.php&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Also, we're seeking volunteers for the 2012 conference. Please fill out this survey if you are interested in helping out:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.nescbwi.org/2011/08/call-for-conference-volunteers.php" target="_blank"&gt;http://www.nescbwi.org/2011/&lt;wbr&gt;&lt;/wbr&gt;08/call-for-conference-&lt;wbr&gt;&lt;/wbr&gt;volunteers.php&lt;/a&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-6254763318147511635?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/6254763318147511635/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/08/nescbwi-2012-conference-reminder.html#comment-form' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/6254763318147511635'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/6254763318147511635'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/08/nescbwi-2012-conference-reminder.html' title='NESCBWI 2012 Conference Reminder'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-_icysFiLPIk/Tk5Eyk5ZeFI/AAAAAAAAAPA/r7n1v6zhj0w/s72-c/scbwi2010-fox.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-8166843675724742749</id><published>2011-08-12T08:17:00.001-04:00</published><updated>2011-08-12T08:35:02.879-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Editor'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Young Adult Novels'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='NESCBWI'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Books'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='revision'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='craft'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Picture Books'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writers'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Teens'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Agents'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writer'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Authors'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Illustrators'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Novels'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='MG'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Conferences'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='publishing'/><title type='text'>Calling ALL Volunteers for NESCBWI 2012!</title><content type='html'>&lt;h1 id="it_v"&gt;We need you to make 2012 the best conference ever!&lt;/h1&gt;&lt;h1 id="it_v"&gt;&lt;span style="color: red; font-size: small;"&gt;Only 251 days until the conference. &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/h1&gt;&lt;div id="it_v"&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-8fOY4r-zNzs/TkUd0xm2nFI/AAAAAAAAAO8/fG3GQqCm0ew/s1600/rv3mDU.png" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-8fOY4r-zNzs/TkUd0xm2nFI/AAAAAAAAAO8/fG3GQqCm0ew/s1600/rv3mDU.png" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;b&gt;Want to volunteer?&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div id="it_v"&gt;&lt;b&gt;&lt;a href="https://spreadsheets.google.com/spreadsheet/viewform?hl=en_US&amp;amp;formkey=dHlscmdFQmNkaWM2Rl9JaWE1aDNMWmc6MA#gid=0"&gt;Click here to complete the volunteer survey&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div id="it_v"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div id="it_v"&gt;The  New England SCBWI annual conference is entirely organized and run by  volunteers, so help is vitally needed and greatly appreciated. This is  one of the largest regional SCBWI conferences, and last year we sold out  the conference in two weeks. This year, the theme is "Keeping it Real:  Reality and World-building in Fiction, Nonfiction, and Illustration" and  the conference will take place April 20-22, 2012 at the Sheraton  Springfield Monarch Place Hotel, Springfield, MA.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div id="it_v"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;a href="https://spreadsheets.google.com/spreadsheet/viewform?hl=en_US&amp;amp;formkey=dHlscmdFQmNkaWM2Rl9JaWE1aDNMWmc6MA#gid=0" id="ct8d" title="Please complete the conference volunteer survey"&gt;Please complete the conference volunteer survey&lt;/a&gt;  if you are interested in helping out. Getting more involved in the  NE-SCBWI conference is a great way to meet accomplished authors,  illustrators, editors, and other publishing professionals.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div id="it_v"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div id="it_v"&gt;Volunteers  are needed to assist with many different aspects of the conference.  Conference weekend volunteers are responsible for tasks during the  conference weekend only, and will be trained that weekend. We also need  volunteers to help select workshops for the conference. The Workshop  Selection Committee will meet on October 2, 2011 in Holden, MA to choose  the best workshops out of all the proposals submitted.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div id="it_v"&gt;We  are also seeking volunteers to take on roles with greater time  commitment and involvement. If you are interested in any of the  following volunteer positions, please email &lt;a href="mailto:nescbwi12@gmail.com" id="kq_." title="nescbwi12@gmail.com"&gt;nescbwi12@gmail.com&lt;/a&gt; with your full name, contact information, and a brief explanation of why you feel you would be a good fit for the position.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div id="it_v"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;h2 id="it_v"&gt;Open Volunteer Positions&lt;/h2&gt;&lt;h4 id="it_v"&gt;Special Interest Group Coordinator&lt;/h4&gt;&lt;div id="it_v"&gt;Special  Interest Groups are informal discussions meant to promote networking  and discussion on topics of mutual interest. For example, past Special  Interest Groups have discussed writing fantasy, using Twitter, and  digital illustration. The Coordinator will need to solicit topics for  the groups, find and recruit volunteers to lead the discussions, create  signage for the tables, and make sure that the event runs smoothly.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div id="it_v"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div id="it_v"&gt;Contact &lt;a href="mailto:nescbwi12@gmail.com" id="xjsq" title="nescbwi12@gmail.com"&gt;nescbwi12@gmail.com&lt;/a&gt; if you are interested in this position.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;h4 id="it_v"&gt;Book Signing Coordinator&lt;/h4&gt;&lt;div id="it_v"&gt;Authors  and illustrators who present at the conference are invited to sign  books. The Book Signing Coordinator is responsible for contacting and  scheduling faculty for the signing, coordinating with the conference  book seller to ensure that their books are available, and figuring out  the best set-up for the book signing room, including line management.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div id="it_v"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div id="b7g7"&gt;Contact &lt;a href="mailto:nescbwi12@gmail.com" id="k.:3" title="nescbwi12@gmail.com"&gt;nescbwi12@gmail.com&lt;/a&gt; if you are interested in this position.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;h4 id="it_v"&gt;Assistant Critique Registrars&lt;/h4&gt;&lt;div id="it_v"&gt;The  Critique Registrar takes every manuscript submitted for a critique at  the conference, organizes them by genre, and submits them to appropriate  editors and agents. The Registrar also puts together the schedule of  critique meetings. Assistant Critique Registrars will work with the  Registrar to manage this process and deal with critique requests and  scheduling issues. We are looking for volunteers who live in the  Burlington, MA area.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div id="cu3w"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div id="p:ov"&gt;Contact &lt;a href="mailto:nescbwi12@gmail.com" id="l12w" title="nescbwi12@gmail.com"&gt;nescbwi12@gmail.com&lt;/a&gt; if you are interested in this position.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;h4&gt;Open Mic Coordinator&lt;/h4&gt;&lt;div id="it_v"&gt;Open  Mic night was popular this past year, so we would like to offer this  event again in 2012. The Open Mic Coordinator will plan the open mic  night (or nights) and will be there to ensure that the event goes  smoothly.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div id="lfv8"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div id="t-fq"&gt;Contact &lt;a href="mailto:nescbwi12@gmail.com" id="jkrh" title="nescbwi12@gmail.com"&gt;nescbwi12@gmail.com&lt;/a&gt; if you are interested in this position.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;h4 id="it_v"&gt;Door Prize Coordinator&lt;/h4&gt;&lt;div id="it_v"&gt;The  Door Prize Coordinator will solicit prizes to give away during the  conference weekend, organize the prizes at the conference, and come up  with a fun, creative, and efficient way of conducting the raffle.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div id="rj5r"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div id="o6:2"&gt;Contact &lt;a href="mailto:nescbwi12@gmail.com" id="i_em" title="nescbwi12@gmail.com"&gt;nescbwi12@gmail.com&lt;/a&gt; if you are interested in this position.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;h4&gt;Poster Showcase Coordinator&lt;/h4&gt;The  Poster Showcase Coordinator organizes and runs the Illustrator poster  contest at the conference. The Coordinator will come up with a concept  for the contest, solicit prizes for the winners, present the prizes to  the winners, and take charge of set-up and take-down of the contest.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div id="q4ha"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div id="wjmx"&gt;Contact &lt;a href="mailto:nescbwi12@gmail.com" id="qjfs" title="nescbwi12@gmail.com"&gt;nescbwi12@gmail.com&lt;/a&gt; if you are interested in this position.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;h4&gt;Portfolio Critique Coordinator&lt;/h4&gt;Art  Directors give portfolio reviews at the conference. This Coordinator  will seek out Art Directors who are interested and available the weekend  of the conference to critique portfolios, and will manage the portfolio  critique schedule.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div id="tmd5"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div id="m1w:"&gt;Contact &lt;a href="mailto:nescbwi12@gmail.com" id="mhd1" title="nescbwi12@gmail.com"&gt;nescbwi12@gmail.com&lt;/a&gt; if you are interested in this position.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div id="m1w:"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;h4&gt;Portfolio Display Coordinator&lt;/h4&gt;This  year, we are interested in adding a location for illustrators to  display their work. The Portfolio Display Coordinator will recruit  illustrators to take part in the display, and will manage set-up and  take-down of the room. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;div id="b6_0"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div id="pndr"&gt;Contact &lt;a href="mailto:nescbwi12@gmail.com" id="wmm9" title="nescbwi12@gmail.com"&gt;nescbwi12@gmail.com&lt;/a&gt; if you are interested in this position.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-8166843675724742749?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/8166843675724742749/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/08/calling-all-volunteers-for-nescbwi-2012.html#comment-form' title='4 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/8166843675724742749'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/8166843675724742749'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/08/calling-all-volunteers-for-nescbwi-2012.html' title='Calling ALL Volunteers for NESCBWI 2012!'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-8fOY4r-zNzs/TkUd0xm2nFI/AAAAAAAAAO8/fG3GQqCm0ew/s72-c/rv3mDU.png' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>4</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-3150729772054904602</id><published>2011-07-01T13:50:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2011-07-01T13:50:39.814-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Novels'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Illustrators'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Young Adult Novels'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='NESCBWI'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Picture Books'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Illustrating'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writers'/><title type='text'>Sneak Peek - 2012 NESCBWI Conference Artwork</title><content type='html'>The illustrator for the NESCBWI 2012 Keeping it Real in Fiction, Nonfiction, and Illustration, is &lt;a href="http://www.thedragoncharmer.com/thedragoncharmer.com/Welcometothedragoncharmer.com.html"&gt;Jen Carson&lt;/a&gt;.&amp;nbsp; Here is a preliminary sketch that she has shared with me!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-labq-6YqIxk/Tg4HrdcctQI/AAAAAAAAANQ/dt-kVrHfaeg/s1600/scbwi12-clean027.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="640" src="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-labq-6YqIxk/Tg4HrdcctQI/AAAAAAAAANQ/dt-kVrHfaeg/s640/scbwi12-clean027.jpg" width="346" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-3150729772054904602?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/3150729772054904602/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/07/sneak-peek-2012-nescbwi-conference.html#comment-form' title='6 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/3150729772054904602'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/3150729772054904602'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/07/sneak-peek-2012-nescbwi-conference.html' title='Sneak Peek - 2012 NESCBWI Conference Artwork'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-labq-6YqIxk/Tg4HrdcctQI/AAAAAAAAANQ/dt-kVrHfaeg/s72-c/scbwi12-clean027.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>6</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-4165942970773600927</id><published>2011-07-01T07:27:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2011-07-01T07:27:24.177-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Editor'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Young Adult Novels'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='blog'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='NESCBWI'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Queries'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Books'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='craft'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Picture Books'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Agents'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Authors'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Novels'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Conferences'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Conference'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Middle Grade Novels'/><title type='text'>NESCBWI 2012 Call for proposals</title><content type='html'>It's official! Today the &lt;a href="http://www.blogger.com/goog_1889303996"&gt;call for proposals for the 2012 NESCBWI Spring Conference &lt;/a&gt;&lt;b&gt;&lt;a href="http://bit.ly/lx8e24"&gt;"Keeping it Real: Reality and World-building in Fiction, Nonfiction, and Illustration"&lt;/a&gt; &lt;/b&gt;is out.&amp;nbsp;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; font-size: small;"&gt;Reality doesn't often get the spotlight in the post-Harry-Potter world  of children's literature, but even in fantasy or highly stylized  illustration, a believable world is fundamental. Also, there is so much  we all can learn from nonfiction research and writing techniques.  Finally, how do you stay realistic and focused on your future in this  rapidly evolving industry?&lt;/span&gt;    &lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; font-size: small;"&gt; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;   &lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt; &lt;/div&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; font-size: small;"&gt; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;   As always, the conference will have a strong focus on craft. This  year, we are moving to a new venue with more space available for  workshop sessions. We'd like to invite more small, hands-on workshops.  Of course, larger lecture-style workshops are still welcome as well.&lt;/span&gt;    &lt;/div&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; font-size: small;"&gt; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;   &lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt; &lt;/div&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; font-size: small;"&gt; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;   This is one of the largest regional SCBWI conferences, and last year  we sold out the conference in two weeks. We welcome proposals from  everyone. We also encourage artists and writers of color, those who are  differently abled, and others from underrepresented groups to propose  conference workshops.&lt;/span&gt;    &lt;/div&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; font-size: small;"&gt; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;   &lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt; &lt;/div&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; font-size: small;"&gt; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;h2 style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;   &lt;span style="font-size: large;"&gt;&lt;b&gt;What YOU Need to know: Important Information&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/span&gt; &lt;/h2&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; font-size: small;"&gt; &lt;b style="color: black;"&gt;Conference Dates:&lt;/b&gt;&lt;span style="color: black;"&gt; Friday afternoon through Sunday afternoon, April 20-22, 2012&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br style="color: black;" /&gt;&lt;span style="color: black;"&gt; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;b style="color: black;"&gt;Conference Location:&lt;/b&gt;&lt;span style="color: black;"&gt; Sheraton Springfield Monarch Place Hotel, Springfield, MA&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br style="color: black;" /&gt;&lt;span style="color: black;"&gt; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;b style="color: black;"&gt;To Submit a Proposal: &lt;/b&gt;&lt;span style="color: black;"&gt;Please complete&lt;/span&gt;&lt;b&gt; &lt;/b&gt;a &lt;a href="http://bit.ly/muXqRC%20"&gt;conference proposal form&lt;/a&gt;&lt;span style="color: black;"&gt;. Separate submissions are required for multiple presentations or workshop/intensive versions of the same presentation. &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;div style="color: black; font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt; &lt;/div&gt;&lt;span style="color: black; font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; font-size: small;"&gt; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;div style="color: black; font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;   &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;b&gt;Proposal Due Date&lt;/b&gt;: September 16, 2011&lt;br /&gt;&lt;b&gt;Presenter Notification Expected:&lt;/b&gt;   &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt; November 1, 2011 &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;span style="color: black; font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; font-size: small;"&gt; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;div style="color: black; font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;   &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;b&gt;Types of Presentations:&lt;/b&gt; 55-minute workshops; 120-minute intensives &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; font-size: small;"&gt; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt; &lt;/div&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; font-size: small;"&gt; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; font-size: small;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; font-size: small;"&gt; &lt;b&gt;&lt;i&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: large;"&gt;What are we looking for?&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;h3 style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;b&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;b&gt;55-minute workshops&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/h3&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt; &lt;/div&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; font-size: small;"&gt; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;ul style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;     Presentations that relate to our conference theme.   &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;     Presentations that last 55 minutes in their entirety. When planning,  leave time for participant questions and any required audiovisual  setup.   &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;     A range of presentations for all SCBWI members, including illustrators and writers in all genres.   &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;     Leveled presentations. We are not trying to find one presentation  that everyone can attend. Instead, presenters should direct material  toward a specific experience level. For example, an "advanced"  illustration presentation should not begin with "Why you should carry a  sketch book," and a "beginner's" writing workshop should not address  marketing a contracted novel.&amp;nbsp;   &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;     Focused presentations with clear learning outcomes. These should be  clear, tangible "final products" that attendees take away. Plan the  presentation thinking, "I want participants to leave with these three  tools or ideas." A few examples: ideas for a new direction or revision  in their own work; increased understanding of a specific genre, style,  area of craft, art media, etc.; a step-by-step plan of attack for  marketing, revisions, problem-solving, etc.&lt;/span&gt;      &lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;     Hands-on workshops where attendees spend significant time in  writing, illustration, or marketing exercises applying ideas to their  own work.&lt;/span&gt;   &lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;     Lecture-style presentations&amp;nbsp; with information that participants can take back to their desks to ponder and play with.&amp;nbsp;   &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;     Presentations that include a range of examples rather than drawing solely from the presenter's experience or body of work.   &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;     Presenters who are published members of SCBWI, as well as editors,  agents, MFA graduates, and other industry professionals. Past  presentation experience is appreciated.   &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/li&gt;&lt;/ul&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; font-size: small;"&gt;  &lt;/span&gt;&lt;h3 style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;   &lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;b&gt;120-minute intensives&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/span&gt; &lt;/h3&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; font-size: small;"&gt; Intensive proposals should meet all of the criteria listed above for 55-minute workshops. Also consider the following:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;ul style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;     120-minute intensives typically take place on Sunday, and there are fewer slots available for these workshops.&lt;/span&gt;   &lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;     Two hours are provided, so plan exercises or some interactive  element in the workshop. An intensive should not only be a lecture.   &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;     Past presentation experience and in-depth knowledge of the topic are required.   &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;     Partner presentations are welcome.   &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/li&gt;&lt;/ul&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; font-size: small;"&gt; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; font-size: small;"&gt; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;   &lt;i&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;Note: If you apply to present a 55-minute  workshop or a 120-minute intensive and we feel your presentation may  better fit the other format, we will let you know!&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/i&gt; &lt;/div&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; font-size: small;"&gt; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;   &lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt; &lt;/div&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; font-size: small;"&gt; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;h3 style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;   Selection Criteria and Topics &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/h3&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; font-size: small;"&gt; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;   Every year SCBWI New England receives many excellent proposals, more  than can fit into a conference schedule. Therefore, we must choose on  the basis of experience, quality, variety, novelty, attendant costs, and  other factors. Please use the &lt;a href="http://www.nescbwi.org/about/files/workshoprubricfinal1.pdf" target="_blank" title="NESCBWI Workshop Rubric"&gt;NESCBWI Workshop Rubric&lt;/a&gt;&amp;nbsp;for more explicit selection criteria and standards.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;We would love to see presentations on the following topics. If you are  an expert on one of these topics, we would love to see your proposal. &lt;/span&gt;      &lt;/div&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; font-size: small;"&gt; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; font-size: small;"&gt; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;ul style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;li&gt;     &lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;Hands-on writing workshops: tools, tips, outlining, character sketching, etc.&lt;/span&gt;   &lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;     &lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;Hands-on illustration workshops&lt;/span&gt;   &lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;     &lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;Publishing 101 session for authors or illustrators&lt;/span&gt;   &lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;     &lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;Developing an idea from conception to completion&lt;/span&gt;   &lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;     &lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;Nonfiction and fiction research&lt;/span&gt;   &lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;     &lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;Secrets of Story Arc&lt;/span&gt;   &lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;     &lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;How to lay out a picture book dummy&lt;/span&gt;   &lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;     &lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;How to start your own publishing company&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;   &lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;     &lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;Gesture and emotion for illustrators&lt;/span&gt;   &lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;     &lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;School and library visits and promotion&lt;/span&gt;   &lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;     &lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;Writing nonfiction articles and short stories&lt;/span&gt;   &lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;     &lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;Mystery writing&lt;/span&gt;   &lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;     &lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;Creative writing courses in the New England area&lt;/span&gt;   &lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;     &lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;Game plan for leaving a full time job to become a freelancer&lt;/span&gt;   &lt;/li&gt;&lt;/ul&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I hope to see you there!&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-4165942970773600927?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/4165942970773600927/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/07/nescbwi-2012-call-for-proposals.html#comment-form' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/4165942970773600927'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/4165942970773600927'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/07/nescbwi-2012-call-for-proposals.html' title='NESCBWI 2012 Call for proposals'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-1792236731614655729</id><published>2011-06-20T13:01:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2011-06-20T13:01:19.047-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Family'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Spiritual Awareness'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='blogging'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Inner Peace'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Summer'/><title type='text'>Summer Solstice 2012</title><content type='html'>&lt;b&gt;Celebrating the Summer Solstice &lt;/b&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Each year, on the summer solstice I make a wish. For me, it's all about rejuvenating my spirit and finding inner peace. Tonight, my family will have a small bonfire in our backyard fire pit. we'll sit under the stars and talk about what we think the next six months will bring. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;h3&gt;About the Summer Solstice Energy You Create&lt;/h3&gt;This is a time of completeness and abundance, for nature as well as  for you, a time to celebrate all that you have achieved and manifested.  The summer solstice invites you to celebrate your individuality and who  you are, and to use your positive intent to look forward to all that you  still want to become. As the sun’s energy comes to its peak, the active  principle ripens all our outer achievements on the inner level too,  bringing a transformation of spiritual strength and awareness. In this  wholeness, you can recognize and celebrate the death and rebirth of the  great cycle of the year.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;h3&gt;How You Can Celebrate&lt;/h3&gt;This is definitely a time for celebrating and entertaining in style  with the whole community. Drama, dance and song are all essential  elements to raise the energy, and give everyone a chance to display  their own unique talents. Light a huge bonfire and have lots of  fireworks – Catherine wheels are especially symbolic. If you can find a  fire-eater, even better! Throw aromatic herbs onto the fire  (traditionally fennel, lavender, geranium, rue, rosemary and chamomile)  and dance through the smoke. The tug of war is traditionally played at  this time – all the summer-born people on one side and the winter-borns  on the other, to symbolize the battle between summer and winter. Close  the evening’s activities with a ceremony of thanks, to the sun, moon,  five elements, nature, spirit, ancestors and, of course, each other.  Then bless the food and drink and enjoy!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: xx-small;"&gt;With thanks to Triple Moon at www.semelexerri.co.uk/calendar/celtic-festivals/ and Glennie Kindred for her excellent source book &lt;em&gt;Sacred Celebrations&lt;/em&gt;.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-1792236731614655729?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/1792236731614655729/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/06/summer-solstice-2012.html#comment-form' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/1792236731614655729'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/1792236731614655729'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/06/summer-solstice-2012.html' title='Summer Solstice 2012'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-2661929950551192591</id><published>2011-06-01T12:55:00.001-04:00</published><updated>2011-06-02T06:32:29.848-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Novels'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Critique Group'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='revision'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='editing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='craft'/><title type='text'>After the Beta Reader - Reads! 11 Things You Can Do.</title><content type='html'>My last blog post was about the importance of having a beta reader. So, let’s say you have a beta reader and they’ve read your manuscript. Waiting is hard. Every now and then you wonder if they hate it. With any luck, they won’t. And now you log into your email and they’ve sent you feedback...gulp...what now?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;1.&amp;nbsp; Take a deep breath.&lt;br /&gt;2.&amp;nbsp; Pour a glass of wine (so what if it’s only 8:17 AM).&lt;br /&gt;3.&amp;nbsp; Grab a highlighter.&lt;br /&gt;4.&amp;nbsp; Kick off your slippers.&lt;br /&gt;5.&amp;nbsp; Sit back.&lt;br /&gt;6.&amp;nbsp; Read.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;ol&gt;&lt;/ol&gt;If you find something that makes you want to stop reading, highlight it and continue reading. Read it all the way through and don’t think defensive thoughts.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;7.&amp;nbsp; Now read it again. This time look for dangling threads, problems and "just not working notes", your beta reader noted. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;ol&gt;&lt;/ol&gt;Didn’t realize you stopped writing about something halfway through, did you? Well, this was where my beta reader, rocked! She found several threads that weren’t completed and one that didn’t even need to be there anymore.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;8.&amp;nbsp; Put it down and walk away for twenty-four hours.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;ol&gt;&lt;/ol&gt;I know, not easy to do, but this is important to your story. Take this time to do other things and let your beta reader’s input percolate. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;9.&amp;nbsp; When you are ready, make the small edits first.&amp;nbsp; &lt;br /&gt;&lt;ol&gt;&lt;/ol&gt;Focus on grammar and punctuation. They are easy and you need to make them. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;10. Finally, with your beta reader’s comments in hand, read your story from beginning to end. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;ol&gt;&lt;/ol&gt;Ready?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;As you read, you will see where the problems are. You will know what you need to do. It’s you story and you know it best.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;11. With opened eyes, revise!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;What are some of the things you look for when reading a manuscript? &lt;br /&gt;&lt;ol&gt;&lt;/ol&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-2661929950551192591?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/2661929950551192591/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/06/after-beta-reader-reads-11-things-you.html#comment-form' title='4 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/2661929950551192591'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/2661929950551192591'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/06/after-beta-reader-reads-11-things-you.html' title='After the Beta Reader - Reads! 11 Things You Can Do.'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>4</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-4632244687266876927</id><published>2011-05-25T21:50:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2011-05-25T21:50:45.916-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Critique Group'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Young Adult Novels'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='blog'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='NESCBWI'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Books'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='blogging'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='craft'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Middle Grade Novels'/><title type='text'>Why a Trusted Beta Reader is a Valuable Addition to Your Toolbox!</title><content type='html'>&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-Q6cjgULb444/Td2xiholG5I/AAAAAAAAANI/rNVDwRoPgFE/s1600/critique-135x135.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-Q6cjgULb444/Td2xiholG5I/AAAAAAAAANI/rNVDwRoPgFE/s1600/critique-135x135.jpg" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;You’ve completed your manuscript, edited and revised, read it aloud, and now you want to have a trusted reader complete a beta read. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;As a writer, I crave feedback from my peers. I want honesty. I want to know what works and what doesn’t. Which all boils down to having another writer to be my beta reader. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Most writers understands that criticism isn’t about the person, but the manuscript. But, sometimes getting criticism is painful (I remember one very specific occasion where I cried) and can be very difficult to hear. Even for a seasoned, well-critiqued writer.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I want honest and well thought out feedback from someone who recognizes structure, story arc, dialogue, developing characters, plot, and who the intended audience is. Their constructive criticism will empower my creativity and bring with it a desire to continue revising until I get it right.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;There are numerous ways to find a trusted reader. Recently, I found a writer who does all of this for me. We’ve swapped manuscripts a few times now. I have learned so much about my writing by reading and offering feedback to her about her work.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I have known her for several years and we first met as members of a critique group. I contacted a critique group that was listed on the &lt;a href="http://www.nescbwi.org/resources.php#330"&gt;NESCBWI.com critique group page&lt;/a&gt;. They were looking to grow the group but after a short time the group disbanded. To this day, she and I laugh about it. What I ended up with was a wonderful beta reader and a super writer friend. A girl can get lucky!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;You might already be a member of a writer's group. But a fresh reader, someone who hasn't heard all about your struggles with the story is essential when you are preparing for a final round of revision before sending your manuscript to agents or editors.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Do you have a beta reader? if so, how did you find them? I'd love to hear you suggestions and tips.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-4632244687266876927?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/4632244687266876927/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/05/why-trusted-beta-reader-is-valuable.html#comment-form' title='3 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/4632244687266876927'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/4632244687266876927'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/05/why-trusted-beta-reader-is-valuable.html' title='Why a Trusted Beta Reader is a Valuable Addition to Your Toolbox!'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-Q6cjgULb444/Td2xiholG5I/AAAAAAAAANI/rNVDwRoPgFE/s72-c/critique-135x135.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>3</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-798916397537300580</id><published>2011-05-21T19:46:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2011-05-21T19:46:51.649-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Young Adult Novels'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='NESCBWI'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing Retreats'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Conferences'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Conference'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Picture Books'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Middle Grade Novels'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writers'/><title type='text'>What Are You Waiting For? NESCBWI 2012 Conference</title><content type='html'>If you were in attendance at last weekend’s NESCBWI 2011 Conference in Fitchburg, MA., I want to hear from you!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;ul&gt;&lt;li&gt;Tell me what you loved.&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;Tell me what you didn’t love.&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;Did you step our of your comfort zone and introduce yourself to someone new?&lt;/li&gt;&lt;/ul&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The&lt;b style="color: #674ea7;"&gt; &lt;span style="color: #3d85c6;"&gt;NESCBWI 2012 Conference&lt;/span&gt; - Keeping it Real: &lt;span style="color: #93c47d;"&gt;reality and&amp;nbsp;world building&amp;nbsp;in nonfiction, fiction, and illustration&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/b&gt; is all set for April 20-21, 2012 and will take place at the Sheraton Hotel of Springfield, MA, so mark your calendars.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Tell me what you would like to see at next year’s conference.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Now think about this.&lt;br /&gt;Do you have what it takes to be a workshop presenter? Start putting your proposal together. The call for proposals will go out sometime mid to late June. Be ready to submit, because we want you!&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-798916397537300580?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/798916397537300580/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/05/what-are-you-waiting-for-nescbwi-2012.html#comment-form' title='5 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/798916397537300580'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/798916397537300580'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/05/what-are-you-waiting-for-nescbwi-2012.html' title='What Are You Waiting For? NESCBWI 2012 Conference'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>5</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-9103916553726439288</id><published>2011-05-12T09:11:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2011-05-13T16:20:23.411-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='blog'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='NESCBWI'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing Retreats'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Books'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Conferences'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='blogging'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='#nescbwi11'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Agent Quick Queries'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writers'/><title type='text'>What To Bring To  The NESCBWI 2011 Conference</title><content type='html'>I'm packing for the #NESCBWI11 conference. Packing always stresses me out. Every year, I swear I will not forget my business cards. Did I mention, I hate packing? I can never decide what to bring to wear for the weekend. So, rummaging through the closets began last night. I am almost over-packed, I might just have to stop somewhere on the way to Fitchburg to go shopping. Just in case.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In the meantime, I have to start my list. Every year I forget my business cards. So they are at the top this year. (I just ran out to the car and put them on the front seat.)&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;u&gt;&lt;b&gt;CHECK LIST&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/u&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;ul&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;span style="color: red;"&gt;Business Cards&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;AQQ Schedule&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;Copies of AQQ letters&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;Copy of Manuscript Critique Submission&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;Questions for Critiquer (I wonder who it is?) :)&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;Laptop&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;Phone&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;Power cords&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;Camera&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;My Own Pillow (Because you just never know where hotel pillows have been!)&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;A bottle of wine to share&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;Something Silver to wear to celebrate the 25th Anniversary of this conference&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;Clothes that I feel Comfortable Wearing!&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;Comfortable Shoes&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li style="color: red;"&gt;A SMILE!&lt;/li&gt;&lt;/ul&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I’m sure I forgot something.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;What do you usually forget? Tell me. I’ll add it to the list.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-9103916553726439288?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/9103916553726439288/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/05/what-to-bring-to-nescbwi-conference.html#comment-form' title='9 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/9103916553726439288'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/9103916553726439288'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/05/what-to-bring-to-nescbwi-conference.html' title='What To Bring To  The NESCBWI 2011 Conference'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>9</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-4507625256555479512</id><published>2011-05-02T20:30:00.001-04:00</published><updated>2011-05-03T06:42:57.286-04:00</updated><title type='text'>Voice or Tone - How to Tell the Difference</title><content type='html'>What's voice?&lt;br /&gt;What's tone?&lt;br /&gt;In writing, it is often confused.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://grammar.quickanddirtytips.com/understanding-voice-and-tone-in-writing.aspx"&gt;Grammar Girl&lt;/a&gt; did a great post about this on July 1, 2010, called &lt;a href="http://grammar.quickanddirtytips.com/understanding-voice-and-tone-in-writing.aspx"&gt;Understanding Voice and Tone in Writing&lt;/a&gt;. It was explained by &lt;a href="http://editdesk.wordpress.com/2010/07/20/yahoo-stylebook/"&gt;Julie Wildhaber&lt;/a&gt; who is a trainer at Yahoo for writers and editors.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I think Julie explains it so well, even I can't improve upon it. So click on the &lt;a href="http://grammar.quickanddirtytips.com/understanding-voice-and-tone-in-writing.aspx"&gt;link&lt;/a&gt;, and read away!&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-4507625256555479512?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/4507625256555479512/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/05/voice-or-tone-how-to-tell-difference.html#comment-form' title='3 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/4507625256555479512'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/4507625256555479512'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/05/voice-or-tone-how-to-tell-difference.html' title='Voice or Tone - How to Tell the Difference'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>3</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-2082690696872141368</id><published>2011-05-02T12:26:00.001-04:00</published><updated>2011-05-02T12:27:23.972-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='rejection'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='#atozchallenge'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='blogging'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='craft'/><title type='text'>Unavoidable</title><content type='html'>To be a true writer, you have to get to the end — it’s unavoidable. The best advise I've ever received, this from a well published writer, was to write the whole thing. Don’t stop to “polish” any chapters until your entire manuscript is written. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;If you polish, you never finish.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Another great unavoidable for me — the outline. I find that an outline, even one as simple as:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Chapter 1 — Hero breaks leg, can’t save the world.&lt;br /&gt;Chapter 2 — Hero wallows in self pity.&lt;br /&gt;Chapter 3 — world falls apart because hero, isn’t.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Gives me something follow. If I don’t have it, I end up polishing.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The final unavoidable — the rejection. Everyone gets them. I read them, work with them, and move forward.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;What are your “Unavoidables” when writing?&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-2082690696872141368?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/2082690696872141368/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/05/unavoidable.html#comment-form' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/2082690696872141368'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/2082690696872141368'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/05/unavoidable.html' title='Unavoidable'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-3751625928631350220</id><published>2011-04-29T17:02:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2011-04-29T17:02:06.276-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='blog'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='#atozchallenge'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='life'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='blogging'/><title type='text'>T is for Time and Thanks</title><content type='html'>I know I won’t quite finish the A to Z Challenge on time, but I had family to be with and mourning to get done. I will finish, and I hope to continue to blog more often. I’ve enjoyed this challenge.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;To all you A to Z challengers, thank you for visiting my blog. I have read some spectacular blogs and met some incredible bloggers.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Thank you to everyone for your kinds words and support this week.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-3751625928631350220?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/3751625928631350220/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/t-is-for-time-and-thanks.html#comment-form' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/3751625928631350220'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/3751625928631350220'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/t-is-for-time-and-thanks.html' title='T is for Time and Thanks'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-1582887993384644336</id><published>2011-04-24T18:55:00.002-04:00</published><updated>2011-04-25T06:49:12.660-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='growing up'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Family'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='#atozchallenge'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='life'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Life in a small town'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='blogging'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Pugs'/><title type='text'>S is for Seven Weird Facts About Me</title><content type='html'>&lt;style&gt;@font-face {  font-family: "Cambria";}p.MsoNormal, li.MsoNormal, div.MsoNormal { margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; }p.MsoListParagraph, li.MsoListParagraph, div.MsoListParagraph { margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.5in; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; }p.MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst, li.MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst, div.MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst { margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.5in; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; }p.MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle, li.MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle, div.MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle { margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.5in; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; }p.MsoListParagraphCxSpLast, li.MsoListParagraphCxSpLast, div.MsoListParagraphCxSpLast { margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.5in; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; }div.Section1 { page: Section1; }ol { margin-bottom: 0in; }ul { margin-bottom: 0in; }&lt;/style&gt;     &lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;I thought it would fun to give you some interesting facts about me. It’s the stuff that doesn’t usually come up in conversation. &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraph" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;1.&lt;span style="font-size-adjust: none; font-stretch: normal; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; line-height: normal;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;I value honesty. I try, even when I really don’t want to - to tell the truth.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; margin-left: 0.5in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;Sometimes, this can’t be accomplished tactfully. Often not. So if you don’t want to know if I think you drink to much, have bad judgment in men, or drive badly, don’t ask. I will tell you the truth.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraph" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;2.&lt;span style="font-size-adjust: none; font-stretch: normal; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; line-height: normal;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;I’m not afraid to die. &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; margin-left: 0.5in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;I’m afraid I’ll die before I get a chance to do everything I want to do.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraph" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;3.&lt;span style="font-size-adjust: none; font-stretch: normal; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; line-height: normal;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;I love living in New Hampshire.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; margin-left: 0.5in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;Truly, I do. I have lived in many different places and my current residence is by far, my favorite. &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraph" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;4.&lt;span style="font-size-adjust: none; font-stretch: normal; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; line-height: normal;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;When I was kid, I hated my name. &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; margin-left: 0.5in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;I wanted to change it to Aimee (spelling it this way, mattered). For six months I wouldn’t answer to anyone if they called me Joyce. This was problem at school. I was always being reprimanded by a teacher.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraph" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;5.&lt;span style="font-size-adjust: none; font-stretch: normal; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; line-height: normal;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;I was adopted.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; margin-left: 0.5in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;On October 12, 1991, my birthmother found me.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; margin-left: 0.5in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;On June 22, 1992, she married my birthfather. I’m the oldest of 8.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; margin-left: 45pt; text-indent: -9pt;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;•&lt;span style="font-size-adjust: none; font-stretch: normal; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; line-height: normal;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;3 1/2 brothers&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; margin-left: 45pt; text-indent: -9pt;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;•&lt;span style="font-size-adjust: none; font-stretch: normal; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; line-height: normal;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;2 1/2 sisters&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; margin-left: 45pt; text-indent: -9pt;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;•&lt;span style="font-size-adjust: none; font-stretch: normal; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; line-height: normal;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;1 Sister&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; margin-left: 45pt; text-indent: -9pt;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;•&lt;span style="font-size-adjust: none; font-stretch: normal; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; line-height: normal;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;1 Brother&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraph" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;6.&lt;span style="font-size-adjust: none; font-stretch: normal; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; line-height: normal;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;The Geraldo Rivera show called to ask me if I would be on their very first reunion show. A friend of my birthmother had called them and told them about our reunion.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; margin-left: 0.5in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;I said no. They didn't like it.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraph" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;7.&lt;span style="font-size-adjust: none; font-stretch: normal; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; line-height: normal;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;I have been the human in the life of 10 dogs. &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; margin-left: 0.5in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;Their names were:&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; margin-left: 45pt; text-indent: -9pt;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;•&lt;span style="font-size-adjust: none; font-stretch: normal; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; line-height: normal;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;Duke&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; margin-left: 45pt; text-indent: -9pt;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;•&lt;span style="font-size-adjust: none; font-stretch: normal; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; line-height: normal;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;Honcho&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; margin-left: 45pt; text-indent: -9pt;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;•&lt;span style="font-size-adjust: none; font-stretch: normal; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; line-height: normal;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;Wolfgang (my son's middle name is after this dog)&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; margin-left: 45pt; text-indent: -9pt;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;•&lt;span style="font-size-adjust: none; font-stretch: normal; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; line-height: normal;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;Paisley &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; margin-left: 45pt; text-indent: -9pt;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;•&lt;span style="font-size-adjust: none; font-stretch: normal; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; line-height: normal;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;Brownie (he came to live with us after my Grandfather died)&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; margin-left: 45pt; text-indent: -9pt;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;•&lt;span style="font-size-adjust: none; font-stretch: normal; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; line-height: normal;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;Cardea&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; margin-left: 45pt; text-indent: -9pt;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;•&lt;span style="font-size-adjust: none; font-stretch: normal; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; line-height: normal;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; Katie &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;(my duaghter's middle name is after this dog, but spelled Cait)&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; margin-left: 45pt; text-indent: -9pt;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;•&lt;span style="font-size-adjust: none; font-stretch: normal; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; line-height: normal;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;Daisy&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; margin-left: 45pt; text-indent: -9pt;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;•&lt;span style="font-size-adjust: none; font-stretch: normal; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; line-height: normal;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;Lucy&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; margin-left: 0.5in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;•&lt;span style="font-size-adjust: none; font-stretch: normal; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; line-height: normal;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;Thor, &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;my current dog. &lt;a href="http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/p-is-for-my-pug.html"&gt;He is a 3 year-old black pug&lt;/a&gt;. I love this dog!&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-1582887993384644336?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/1582887993384644336/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/s-is-for-seven-weird-facts-about-me.html#comment-form' title='8 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/1582887993384644336'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/1582887993384644336'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/s-is-for-seven-weird-facts-about-me.html' title='S is for Seven Weird Facts About Me'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>8</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-1994361131477377957</id><published>2011-04-21T20:33:00.003-04:00</published><updated>2011-04-21T20:37:35.595-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='NESCBWI'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='#atozchallenge'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='revision'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='blogging'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Agent'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='craft'/><title type='text'>Revision Tools For Revising Your Manuscript</title><content type='html'>Just the thought of revision can make you quake in your chair. Where to begin? What to think about? Revision can be overwhelming. Here are 10 points about revision to help get you in the mood for revising.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;1.&amp;nbsp; What is the story that I am telling?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;2.&amp;nbsp; How will my character change?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;ol&gt;&lt;/ol&gt;&lt;ul&gt;&lt;li&gt;Does my character get to where s/he needs to be?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;b&gt;No&lt;/b&gt; – How do I make her change?&lt;br /&gt;~&amp;nbsp; Introduce a crisis situation that makes my character &amp;nbsp;change.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;b&gt;Yes&lt;/b&gt; – Do the things that happen along the way help get my character where s/he needs to be?&lt;/li&gt;&lt;/ul&gt;3.&amp;nbsp; What does it mean to move forward?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;ol&gt;&lt;/ol&gt;&lt;ul&gt;&lt;li&gt;Reveal something about the character.&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;Propel the plot.&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;Build a relationship that is important later in the book.&lt;/li&gt;&lt;/ul&gt;4.&amp;nbsp; Summarize the things that don’t move the story forward.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;ul&gt;&lt;li&gt;An example of this is Charlie Brown, Linus, and Lucy speaking, but the adults always sound like, &lt;br /&gt;“Blah, blah, blah.”&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;One sentence summary of the scene.&lt;/li&gt;&lt;/ul&gt;5.&amp;nbsp; Is my main plot a character development arc?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;ul&gt;&lt;li&gt;Subplots&lt;br /&gt;~&amp;nbsp; Do they fit in?&lt;br /&gt;~&amp;nbsp; When do they resolve?&lt;br /&gt;~&amp;nbsp; How do they resolve?&lt;/li&gt;&lt;/ul&gt;6.&amp;nbsp; Characters&lt;br /&gt;&lt;ul&gt;&lt;li&gt;What are my character's quirks and personality traits?&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;Do my secondary/minor characters grow with each appearance they make in the book? &lt;/li&gt;&lt;/ul&gt;&lt;ul&gt;&lt;li&gt;Do my characters have unique voices?&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;Do they reveal everything about their characters?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;An example of this is &lt;i&gt;sub&lt;/i&gt; vs &lt;i&gt;grinder&lt;/i&gt; (sandwich)&lt;br /&gt;Their socio-economic placement&lt;/li&gt;&lt;/ul&gt;&lt;ul&gt;&lt;li&gt;Does the dialogue let their relationships evolve?&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;How authentic do they sound?&lt;/li&gt;&lt;/ul&gt;8.&amp;nbsp; Setting and Description&lt;br /&gt;&lt;ul&gt;&lt;li&gt;Picture it then brushstroke the description. Let the reader envision it, unless it must be specific.&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;For it to be specific, it must be important later in the book. If not, take it out.&lt;/li&gt;&lt;/ul&gt;9.&amp;nbsp; Wordsmith&lt;br /&gt;&lt;ul&gt;&lt;li&gt;Search for commonly used, but unnecessary words.&lt;br /&gt;~&amp;nbsp; Examples are just, so, next, that, but.&lt;/li&gt;&lt;/ul&gt;10. Show, don’t tell.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;What works for you?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: xx-small;"&gt;&lt;span&gt;formerly my 11/17/10&lt;/span&gt; post ~&amp;nbsp; Revision Toolbox&lt;/span&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-1994361131477377957?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/1994361131477377957/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/revision-tools-for-revising-your.html#comment-form' title='6 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/1994361131477377957'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/1994361131477377957'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/revision-tools-for-revising-your.html' title='Revision Tools For Revising Your Manuscript'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>6</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-190206406450943080</id><published>2011-04-21T20:08:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2011-04-21T20:08:47.499-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='picture books publishing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='NESCBWI'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Agent'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='blogging'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='revision'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='craft'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Picture Books'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writers'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writer'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Authors'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Novels'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='#atozchallenge'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Conferences'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Conference'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Middle Grade Novels'/><title type='text'>Q is for Questions Asked by First Time Conference Attendees</title><content type='html'>&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-S3sbBkUvlAA/TbDGgC5nRsI/AAAAAAAAANA/UlBws3dMdXk/s1600/question-mark_2158.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="320" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-S3sbBkUvlAA/TbDGgC5nRsI/AAAAAAAAANA/UlBws3dMdXk/s320/question-mark_2158.jpg" width="281" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Are you going to your first writer’s conference this year? Are you wondering how to get the most from your first time?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;If your first time is a large regional conference, I recommend you focus on craft. The New England chapter of the Society of Children’s Book Writer’s and Illustrators Conference is designed to have something for all levels of experience. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;For first-timers, there is a Friday afternoon workshop, Conference Orientation. This workshops is an excellent way to get a quick over view and great tips on making your first conference work for you.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Peer Critique Workshop will explain how to give and receive critiques. Other writers are some of the best sources for Learning from. Most have been exactly where you are, at the beginning of their writing journey. And remember, there is something to be learned from each person, even if you don’t agree with their style or comments. Dig deep and be objective. Take what you learn home and start your own critique group.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I hope you registered for Saturday’s Publishing Basics: The Myths and Realities. You’ll learn about the basics of manuscripts, researching and finding publishers, agents, how to handle rejection, and what to do when you sell your first book.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Sunday has a great workshop for beginning illustrators. The Illustrator’s Academy focus on revision in illustration.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Most of all, relax and smile. Say hello and introduce yourself. We’ve all been a beginner at something. Writing can be solitary but that doesn’t mean you are alone.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;What tips and suggestions can you give first time Writer conference attendees?&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-190206406450943080?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/190206406450943080/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/q-is-for-questions-asked-by-first-time.html#comment-form' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/190206406450943080'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/190206406450943080'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/q-is-for-questions-asked-by-first-time.html' title='Q is for Questions Asked by First Time Conference Attendees'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-S3sbBkUvlAA/TbDGgC5nRsI/AAAAAAAAANA/UlBws3dMdXk/s72-c/question-mark_2158.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-4013784876444433435</id><published>2011-04-20T21:32:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2011-04-20T21:32:17.978-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='picture books publishing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Family'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='#atozchallenge'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Picture Books'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Pugs'/><title type='text'>P is for My Pug!</title><content type='html'>Yes I have a Pug!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-VToXJqcQAoQ/Ta-IXFVduOI/AAAAAAAAAM0/mRaKYk8TKAI/s1600/p1.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-VToXJqcQAoQ/Ta-IXFVduOI/AAAAAAAAAM0/mRaKYk8TKAI/s1600/p1.jpg" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I used to show and breed Rottweilers.&lt;br /&gt;Both are black, make rude noises, and think cats belong to them.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;But my Pug,&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-mwRDRtdff5o/Ta-InCkj95I/AAAAAAAAAM4/oq-_85Btd_Y/s1600/p2.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-mwRDRtdff5o/Ta-InCkj95I/AAAAAAAAAM4/oq-_85Btd_Y/s1600/p2.jpg" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Makes the best faces!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;See what I mean?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-xDokgYI3eNA/Ta-I1229nkI/AAAAAAAAAM8/xzDfNW6pj1Q/s1600/p3.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-xDokgYI3eNA/Ta-I1229nkI/AAAAAAAAAM8/xzDfNW6pj1Q/s1600/p3.jpg" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-4013784876444433435?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/4013784876444433435/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/p-is-for-my-pug.html#comment-form' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/4013784876444433435'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/4013784876444433435'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/p-is-for-my-pug.html' title='P is for My Pug!'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-VToXJqcQAoQ/Ta-IXFVduOI/AAAAAAAAAM0/mRaKYk8TKAI/s72-c/p1.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-2689618296689107266</id><published>2011-04-20T20:33:00.002-04:00</published><updated>2011-04-20T20:45:18.295-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='#atozchallenge'/><title type='text'>Outer vs Inner Journey</title><content type='html'>What’s the difference?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The Outer journey is all about what your character wants, it’s their ultimate goal. The goal is always tangible. Moving through the outer journey means they have to overcome the obstacles that prevent them from attaining the tangible. More often than not, this journey involves dealing with treachery, duplicity, physical dangers which are all about keeping your character from easily achieving their goal.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The Inner Journey is the emotional path your character needs to navigate so they can grow and change. In the end, your character may or may not get what they want.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Your character’s journey is comprised of these two aspects. For your story to be successful, your character must travel both simultaneously. This creates the tension which moves your story forward.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Which do you think has more power, the inner or the outer journey?&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-2689618296689107266?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/2689618296689107266/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/outer-vs-inner-conflict.html#comment-form' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/2689618296689107266'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/2689618296689107266'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/outer-vs-inner-conflict.html' title='Outer vs Inner Journey'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-8871835026282088017</id><published>2011-04-19T14:27:00.001-04:00</published><updated>2011-04-19T15:51:09.766-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='NESCBWI'/><title type='text'>NESCBWI</title><content type='html'>Stands for &lt;a href="http://www.nescbwi.org/"&gt;New England Society of Children’s Writers and Illustrators&lt;/a&gt;. This year, NESCBWI celebrates its 25th anniversary at the May 13-15 Celebrating Milestones conference. Keynote speakers are Jane Yolen, Tomie DePaola, Lin Oliver, Steve Mooser, and Harold Underdown. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Watch for my up to the minute tweets @thewritejoyce and hourly blog updates!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Follow the New England SCBWI Twitter account, &lt;a href="http://twitter.com/#%21/nescbwi"&gt;@nescbwi&lt;/a&gt; and use the &lt;a href="http://twitter.com/#%21/search/%23nescbwi11"&gt;#nescbwi11&lt;/a&gt; hash-tag to folow the conference discussion.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-md9A1mmjNCM/Ta3Tg3_cyCI/AAAAAAAAAMw/rwrYd-i6sDg/s1600/nescbwiconf.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="182" src="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-md9A1mmjNCM/Ta3Tg3_cyCI/AAAAAAAAAMw/rwrYd-i6sDg/s400/nescbwiconf.jpg" width="400" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-8871835026282088017?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/8871835026282088017/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/nescbwi.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/8871835026282088017'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/8871835026282088017'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/nescbwi.html' title='NESCBWI'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-md9A1mmjNCM/Ta3Tg3_cyCI/AAAAAAAAAMw/rwrYd-i6sDg/s72-c/nescbwiconf.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-6176831146578586370</id><published>2011-04-17T13:19:00.002-04:00</published><updated>2011-04-17T21:01:19.342-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='mourning'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Family'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='#atozchallenge'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Living'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Reflection'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='friends'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Inner Peace'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Love'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='saying goodbye'/><title type='text'>M is for Mourning</title><content type='html'>I haven't always been the perfect daughter! Who is? My mother and I have always had a somewhat volatile relationship. Three and a half years ago, we had a terrible falling out. I chose not allow her behavior in front of my children to continue.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I stopped speaking to her, and because of my choice, the remainder of my family chose not to speak to me. I mourned this "death" for a very long time. I wrote this poem long before I knew she was ill. Dying from brain cancer.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;i&gt;MOURNING CLOAK&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;i&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The mourning happens&lt;br /&gt;When I miss you most,&lt;br /&gt;Mother.&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;i&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Each longing, a small death,&lt;br /&gt;Leading me through our &lt;br /&gt;family crypt of dysfunction.&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;i&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I break the lock, swatting cobwebs of tangled&lt;br /&gt;memories from my face, spewing angry epitaphs, &lt;br /&gt;etched into your granite heart.&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;i&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Is your skin now paper, thin? &lt;br /&gt;Have you forgotten what it is, you need to remember?&lt;br /&gt;Or do you prefer age as your excuse.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The sharp shards of your slated words&lt;br /&gt;impale me, one at a time.&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;i&gt;"I. Wish."&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;i&gt;The “Never,” scraping, flaying me, &lt;br /&gt;The “had,” exposing, tearing away,&lt;br /&gt;“You!”  &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I inhale, turn back to my life without you,&lt;br /&gt;Shrug off the mourning cloak&lt;br /&gt;Of my life, of you.&lt;br /&gt;I lock the crypt once more.&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;As of today, she is home from the nursing home, Hospice caring for her.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I saw my mother two months ago, she still recognized me, her grandchildren, and my husband. She could hardly speak. But she knew us, knew we had come, that I was there.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;We've visited her twice since. Her last words to me were 4, 5 , 6, 7. This is how she responded to all questions, counting. Counting down, counting seconds?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Now she is completely lost now, locked inside her head. No more words.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I love you, Mom!&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-6176831146578586370?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/6176831146578586370/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/m-is-for-mourning.html#comment-form' title='6 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/6176831146578586370'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/6176831146578586370'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/m-is-for-mourning.html' title='M is for Mourning'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>6</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-2573569432633890098</id><published>2011-04-17T12:32:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2011-04-17T12:32:40.316-04:00</updated><title type='text'>YAtopia: Pitch Contest with Natalie Fischer!</title><content type='html'>&lt;a href="http://yatopia.blogspot.com/2011/04/pitch-contest-with-natalie-fischer.html?spref=bl"&gt;YAtopia: Pitch Contest with Natalie Fischer!&lt;/a&gt;: "Hello guys. I have another amazing opportunity for you. Fantastic agent, Natalie Fischer of Bradford Lit agency, is going to be hosting this..."&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-2573569432633890098?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='related' href='http://yatopia.blogspot.com/2011/04/pitch-contest-with-natalie-fischer.html?spref=bl' title='YAtopia: Pitch Contest with Natalie Fischer!'/><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/2573569432633890098/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/yatopia-pitch-contest-with-natalie.html#comment-form' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/2573569432633890098'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/2573569432633890098'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/yatopia-pitch-contest-with-natalie.html' title='YAtopia: Pitch Contest with Natalie Fischer!'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-4955648977384672526</id><published>2011-04-16T09:22:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2011-04-16T09:22:43.343-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='#atozchallenge'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Agent'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='toolbox'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Middle Grade Novels'/><title type='text'>Labyrinth, Lost, Ladder, and Lager</title><content type='html'>&lt;style&gt;@font-face {  font-family: "Cambria";}p.MsoNormal, li.MsoNormal, div.MsoNormal { margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; }div.Section1 { page: Section1; }&lt;/style&gt;     &lt;br /&gt;&lt;style&gt;@font-face {  font-family: "Cambria";}p.MsoNormal, li.MsoNormal, div.MsoNormal { margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; }p.MsoListParagraph, li.MsoListParagraph, div.MsoListParagraph { margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.5in; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; }p.MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst, li.MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst, div.MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst { margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.5in; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; }p.MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle, li.MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle, div.MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle { margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.5in; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; }p.MsoListParagraphCxSpLast, li.MsoListParagraphCxSpLast, div.MsoListParagraphCxSpLast { margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.5in; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; }div.Section1 { page: Section1; }ol { margin-bottom: 0in; }ul { margin-bottom: 0in; }&lt;/style&gt;         &lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Sometimes you become tangled in the structure of your book. You go back to check a detail or fact, and you find yourself lost in a labyrinth full of dead ends. The structure you thought you had so carefully crafted, has unraveled.&amp;nbsp;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-g4WpOKxB058/TamVtxdp04I/AAAAAAAAAMo/eztiMOtaEkM/s1600/lab.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="223" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-g4WpOKxB058/TamVtxdp04I/AAAAAAAAAMo/eztiMOtaEkM/s320/lab.jpg" width="320" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Being lost is not the worst situation to find yourself in. We all have a writer’s toolbox, but do you have an escape route?&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;How about a ladder? &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-O0N0VAlqp3I/TamWK63V0iI/AAAAAAAAAMs/aKqBc_6nlEQ/s1600/laddar.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="193" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-O0N0VAlqp3I/TamWK63V0iI/AAAAAAAAAMs/aKqBc_6nlEQ/s320/laddar.jpg" width="320" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Sometimes you need to be able see the whole structure and rise above the Labyrinth to find your way around the dead ends. My ladder does this.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;It's my outline. &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;When I started my first novel, chapter one spilled out. Wow, writing was so easy! After six months, I had a perfect chapter one and no more. I knew where I wanted my book to end, but I had no idea how to get there.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;A very wise, very well published writer said to me, write an outline. I cringed. That would be so much extra work, I said. &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;The look she gave me conveyed how lazy she thought I was and that I would never be a real writer. What she actually told me was was:&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst" style="text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;span&gt;1.&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;Write one or two sentences about what needs to happen in each chapter.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;span&gt;2.&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;Don’t feel locked into the outline; let it be alive and allowed to change.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;I started with a ten-chapter outline. I know, I can see your eyes rolling, only ten chapters, but from that short outline I was able to expand and build my story’s structure. The final revision of my middle grade novel has twenty-eight chapters and clear path.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Lager!&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;I just like how this word makes my mouth move - say it! Lager.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-4955648977384672526?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/4955648977384672526/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/labyrinth-lost-ladder-and-lager.html#comment-form' title='3 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/4955648977384672526'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/4955648977384672526'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/labyrinth-lost-ladder-and-lager.html' title='Labyrinth, Lost, Ladder, and Lager'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-g4WpOKxB058/TamVtxdp04I/AAAAAAAAAMo/eztiMOtaEkM/s72-c/lab.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>3</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-1029899753373345159</id><published>2011-04-13T18:19:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2011-04-13T18:19:04.188-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='blog'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='#atozchallenge'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Kendra'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='blogging'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Dyslexia'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Middle Grade Novels'/><title type='text'>K is for Kendra</title><content type='html'>This is an abridged version of an earlier post.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Well it’s official, my daughter is a  poet. This year has marked a major change in how Kendra’s feels about  writing. A positive change, something I was sure would never happen.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Everything  changed in October 2009, once she was diagnosed with Dyslexia. Kendra  hated writing, cried on the mornings she had to go into school knowing  it was spelling test day.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-gAILt6MDZDI/S5QIjPoGqCI/AAAAAAAAAEI/YbEzJcKxOeg/s1600/dyslexia2.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-gAILt6MDZDI/S5QIjPoGqCI/AAAAAAAAAEI/YbEzJcKxOeg/s1600/dyslexia2.jpg" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div style="text-align: left;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="text-align: left;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="text-align: left;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="text-align: left;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="text-align: left;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="text-align: left;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="text-align: left;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="text-align: left;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="text-align: left;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="text-align: left;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="text-align: left;"&gt;This is what dyslexia looks like to Kendra.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="text-align: left;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="text-align: left;"&gt; Kendra figured out how to compensate for her  dyslexia, and overcame the dyslexic obstacles preventing her from  reading. To this day she can’t explain how she figured it all out, she  just did. Now, two years later, she is an avid reader, who cannot spell  at all. I don’t know how she does it, but it is amazing!&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: left;"&gt;Kendra  keeps trying though. She writes her own poetry and stories, and spell  check is her pal. On most days, writing is all done with a pencil, and  on these days she is still frustrated. She has to go back and read what  she has written, which is hellish for her. It’s not easy to read her  writing, everything looks the same to her. Phonetically spelled words  are never written the same way twice. It’s hard work. But, she keeps  trying and this is why I am so proud of her.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: left;"&gt;The poem below is beautiful, just like Kendra. Here it is:&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: left;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: left;"&gt;&lt;b&gt;&lt;u&gt;What If Trees Had No Leaves&lt;/u&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: left;"&gt;By Kendra Johnson&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: left;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: left;"&gt;What if trees had no leaves? &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: left;"&gt;They would look bare, &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: left;"&gt;shiver in the cold,&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: left;"&gt;look lonely, like all their best friends &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: left;"&gt;will never come back.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: left;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: left;"&gt;And everything would darken in the snow,&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: left;"&gt;Finally, the snow melts, &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: left;"&gt;The leaves don’t come back.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: left;"&gt;Though it is lighter than in winter,&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: left;"&gt;The trees were yearning for their leaves.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: left;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: left;"&gt;After crying a hundred tears of missing them,&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: left;"&gt;the trees finally go silent.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="text-align: left;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-1029899753373345159?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/1029899753373345159/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/k-is-for-kendra.html#comment-form' title='6 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/1029899753373345159'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/1029899753373345159'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/k-is-for-kendra.html' title='K is for Kendra'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-gAILt6MDZDI/S5QIjPoGqCI/AAAAAAAAAEI/YbEzJcKxOeg/s72-c/dyslexia2.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>6</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-5900882028912265431</id><published>2011-04-13T14:50:00.004-04:00</published><updated>2011-04-13T21:25:52.711-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Young Adult Novels'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='blog'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='#atozchallenge'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Reflection'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='blogging'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='craft'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Historical Fiction'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Poetry'/><title type='text'>J is for Just Remember</title><content type='html'>I’ve been thinking about how the small things that happen to us, change us. I’m well traveled. My honeymoon was a three week adventure, driving around Namibia (what used to be German Southwest Africa) in an unair-conditioned Ford, diesel station wagon and camping under the stars. A weekend adventure to Costa Rica to zip line the canopy, only to sprain my ankle so badly, I couldn’t. Skinny-dipping in November in the Baltic Sea off of Sweden.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Visiting the German City of Dachau, on a rainy winter’s day to visit the concentration camp.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;From the car, we followed the signs for the entrance, down a path along a gray concrete wall. A group of Czech teens were laughing and joking ahead of us. I think I looked up then because the wall seemed unnaturally high. That was when I realized we were walking the exterior perimeter of the camp. A guard tower peaked through the trees and vines, chilling me. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;My husband took my hand.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Approaching the entrance wasn’t difficult, what made it hard was knowing that I was about to willingly walk through the gate when others had never had a choice. I needed to compose myself. I closed my eyes and was instantly swept back by the smell of fear coming from the railroad bed under my feet. Time was disjointed, I had to open my eyes. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I heard my name and moved closer to the gate. This is what I saw.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-rCQulnwb_FI/TaXvHDd8d1I/AAAAAAAAAMk/gPkK1UO7EKE/s1600/DSCN1256.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="300" src="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-rCQulnwb_FI/TaXvHDd8d1I/AAAAAAAAAMk/gPkK1UO7EKE/s400/DSCN1256.jpg" width="400" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="text-align: right;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span id="goog_635800952"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span id="goog_635800953"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span id="goog_635800954"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span id="goog_635800955"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Being there was eerie, as again time wavered between then and now. The place wreaked of despair. My eyes watered the entire time.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;As dusk approached, groups of people moved toward the gate. The Czech teens, subdued.&lt;br /&gt;No shouts of Halt as I exited through the gate. No rapid fire machine guns popping. Silence except for the footfalls of those around me.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Then the sky exploded. A sonic boom, my husband said. I felt time tear and this is what happened.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: left;"&gt;&lt;u&gt;DACHAU REVISITED&lt;/u&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Metallic drizzle glazes the decades.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Knees tremble stepping from the car.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Our forced march through time defies fear.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Subtle grays disguise the truth,&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;a spasm of recognition etches guard tower, ruined wall.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Now covered in vines, leaves of brown&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;plaster tightly to bricks and mortar. &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;I walk, eyes straight ahead. &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Grays shift in the corner of my vision, &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;twist into muted shapes of rigor mortis.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Wrought iron lies greet me. &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Beyond, the shadows coagulate into ghosts of the once-living&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;wearing gray and white stripes like the criss-cross of barbed wire.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Gravel crunches underfoot; I taste ashes in my mouth.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Forced march -- double-time -- down the avenue to the gate.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;I feel the noose around my neck, choking.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Ovens cold and dark, hungry lips coated with what I do not want &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;to see. I can’t close my eyes,&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;I don’t want to look.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;I can’t stop.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Jostled and bumped by mournful souls, I flee&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;through the gate of lies.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Truth explodes around me.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;A sonic boom rips through the air, tearing time.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Ghosts walk along side me, through me&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Liberated.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-5900882028912265431?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/5900882028912265431/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/j-is-for-just-remember.html#comment-form' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/5900882028912265431'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/5900882028912265431'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/j-is-for-just-remember.html' title='J is for Just Remember'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-rCQulnwb_FI/TaXvHDd8d1I/AAAAAAAAAMk/gPkK1UO7EKE/s72-c/DSCN1256.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-2528811296871345513</id><published>2011-04-11T20:13:00.002-04:00</published><updated>2011-04-11T20:15:52.585-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='picture books publishing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writer'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Novels'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Young Adult Novels'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Ideas'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='blog'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='#atozchallenge'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='blogging'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Picture Books'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Historical Fiction'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writers'/><title type='text'>The Glimmer of an Idea</title><content type='html'>That glimmer of an idea, the one that won’t let you sleep, or focus on your family. It shimmers at the most annoying times, just out of reach. You can hear your brain scream as you try to snare that illusive thought. Stretching your gray matter, hoping to capture any essence of this magnificent idea before it slips away.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;If you can lasso that runaway thought, form a solid, cohesive concept, you may just have the start of something brilliant. It’s the holding onto that hint of an idea which causes the brain scream. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I’ve tried the “carry around the notebook and pen” approach, but no idea ever forms when I’m prepared for it. Instead, it raps the inside of my skull every once in a while, reminding me it’s still there. Then the day comes, when it dislodges from the gray matter and bursts forth in full color. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;If I don’t stop what I am doing the moment this happens, it’s lost. So now I scribble on whatever is available, usually on my arm. Sometimes my kids arm. Just a word or two is all it takes for me to remember. Then I race home, power up the laptop and tell the kids to fend for themselves for the rest of the night.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;How do you do it?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-o-xeR4HzI0o/TaOZEYTfkAI/AAAAAAAAAMg/_V2rBi_Kcog/s1600/6a00d834256bce53ef0147e2554279970b-800wi.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="204" src="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-o-xeR4HzI0o/TaOZEYTfkAI/AAAAAAAAAMg/_V2rBi_Kcog/s320/6a00d834256bce53ef0147e2554279970b-800wi.jpg" width="320" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-2528811296871345513?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/2528811296871345513/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/i-is-for-ideas-that-glimmer.html#comment-form' title='9 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/2528811296871345513'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/2528811296871345513'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/i-is-for-ideas-that-glimmer.html' title='The Glimmer of an Idea'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-o-xeR4HzI0o/TaOZEYTfkAI/AAAAAAAAAMg/_V2rBi_Kcog/s72-c/6a00d834256bce53ef0147e2554279970b-800wi.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>9</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-2691670251885205178</id><published>2011-04-10T18:53:00.004-04:00</published><updated>2011-04-10T18:56:18.231-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Trees'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='#atozchallenge'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Spring'/><title type='text'>A little Spring for Sunday</title><content type='html'>&lt;span style="font-size: large;"&gt;A little something for Sunday.&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: large;"&gt;I can't wait for Spring!&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: large;"&gt;This view is just around the corner.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-cy2GSRuEeTo/TaI0HJRx_II/AAAAAAAAAMc/z7Alu1T1dTI/s1600/DSCN1086.JPG" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="300" src="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-cy2GSRuEeTo/TaI0HJRx_II/AAAAAAAAAMc/z7Alu1T1dTI/s400/DSCN1086.JPG" width="400" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: large;"&gt;I love walking under this tree on the way to my office.&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: large;"&gt;I love trees.&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: large;"&gt;There, I said it!&lt;/span&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-2691670251885205178?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/2691670251885205178/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/little-think-spring-for-sunday.html#comment-form' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/2691670251885205178'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/2691670251885205178'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/little-think-spring-for-sunday.html' title='A little Spring for Sunday'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-cy2GSRuEeTo/TaI0HJRx_II/AAAAAAAAAMc/z7Alu1T1dTI/s72-c/DSCN1086.JPG' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-8364191821433534060</id><published>2011-04-10T16:24:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2011-04-10T16:24:55.620-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Agents'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='#atozchallenge'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Historical Fiction'/><title type='text'>H is for Historical Fiction and Teens</title><content type='html'>I love Young Adult Historical Fiction! Done right, I get lost in it. I feel it, can taste it, and know I have been transported back. Over done, and I close the book. You know what I mean. The pages and pages of description, the words you skim. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;This happens because the writer seems to thinks the reader needs to be told, over-and-over again, what the important things are. Just because they are teens, doesn’t mean they don’t get it the first time. Actually, I think teens get it faster than many adults. The writer has to learned to trust their reader.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;That’s right. There comes a point when you have to trust the reader to get it, the first time. (This is an example. I’ll do it again throughout this post).&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Show it well just once, the reader will devour your words. Tell them, and tell them again, they’ll put the book down.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Repetition isn’t a good thing in any novel, but in YA historical fiction, the reader begins to feel patronized by the repeated historical references and facts. Use what you have, but disseminate the information and move along. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Teens are smart. We just need to be smarter. I know how to make them want to read historical fiction, pass a law saying they can’t read it until their twenty-one. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I’ve said it enough.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-8364191821433534060?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/8364191821433534060/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/h-is-for-historical-fiction-and-teens.html#comment-form' title='3 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/8364191821433534060'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/8364191821433534060'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/h-is-for-historical-fiction-and-teens.html' title='H is for Historical Fiction and Teens'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>3</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-8667032027327960453</id><published>2011-04-08T09:42:00.001-04:00</published><updated>2011-04-08T16:22:15.440-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Editor'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Family'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='life'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Agent'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='friends'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writers'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Agents'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writer'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='#atozchallenge'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Conferences'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Conference'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Inner Peace'/><title type='text'>Gratitude</title><content type='html'>Sometimes I have to be hit in the head with it. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-inA7KF-RQLY/TZ8PCXqTdBI/AAAAAAAAAMQ/oloNjsFbRy0/s1600/gratitude-rock.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="150" src="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-inA7KF-RQLY/TZ8PCXqTdBI/AAAAAAAAAMQ/oloNjsFbRy0/s200/gratitude-rock.jpg" width="200" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Today I share it.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I am grateful to my husband for allowing me the flexibility to pursue my dreams. I’m grateful for my children who love to travel, aren’t followers, dream big, and are voracious readers.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I am especially grateful for my writer friends. They challenge my writing, expect nothing but the very best, and always tell me the truth. Even when I don’t want to hear it.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I am truly and sincerely grateful for the unexpected encounters with some of the most amazing people from around the world. Whether here in the United States, or when abroad, or via the web. These are the people who end up never knowing they have had a profound affect on me and changed me. Given me some small thing, whether a word of encouragement or a smile, that has made me a better person.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Thank you!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-WbXy2ZTJhMA/TZ8QuY3A1sI/AAAAAAAAAMU/a7Y66uM1ms8/s1600/gratitude.png" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="159" src="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-WbXy2ZTJhMA/TZ8QuY3A1sI/AAAAAAAAAMU/a7Y66uM1ms8/s200/gratitude.png" width="200" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-8667032027327960453?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/8667032027327960453/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/gratitude.html#comment-form' title='15 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/8667032027327960453'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/8667032027327960453'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/gratitude.html' title='Gratitude'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-inA7KF-RQLY/TZ8PCXqTdBI/AAAAAAAAAMQ/oloNjsFbRy0/s72-c/gratitude-rock.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>15</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-2678593541265974514</id><published>2011-04-07T19:53:00.001-04:00</published><updated>2011-04-07T22:03:22.777-04:00</updated><title type='text'>F**k'd</title><content type='html'>Got you to look!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Isn’t that what the F-word is all about? Getting attention.   Problem is — the word is so overused, no one cares anymore. Overuse has diminished this word’s power.  &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Don’t get me wrong, I’ve been known to drop the f-bomb on occasion. What made me realize the word had lost it's power, was the day I cut my finger slicing carrots and couldn't find my keys to go get it stitched up. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I must have sounded like a cannon battalion shooting off F-bombs. My eleven year-old daughter, called to me from her bedroom. “Nice mouth, Mom! You have a large vocabulary, use it,” and slammed the door. I was stunned. She didn't even bother to come see if I was all right. I stood there dripping blood on the kitchen floor, finger wrapped in a wad of paper towels. Waiting.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;No one came. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Except the dog. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;And he didn’t bring my keys.  &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Guess what I was thinking? &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Later, when I had finally made it to the emergency room and sat waiting for my turn, I thought about this word. I knew I have always preferred not to use the F-word when I’m writing. Particularly, when writing for Young Adults. Most teens use the word more frequently than I do. I knew it wouldn't be a problem for them. Rather, I knew it was my problem. I like to make up curses.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I'm good at it. Like Shakespeare.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I should be honest here. I've used the F-word once, in my first YA, and only because I’d chosen to do so for a specific reason. I wanted to show my character evolving and changing, becoming hard and edgy, due to the circumstances of her journey.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I thought about how when you say the F-word out loud, you can say it low or shout it. You can snarl or soften it. Make it mean different things by the way you say it.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;On paper though, it’s hard. Angry. And carries intense meaning.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;On paper, it looks just like what it is.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;FUCK&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Now, I try to use it wisely.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-2678593541265974514?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/2678593541265974514/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/get-fkd.html#comment-form' title='9 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/2678593541265974514'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/2678593541265974514'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/get-fkd.html' title='F**k&apos;d'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>9</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-1433682717340497713</id><published>2011-04-06T13:42:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2011-04-06T13:42:08.747-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Novels'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Editor'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Queries'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='#atozchallenge'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Books'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Agent'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Query'/><title type='text'>E is for Email Queries</title><content type='html'>Don’t leave! Yes, I used the word query. Truth is, you can’t get published if you don’t query. Most editors and agents prefer this method of submission. It’s green, eco-friendly,&amp;nbsp; and postage-free.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;It’s also so darn easy if you do your homework. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Just like in the “old” days, there are submission guidelines you need to follow. There is no excuse not to know them. Just about everyone has a website or blog where these guidelines can be found. This is not a hardcore, you must do it like this, set of directions.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I'm just offering some common sense things to think about. So here goes.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Use the correct email address. Does it go to a Query@email.com address or to s specific person's email. Make sure you know.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Subject Line - use it. Include the word query, that’s what it is. Not using the word, won’t get them to open the email any faster. Actually, it might be the reason they delete it, unread.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Salutation - be professional. No “Whaat’s up, Dog! Dear Mr. (insert last name), Ms. (insert last name), or if you are on first name basis, Dear (insert name).&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Body Text - keep it short and to the point. You know the cliche; hook, line, and sinker. Use it.&lt;br /&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; Hook - Exactly what it sounds like, with name of project and page count.&lt;br /&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; Line - One paragraph, description or pitch.&lt;br /&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; Sinker - Tell them if you have have included sample pages and who you are. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Signature Block - Name and contact information, Include your email, web or blog address, and&amp;nbsp; a phone number.&lt;br /&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; Example:&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; Samantha Writer&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; youremailaddress(@)email.com&lt;br /&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; Writetoblog.bloghost.com&lt;br /&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; 555-555-5555&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Know what to include:&lt;br /&gt;Did they ask for a synopsis and the first chapter?&lt;br /&gt;Do you insert into the email or as an attachment?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Everyone has different preferences. Make sure you know them.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Do you have any great email query tips? I would love for you to share them. Post them in comments.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-1433682717340497713?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/1433682717340497713/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/e-is-for-email-queries.html#comment-form' title='11 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/1433682717340497713'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/1433682717340497713'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/e-is-for-email-queries.html' title='E is for Email Queries'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>11</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-8542048732800450071</id><published>2011-04-05T18:13:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2011-04-05T18:13:04.956-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Teens'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Dystopian'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Young Adult Novels'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='#atozchallenge'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Middle Grade Novels'/><title type='text'>Dystopian, Not Didactic</title><content type='html'>Dystopian novels continue to be popular with Teen readers.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Is  this because many dystopian worlds mimic current trends in today’s  young adult society?&amp;nbsp; Or, could it be, this group of readers more  closely identify with oppression and control and how it leads to  rebellion?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Teens want to be allowed to chose their friends, destinations, and relationships without parental intervention. In &lt;a href="http://www.newyorker.com/arts/critics/atlarge/2010/06/14/100614crat_atlarge_miller#ixzz1Idw99WVh"&gt;The New Yorker article &lt;u&gt;Fresh Hell&lt;/u&gt;, writer Laura Miller&lt;/a&gt;  says, “The world of our hovered-over teens and preteens may be safer,  but it’s also less conducive to adventure, and therefore to adventure  stories.”&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Today’s teens live in well-defined, segmented worlds.  Their days cycle through home, school, activities, sports, all of which  have rules set forth by adults and must be followed. They can be reached  by parents at all times by cell phone and texting.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Many  Dystopian worlds emulate the oppression and control which many teens  feel they are made to endure. For today's teens, their everyday  encapsulated worlds are really dystopian in nature and camouflaged as  daily life.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;These dystopian heroes do what many teens  cannot, they go beyond questioning, they resist authority, and in the  end successfully rebel. Often, finding the outcome far from perfect, but  knowing change occurred.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;If you were to write a dystopian novel, what would your world be like?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;b&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Recommended Reading List&lt;/b&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The Ember Series by Jeanne Duprau&lt;br /&gt;Feed by MT Anderson&lt;br /&gt;The forest of Hands and Teeth by Carrie Ryan&lt;br /&gt;The Giver by Lois Lowry&lt;br /&gt;How I live Now by Meg Rosoff&lt;br /&gt;The Hunger Games Trilogy by Suazanne COllins&lt;br /&gt;The Maze Runner by James Dashner&lt;br /&gt;Unwind by Neal Shusterman&lt;br /&gt;The Moon Crash Trilogy by Beth Pfifer&lt;br /&gt;Birthmarked byCaragh M. O’Brien&lt;br /&gt;Matched by Ally Condie&lt;br /&gt;The Uglies Trilogy by Scott Westerfeld&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-8542048732800450071?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/8542048732800450071/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/dystopian-not-didactic.html#comment-form' title='5 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/8542048732800450071'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/8542048732800450071'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/dystopian-not-didactic.html' title='Dystopian, Not Didactic'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>5</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-5120007499598866073</id><published>2011-04-04T09:39:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2011-04-04T09:39:57.109-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Young Adult Novels'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='#atozchallenge'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='craft'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Middle Grade Novels'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Love'/><title type='text'>The Importance of Crafting Compelling Characters</title><content type='html'>You  know Katniss Everdeen, Harry Potter, and Bella Swan - these aren’t just  names, they’re characters whose secrets you know, desires you  understand, and whose fears you wish you could quell. Characters so  alive, you’ve fallen in love with them.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Why does this happen? &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Not by accident. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;These characters are carefully crafted so their actions, dialogue and choices show (yes,  show) how they think and what they believe. Crafted to make their flaws  stand out, their secrets weigh heavy, to allow their fears to be exploited. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;As my character’s life unfolds, my goal is to make it easy for the reader to get caught up in the character’s  actions and words.&amp;nbsp; If I do it right, I can facilitate an internal dialogue where  the reader reacts emotionally and wants to tell my character not to  make that choice or say those words. Where the readers wants to send warnings, because they care about what is happening the character.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Of course my character will make  the wrong choice or say the wrong thing, they have to. The reader can’t  change what will happen, but they will love my character more for making mistakes, for being human.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ultimately, I want my reader to cry when my character pays the price for their  mistakes, and laugh and cheer them on when they grow and change. Most  of all, I want to make reader believe in my character.&amp;nbsp; &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Once a reader believes a character can save the  world, fight evil wizards, or love a vampire, you've succeeded in creating a compelling character.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-5120007499598866073?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/5120007499598866073/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/importance-of-crafting-compelling.html#comment-form' title='13 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/5120007499598866073'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/5120007499598866073'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/importance-of-crafting-compelling.html' title='The Importance of Crafting Compelling Characters'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>13</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-4621345943853157503</id><published>2011-04-03T12:32:00.001-04:00</published><updated>2011-04-03T14:41:49.680-04:00</updated><title type='text'>Something for Sunday - A to Z Challenge</title><content type='html'>Right now, I have Snowdrops. Proving spring is just around the corner.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-PTg_SexQxKU/TZifehtMZbI/AAAAAAAAAL0/Vh_u5S1smww/s1600/IMG_0036.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="320" src="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-PTg_SexQxKU/TZifehtMZbI/AAAAAAAAAL0/Vh_u5S1smww/s320/IMG_0036.jpg" width="239" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Tulips! No, not from my garden. From the vase on the kitchen table.&lt;br /&gt;Although, soon my tulips will be poking up from the ground.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-ISwLdbCVqv0/TZigZ2RgWcI/AAAAAAAAAL4/c82_ilTZqPE/s1600/IMG_0027.JPG" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="320" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-ISwLdbCVqv0/TZigZ2RgWcI/AAAAAAAAAL4/c82_ilTZqPE/s320/IMG_0027.JPG" width="238" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Soon, I whisper. Soon, I shout. &lt;br /&gt;Spring!&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-4621345943853157503?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/4621345943853157503/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/something-for-sunday-to-z-challenge.html#comment-form' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/4621345943853157503'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/4621345943853157503'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/something-for-sunday-to-z-challenge.html' title='Something for Sunday - A to Z Challenge'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-PTg_SexQxKU/TZifehtMZbI/AAAAAAAAAL0/Vh_u5S1smww/s72-c/IMG_0036.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-6257827031936891277</id><published>2011-04-02T07:25:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2011-04-02T07:25:15.647-04:00</updated><title type='text'>Brilliant Books for Boys</title><content type='html'>My son thinks a list of books for boys, not just a list of books, should be the blog entry for B. &lt;br /&gt;Ethan lugged a stack of books from his room down into the kitchen and we went through them, until they were all entered below. So here is his list of books, in no particular order.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;b&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ethan’s list of Brilliant Books for Boys&lt;/b&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Tangerine by Edward Bloor&lt;br /&gt;(any) Percy Jackson book by Rick Riordan&lt;br /&gt;Sunrise Over Fallujah by Walter Dean Myers&lt;br /&gt;Pendragon series by D. J. MacHale&lt;br /&gt;Viking Warrior: The Strongbow Saga by Judson Roberts&lt;br /&gt;Septimus Heap series by Angie Sage&lt;br /&gt;How I, Nicky Flynn, Finally Get a Life And a Dog by Art corrieveau&lt;br /&gt;Wilderness by Roddy Doyle&lt;br /&gt;Dear Reckoning by Laurie Lawlor&lt;br /&gt;Leven Thumps series by Obert Skye&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ethan says, “All these books have action, blood, and violence. That’s what makes them great!”&lt;br /&gt;(Not all of them)&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Some of my choices, (though he says they don’t count):&lt;br /&gt;Al Capone Does My Shirts by Gennifer Choldenko&lt;br /&gt;Inexcusable by Chris Lynch&lt;br /&gt;The Watson Go to Birmingham by Christopher Paul Curtis&lt;br /&gt;Holes by Louis Sachar&lt;br /&gt;Head Case by Sarah Aronson&lt;br /&gt;Joey Pigza series by Jack Gantos&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;b&gt;For more on Books for Boys, go to:&lt;/b&gt;&lt;br /&gt;www.boysread.org&lt;br /&gt;www.guysread.com&lt;br /&gt;www.gettingboystoread.com&lt;br /&gt;www.amazon.com/Book-Boys-Who-Love-Read/lm/R2JA5MMNNI7WNZ&lt;br /&gt;&lt;b&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Articles on how to get boys to read:&lt;/b&gt;&lt;br /&gt;http://www.scholastic.com/resources/article/if-your-boy-wont-read&lt;br /&gt;http://www.leeandlow.com/p/boys.mhtml&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-6257827031936891277?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/6257827031936891277/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/brilliant-books-for-boys.html#comment-form' title='15 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/6257827031936891277'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/6257827031936891277'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/brilliant-books-for-boys.html' title='Brilliant Books for Boys'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>15</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-5875057471194327523</id><published>2011-04-01T15:03:00.003-04:00</published><updated>2011-04-01T19:04:29.886-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='blog'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='#atozchallenge'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='habits'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='blogging'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='craft'/><title type='text'>An Absolutely Amazing Attempt At Blogging All of April</title><content type='html'>Alright! I’m attempting to blog all of April, except for Sundays. I’ve signed up to do the &lt;b&gt;&lt;i&gt;A to Z Blogging Challenge&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/b&gt; because I’m hoping to awaken the abeyant blogger within. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;What is this A to Z Blogging Challenge all about? It’s blogging a letter of the alphabet every day, the month of April. I’m not exactly sure how this is going to work, but I feel that I can do it.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-svt_njuGuJA/TZYhE_q-XOI/AAAAAAAAALw/qN_2GTrK4_w/s1600/habit.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="67" src="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-svt_njuGuJA/TZYhE_q-XOI/AAAAAAAAALw/qN_2GTrK4_w/s200/habit.jpg" width="200" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;I’ve read that it can take 30 days of doing the same thing, to make a new habit stick. Here’s a list of &lt;a href="http://www.lifehack.org/articles/productivity/18-tricks-to-make-new-habits-stick.html"&gt;18 Tricks to Make New Habits Stick&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Let the blogging begin!&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-5875057471194327523?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/5875057471194327523/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/absolutely-amazing-attempt-at-blogging.html#comment-form' title='5 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/5875057471194327523'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/5875057471194327523'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/04/absolutely-amazing-attempt-at-blogging.html' title='An Absolutely Amazing Attempt At Blogging All of April'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-svt_njuGuJA/TZYhE_q-XOI/AAAAAAAAALw/qN_2GTrK4_w/s72-c/habit.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>5</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-3966119937560934305</id><published>2011-02-24T17:15:00.005-05:00</published><updated>2011-02-24T18:04:11.839-05:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='picture books publishing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Young Adult Novels'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='NESCBWI'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='winter'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Agent'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Picture Books'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writers'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Agents'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writer'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Agent Interviews'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Conferences'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Conference'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Middle Grade Novels'/><title type='text'>NESCBWI AQQ Sneak Peek Interview with Agent Linda Pratt</title><content type='html'>&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black; font-family: inherit;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;We have many so many wonderful agents attending this year's NESCBWI 2011   Celebrating Milestones Conference. Next up on the Sneak Peek tour, Linda Pratt. &lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Recently, Linda Pratt and Marcia Wernick announced the                                                     establishment of the &lt;a href="http://www.wernickpratt.com/index.html"&gt;Wernick &amp;amp; Pratt Agency&lt;/a&gt;, a full-service agency                                                     dedicated to representing authors and                                                     illustrators of children's                                                     books. &lt;i&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;From their website, http://www.wernickpratt.com&lt;i&gt; "Our philosophy is&lt;/i&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;i&gt; that we represent people rather than merely the books  they create, so our approach to representation is to create strategies  for our clients' long term careers&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/span&gt;."&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;table cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="float: left; margin-right: 1em; text-align: left;"&gt;&lt;tbody&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td style="text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-lI58tvHMUac/TWbVIrl9LZI/AAAAAAAAALk/-Tda9KylzJA/s1600/LindaBioPhoto.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-lI58tvHMUac/TWbVIrl9LZI/AAAAAAAAALk/-Tda9KylzJA/s1600/LindaBioPhoto.jpg" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"&gt;Linda Pratt&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/tbody&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&lt;i&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="color: #0b5394; font-family: inherit;"&gt;&lt;i&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;i&gt;&lt;span style="color: #0b5394; font-family: inherit;"&gt;1. What makes for a healthy working relationship between you and your authors?&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;For me a healthy working relationship seems to come down to three things.&amp;nbsp; First and foremost is mutual trust.&amp;nbsp; If that isn’t there, I don’t see how a relationship can be successful. The second is that it always helps to like one another. Not necessarily “best friends” like, but it’s easier to weather the inevitable bumps along the way if you start out liking one another. Lastly, there’s flexibility. An agent should be flexible in meeting their clients needs since over the course of a career those are bound to change, and authors and illustrators are likely to be the most successful when they, too, are flexible in adjusting to the changing markets so that their agent has the tools to create additional opportunities for them when needed.&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;i style="color: #0b5394;"&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;2. What are you always looking for but never receive in a submission?&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;I’ve been fortunate enough to work with some really talented first time authors so I don’t think I can say that I’ve looked for something in submissions that I’ve never received. However, the things I do always hope to see in a submission are voice and a clear sense of what’s at stake for the main character: &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;Voice – What is the author revealing to me about this character that is going to make me want to know them for the next 150 or so pages?&amp;nbsp; It’s like a first date; I don’t want to know everything there is to know by the goodnight kiss, but I do want to some well-chosen details that’ll have me agreeing to a second date so I can find out more. &lt;/span&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;Clear Stakes – I want to feel the characters sense of triumph or loss if things go one way or the other.&amp;nbsp; For that to happen there has to be a clear sense of what’s at play.&amp;nbsp; Kind of like a seesaw. The conflict is the weight in the middle that can shift to one side or the other depending on what influences ultimately win out.&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;i&gt;&lt;span style="color: #0b5394; font-family: inherit;"&gt;3. What is your agent style?&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;Although I tailor my style to each individual client, overall I take a long view in working with clients since I want to work with them for their careers.&amp;nbsp; So there are a series of things I need to know. What are their goals - both immediate and long term? What are their financial needs? What time do they have to devote to their creative lives with their other professional, family and or personal commitments? What’s realistic once we start putting all these pieces together?&amp;nbsp; Then it comes down to the nuts and bolts work. How do we try to get them where they want to go?&amp;nbsp; This tends to involve a lot editorial work, as well as, advising on what projects to pursue, possible networking opportunities, scheduling issues, and many other day to day decisions that fit into the long term career picture. It’s a work in progress that isn’t written stone since life and business are ever-changing.&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;span style="color: #0b5394; font-family: inherit;"&gt;4. What do you see as upcoming trends in the industry? What themes do see as having endurance? &lt;/span&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;I think you’ll start to see picture books acquisitions being evaluated differently. With the increase in the e-book and apps markets, a picture book’s adaptability to the “enhanced/enriched” e-book and/or app format will likely play an ever more prominent role in discussions. I’m not sure that’s a particularly good or bad thing, but being able to sell well in these formats is likely going to be a key deciding factor in acquisition. As far as the next theme trend in children’s books, I don’t think I’m prescient enough to predict that. I remember when mysteries in middle grade were going to be all the rage 10 or so years ago. They never went away as far as I could tell, nor did they become quite the rage either. &lt;/span&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;On themes with endurance, however, books that master the classic themes: true love always wins out, star-crossed lovers, triumph over oppression, blood is thicker than water, etc. will always endure. The trick is to find a fresh way to present them. If you think about it, every book that’s begun a thematic trend in recent years incorporates predominant classic themes be it Harry Potter, The Hunger Games, Twilight and on. It’s the books that lose sight of that fact in their attempt to just mimic the thematic trend that’ll fade.&amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;i style="color: #0b5394;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;5. What would you like to see more of and why?&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;I would like to see the inventiveness of subject matter and approach to storytelling that’s been going on in YA emerge more in the middle grade market. One of the great things we’ve seen happen in YA is how arbitrary that upper age limit on the genre is. Many adult women have discovered these books and have become devoted readers.&amp;nbsp; Harry Potter showed us that middle grade can have the same elasticity in readership, but wouldn’t it be wonderful to see more of that happening?&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;But that’s my broad response and you probably really want to know what I’d specifically like to see. In terms of my personal tastes, the kinds of things that draw me are: stories about kids that are straddling a major transition in life ( a tween who doesn’t really want to release girlhood when her core friends suddenly cross the line to teens or a teen who isn’t going to college when everyone else around them is), magical realism, unique cultural perspectives, humorous voices, historical fiction on an event or era that hasn’t been overly covered already, memorable supporting characters, sibling stories that go deeper than the stereotypical love/hate relationship, and stories from a viewpoint not often seen in literature.&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;i style="color: #0b5394;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;6. What conferences will you attend this year?&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;In addition to NESCBWI, which I’m thrilled to be invited to, I will be attending the Kansas SCBWI Fall Conference and SCBWI Southern Breeze Fall Conference.&amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;i&gt;&lt;br style="color: #0b5394; font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;span style="color: #0b5394; font-family: inherit;"&gt;7. Is there anything you would like to add?&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;I’ve tried to answer the questions about trends, tastes, and what attracts me in a submission in detail because I know it helps, and I hope that my answers have given a better sense of me. However, if you’re a writer who feels you want to share your work with me, but don’t see it as fitting in with my answers to the questions here, please don’t take these as an absolute definition of what might make me go weak at the knees. I would love to be surprised by a perfect manuscript that I have no idea I’ve been waiting to get!&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-3966119937560934305?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='related' href='http://www.wernickpratt.com/index.html' title='NESCBWI AQQ Sneak Peek Interview with Agent Linda Pratt'/><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/3966119937560934305/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/02/nescbwi-aaqq-sneak-peek-interview-with.html#comment-form' title='4 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/3966119937560934305'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/3966119937560934305'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/02/nescbwi-aaqq-sneak-peek-interview-with.html' title='NESCBWI AQQ Sneak Peek Interview with Agent Linda Pratt'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-lI58tvHMUac/TWbVIrl9LZI/AAAAAAAAALk/-Tda9KylzJA/s72-c/LindaBioPhoto.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>4</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-6664259666722900437</id><published>2011-02-22T13:14:00.002-05:00</published><updated>2011-02-24T17:03:50.644-05:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Young Adult Novels'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='NESCBWI'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Books'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Agent'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Picture Books'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writers'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Agents'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Authors'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writer'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Agent Interviews'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Conferences'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Conference'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Middle Grade Novels'/><title type='text'>NESCBWI AQQ Sneak Peek Interview with Agent Chris Richman</title><content type='html'>&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black; font-family: inherit;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;Do you still want to know more about the agents attending NESCBWI 2011  Celebrating Milestones Conference? Here's a peek at Chris Richman, an agent with &lt;a href="http://www.upstartcrowliterary.com/"&gt;Upstart Crow Literary&lt;/a&gt;. &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;Want to know something cool about the Upstart Crow Literary Agency? They are entirely green when it comes to their &lt;a href="http://www.upstartcrowliterary.com/submit.html"&gt;submission policy&lt;/a&gt;. &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black; font-family: inherit;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black; font-family: inherit;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;From their website: "&lt;i&gt;My love of books started at an early age. In the second grade I fell in love with the gross and wonderful works of Roald Dahl. On career day in third grade I carried a book and called myself an author. In the fourth grade I was sent to the principal’s office when the teacher discovered me reading Stephen King’s Pet Sematary in the back of the room.&lt;/i&gt;"&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black; font-family: inherit;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black; font-family: inherit;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;This  is his first year participating in the NESCBWI’s Agent Quick  Query Event. &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black; font-family: inherit;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;table cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="float: left; margin-right: 1em; text-align: left;"&gt;&lt;tbody&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td style="text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-9Q4hDZXP94c/TWPxJHbbslI/AAAAAAAAALg/GpD7K1T9KVc/s1600/richman.png" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-9Q4hDZXP94c/TWPxJHbbslI/AAAAAAAAALg/GpD7K1T9KVc/s1600/richman.png" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"&gt;Chris Richman&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/tbody&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;i style="color: #0b5394;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;1. What makes for a healthy working relationship between you and your authors?&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;A good, open line of communication is really important to me. I like to know a client’s expectations, frustrations, goals, and more, to ensure we’re on the same page and I’m doing everything possible to help them succeed. I also really value transparency in my dealings with my clients; they always know where we are with a project, including how far we think it is from being ready to submit, which editors have it, and what sorts of responses we’re getting. I expect the transparency to be reciprocated, too, so that there’s always an honest line of dialogue going back and forth between us. Finally, I truly writers who approach the business of books as just that: a business. Sure, there are personal expectations, successes, and disappointments mixed in, but I value an author capable of rolling with the highs and lows without tipping too far one way or the other.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;i style="color: #0b5394;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;2.&amp;nbsp;What are you always looking for but never receive in a submission?&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;I can’t say there’s anything I’ve never received, since every project I’ve signed has had a special element that made me want to work with it. I will say, however, that I yearn for those projects that make me bolt up in my chair and shout, “Yes! This is the one!” right out of the gate, usually due to a complex mix of stellar writing, strong plotting, and original ideas. Sadly, that experience doesn’t happen as much as I would like. I do, however, enjoy the prospect that the next submission could be “the one.” &lt;/span&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;i&gt;&lt;br style="color: #0b5394; font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;span style="color: #0b5394; font-family: inherit;"&gt;3. What is your agent style?&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;I consider myself an editorial agent, especially for debut writers. More and more manuscripts from debut writers need to be in pristine shape if they’re going to stand out to an editor. As I said above, I’m also completely transparent in my dealings. And, as much as I value professionalism, I tend to get to know my clients, and let them see aspects of my own silly personality from time to time. &lt;/span&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;i style="color: #0b5394;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;4. What do you see as upcoming trends in the industry? What themes do see as having endurance? &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;I tend not to chase trends too much, especially in young adult. I would, however, like to hope the paranormal trend in YA is dying, but all signs suggest it will keep going strong until someone puts a stake directly into its heart. Dystopian, especially with romantic elements, is still doing pretty well, although I could see that slowing down somewhat in the near future, especially as most houses who want that sort of project now have it. I’d love to see more funny books for boys, like those by Rick Riordan and Jeff Kinney, stay popular. &lt;/span&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;As for what has endurance: good writing, of course, will always find a home, whether it’s middle grade or young adult, as will strong, believable characters. And with young adult, no matter what you’re writing--be it sci-fi, dystopian, stories with half human half animal hybrids, whatever—a compelling romance will always do a story good (even though romance is not something I typically seek out). &lt;/span&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;i style="color: #0b5394;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;5. What would you like to see more of and why?&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;I honestly really like stories with a timeless feel, that could have been published thirty years ago, or thirty years from now, and still feel relevant. I don’t typically fall for stories tied so much to the present in terms of trends, fashion, music, etc. I’d love to see more fantastic middle grade with standout voices, though those are very difficult to do well. I’m still seeking stories with sports elements, though they have to be about more than simply sports for me to consider taking them on. &lt;/span&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;i style="color: #0b5394;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;6. What conferences will you attend this year?&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;So far I’ve stopped in at the New York National SCBWI, I ventured out to San Diego’s SCBWI conference in February, and I’ll be of course attending the NESCBWI event in May. Unfortunately, I’ve had to turn down a fair number of conferences this year because it feels like everyone I know has chosen 2011 as the year to get married, though I may be able to squeeze in some more conferences toward the end of the year. We’ll see! &amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;i style="color: #0b5394;"&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;7. Is there anything you would like to add?&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br style="font-family: inherit;" /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;I’m always hunting for the next great project, and I’m hoping I’ll find some in New England this May!&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-6664259666722900437?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='related' href='http://www.upstartcrow.com' title='NESCBWI AQQ Sneak Peek Interview with Agent Chris Richman'/><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/6664259666722900437/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/02/nescbwi-aqq-sneak-peak-interview-with_22.html#comment-form' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/6664259666722900437'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/6664259666722900437'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/02/nescbwi-aqq-sneak-peak-interview-with_22.html' title='NESCBWI AQQ Sneak Peek Interview with Agent Chris Richman'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-9Q4hDZXP94c/TWPxJHbbslI/AAAAAAAAALg/GpD7K1T9KVc/s72-c/richman.png' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-8665326472027547188</id><published>2011-02-20T20:21:00.003-05:00</published><updated>2011-02-26T12:49:55.569-05:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='picture books publishing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Young Adult Novels'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='NESCBWI'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Books'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Agent'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Picture Books'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writers'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Agents'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writer'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Agent Interviews'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Conferences'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Conference'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Middle Grade Novels'/><title type='text'>NESCBWI AQQ Sneak Peek Interview with Agent Jennifer Laughran</title><content type='html'>&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black; font-family: inherit;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;In case you didn't sign up for an Agent Quick Query, here's another opportunity to learn more about the agents attending this year's NESCBWI Celebrating Milestones Conference. Jennifer Laughran is an agent with the &lt;a href="http://andreabrownlit.com/agents.php"&gt;Andrea Brown Literary Agency, Inc&lt;/a&gt;. When she's not at writers conferences, she splits her time between San Francisco, NYC and the Hudson River Valley of NY.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black; font-family: inherit;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black; font-family: inherit;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;This is Jennifer's third year participating in the NESCBWI’s Agent Quick Query Event. I am so happy to have her back with us again.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black; font-family: inherit;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;table cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="float: left; font-family: inherit; margin-right: 1em; text-align: left;"&gt;&lt;tbody&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td style="text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-ko4CM_o1dw0/TWGuqA-lqrI/AAAAAAAAALc/T9NUV79JGg0/s1600/jennifer_website-1.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="200" src="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-ko4CM_o1dw0/TWGuqA-lqrI/AAAAAAAAALc/T9NUV79JGg0/s200/jennifer_website-1.jpg" width="160" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;Jennifer Laughran&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/tbody&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit; font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;i style="color: #0b5394;"&gt;1. What makes for a healthy working relationship between you and your authors?&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Open communication! I really can't say that enough.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;i style="color: #0b5394;"&gt;2.&amp;nbsp;What are you always looking for but never receive in a submission?&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I am always looking for totally compelling, unputdownable, but beautifully written books, that make me laugh AND cry at the same time. Sometimes I get them - but I am always looking for more! :-)&lt;br /&gt;&lt;i style="color: #0b5394;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;3. What is your agent style?&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I guess I am... Semi- editorial? I give notes to my authors to help them make their work extra-salable... But if it needed a ton of work, i probably wouldn't have taken it on to begin with. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;i style="color: #0b5394;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;4.&amp;nbsp;What do you see as upcoming trends in the industry? What themes do see as having endurance?&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I am not interested in trends. That said, and unsurprisingly I think, the things that are selling the most are the books that lie on the intersection of "beautifully written" and "high concept" -- I'd say the ease of selling is directly proportional to the difficulty the reader has setting the book down. Greater unputdownablity = faster sale. Makes sense, right?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;i&gt;&lt;br style="color: #0b5394;" /&gt;&lt;span style="color: #0b5394;"&gt;5.&amp;nbsp;What would you like to see more of and why?&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I would like to see more of things that are upbeat. Also tearjerkers. Also super-romantic stories. Also thrilling. Also truly, genuinely scary. I am not so interested in grim, gloomy or quiet. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br style="color: #0b5394;" /&gt;&lt;span style="color: #0b5394;"&gt;6. What conferences will you attend this year?&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Not sure about Fall yet, but so far on the spring/summer agenda after NESCBWI:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: inherit; font-size: small;"&gt; * June 11, 2011: &lt;a href="http://scbwi-easternny.org/index.php"&gt;SCBWI Eastern NY conference&lt;/a&gt;, Poughkeepsie NY&lt;br /&gt;* July 13, 2011: &lt;a href="http://www.leakycon.com/lit-day"&gt;LeakyCon Lit Day, Orlando FL&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;i style="color: #0b5394;"&gt;7. Is there anything you would like to add?&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Writers can check out my blog:&lt;a href="http://literaticat.blogspot.com/"&gt; http://literaticat.blogspot.com&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;or follow me on twitter: &lt;a href="https://twitter.com/#%21/literaticat"&gt;@literaticat&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-8665326472027547188?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='related' href='http://literaticat.blogspot.com/' title='NESCBWI AQQ Sneak Peek Interview with Agent Jennifer Laughran'/><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/8665326472027547188/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/02/nescbwi-aqq-sneak-peak-interview-with_20.html#comment-form' title='4 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/8665326472027547188'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/8665326472027547188'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/02/nescbwi-aqq-sneak-peak-interview-with_20.html' title='NESCBWI AQQ Sneak Peek Interview with Agent Jennifer Laughran'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-ko4CM_o1dw0/TWGuqA-lqrI/AAAAAAAAALc/T9NUV79JGg0/s72-c/jennifer_website-1.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>4</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-1096350322915330340</id><published>2011-02-15T17:11:00.002-05:00</published><updated>2011-02-24T17:04:49.129-05:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Young Adult Novels'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='NESCBWI'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing Retreats'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Agent'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Picture Books'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writers'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Agents'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Authors'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writer'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Agent Interviews'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Conferences'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Conference'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Middle Grade Novels'/><title type='text'>NESCBWI AQQ Sneak Peek Interview with Agent Ammi-Joan Paquette</title><content type='html'>&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: medium;"&gt;Registration is now open for the New England SCBWI's 2011 Celebrating  Milestones Conference. This year we've added additional Agent Quick Query slots to give attendees even more opportunities for face-to-face conversations with agents. &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: medium;"&gt;The second agent in my NESCBWI 2011 Conference sneak-peek series is Ammi-Joan Paquette.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: medium;"&gt; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: medium;"&gt;She is an associate agent with the &lt;a href="http://emliterary.com/about.php"&gt;Erin Murphy Literary Agency&lt;/a&gt;, and she is one of the nicest people I have ever met. Her encouraging words are full of insight, kindness, and encouragement. She is also a writer. Because of this, she understands what it is like on both sides of the Author/Agent realtionship.&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: medium;"&gt;This is her second year participating in the NESCBWI’s Agent Quick Query Event.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: medium;"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;table cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="float: left; margin-right: 1em; text-align: left;"&gt;&lt;tbody&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td style="text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-F5oAlqQ34hw/TVr4F1cEg7I/AAAAAAAAALU/Oi1cwyPaDAM/s1600/ammi-joan_paquette_crop.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-F5oAlqQ34hw/TVr4F1cEg7I/AAAAAAAAALU/Oi1cwyPaDAM/s1600/ammi-joan_paquette_crop.jpg" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"&gt;Ammi-Joan Paquette&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/tbody&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: medium;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: medium;"&gt;&lt;i style="color: #134f5c;"&gt;1. What makes for a healthy working relationship between you and your authors?&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="color: #444444;"&gt;I think communication is one of the bedrocks of a strong agent-client relationship. When questions or issues arise, it’s important to be able to voice these openly—and likewise, to know that questions and concerns will be addressed promptly and efficiently. This type of communication and mutual respect of each other's time is extremely important in my book.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: medium;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;i style="color: #134f5c;"&gt;2.&amp;nbsp;What are you always looking for but never receive in a submission?&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="color: #444444;"&gt;One of the most wonderful things for me is when I receive something I didn’t even know I was looking for, but that suits my tastes exactly. That said, I would absolutely love to find a terrific food novel!&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: medium;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;i style="color: #134f5c;"&gt;3. What is your agent style?&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="color: #444444;"&gt;I would say: supportive, passionate, encouraging, persistent. Does that cover it?&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: medium;"&gt;&lt;i style="color: #134f5c;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;4.&amp;nbsp;What do you see as upcoming trends in the industry? What themes do see as having endurance?&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="color: #444444;"&gt;I think there will always be a market for excellent writing with depth and heart. Trends come and go, but a story that’s imbued with a piece of yourself, that story that only you can write—that’s what makes a stand-out project. &lt;/span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: medium;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;i&gt;&lt;span style="color: #134f5c;"&gt;5.&amp;nbsp;What would you like to see more of and why?&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="color: #444444;"&gt;I’d love to see more laugh-out-loud humor, more mysteries, more tightly-woven plots that keep me guessing. I love to be surprised and caught off-guard by a twist I didn’t see coming but that fits the story beautifully. Surprise me and I will follow you just about anywhere.&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: medium;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;i style="color: #134f5c;"&gt;6.&amp;nbsp;What conferences will you attend this year?&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="color: #444444;"&gt;I have a fairly slow travel schedule so far this year, so I’m certainly open to considering invitations.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: medium;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;i style="color: #134f5c;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;7.&amp;nbsp;Is there anything you would like to add?&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="color: #444444;"&gt;Many thanks to the NESCBWI organizers, and I’ll see you in May!&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-1096350322915330340?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/1096350322915330340/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/02/nescbwi-aqq-sneak-peak-interview-with.html#comment-form' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/1096350322915330340'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/1096350322915330340'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/02/nescbwi-aqq-sneak-peak-interview-with.html' title='NESCBWI AQQ Sneak Peek Interview with Agent Ammi-Joan Paquette'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-F5oAlqQ34hw/TVr4F1cEg7I/AAAAAAAAALU/Oi1cwyPaDAM/s72-c/ammi-joan_paquette_crop.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-8492599152071997284</id><published>2011-02-13T21:25:00.002-05:00</published><updated>2011-02-13T21:27:48.419-05:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Agents'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Authors'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Young Adult Novels'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='NESCBWI'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing Retreats'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Books'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Conferences'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='book covers'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Agent'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Conference'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Picture Boks'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Middle Grade Novels'/><title type='text'>SCBWI New England's 2011 Conference ~ Registration Opens at 12:01 A.M. February, 15th!</title><content type='html'>&lt;table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="float: left; margin-right: 1em; text-align: left;"&gt;&lt;tbody&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td style="text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-sfXywXnlKAw/TViSJncwzmI/AAAAAAAAALQ/DnWVlSymePE/s1600/clemilestone.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="181" src="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-sfXywXnlKAw/TViSJncwzmI/AAAAAAAAALQ/DnWVlSymePE/s400/clemilestone.jpg" width="400" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"&gt;New England SCBWI 2011 Conference ~ Don't miss this 25th Conference Anniversary Event&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/tbody&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; font-size: small;"&gt;The New England chapter of SCBWI's 2011 Conference, Celebrating Milestones, begins open registration at 12:01 A.M on February 15th. &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;Greg R. Fishbone and Kathryn Hulick Gargolinski, &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;, the 2011 Conference Co-Directors are busy planning&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; font-size: small;"&gt; New  England's 25th annual conference. From May 13 to 15th, we will be  filling the Marriott Courtyard in Fitchburg, MA, with inspiring and  informative content for authors and illustrators. Conference highlights will include: &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;* Keynote addresses from Jane Yolen, Tomie DePaola, Lin Oliver, Steve Mooser, and Harold Underdown &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;* 7 agents, 13 editors, and 2 art directors on our critique faculty &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;* More Agent Quick Query slots &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;* Marketing Consultations with Susan Raab Peer Critiques &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;* Special Interest Group meetings &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;* New England SCBWI History Panel &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;* Poster Showcase &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;* Two Illustrators Academies &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;* Conference podcast by Katie Davis of "Brain Burps About Books!" &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;* The usual assortment of amazing workshops &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;* A screening of "Library of the Early Mind" followed by a discussion panel &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;* A Silver Anniversary Ball and cabaret &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;* ...and more! &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;We recommend registering as early as possible on or after February 15th to ensure your choice of programming. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;To register for the conference, visit the registration site at &lt;a href="https://www.regonline.com/nescbwi11" target="_blank"&gt;https://www.regonline.com/&lt;wbr&gt;&lt;/wbr&gt;nescbwi11&lt;/a&gt; &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Please note that both manuscript and portfolio critique registration is  OFFLINE this year. Critique slots will be assigned on a first-come,  first-served basis, and are not guaranteed. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Check the New England SCBWI website (&lt;a href="http://www.nescbwi.org/conferences/spring/" target="_blank"&gt;http://www.nescbwi.org/&lt;wbr&gt;&lt;/wbr&gt;conferences/spring/&lt;/a&gt;) for updates and drop any questions to our online FAQ at &lt;a href="http://www.formspring.me/nescbwi" target="_blank"&gt;http://www.formspring.me/&lt;wbr&gt;&lt;/wbr&gt;nescbwi&lt;/a&gt; &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Twitter users can follow the New England SCBWI Twitter account,  (@nescbwi), and use the #nescbwi11 hash-tag to discuss the conference. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Hope to see you in Fitchburg!&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Arial,Verdana,Times; font-size: 12px;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-8492599152071997284?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='related' href='https://www.regonline.com/nescbwi11' title='SCBWI New England&apos;s 2011 Conference ~ Registration Opens at 12:01 A.M. 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February, 15th!'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-sfXywXnlKAw/TViSJncwzmI/AAAAAAAAALQ/DnWVlSymePE/s72-c/clemilestone.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-5604444026480283909</id><published>2011-02-09T17:06:00.007-05:00</published><updated>2011-02-24T17:05:32.273-05:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='picture books publishing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Young Adult Novels'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='NESCBWI'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing Retreats'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Books'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Agent'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Picture Books'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writers'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Authors'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writer'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Conferences'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Conference'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Middle Grade Novels'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Poetry'/><title type='text'>NESCBWI 2011 Agent Quick Query Sneak Peek Interview with Agent Stephen Fraser</title><content type='html'>&lt;div style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;style&gt;p.MsoNormal, li.MsoNormal, div.MsoNormal { margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; }div.Section1 { page: Section1; }&lt;/style&gt;     &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: large;"&gt;With registration opening on February 15th for the NESCBWI 2011 Celebrating Milestones Conference, I wanted to give everyone a chance to find out what the 2011 Agent Quick Query agents are thinking.&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: large;"&gt;First up, Stephen Fraser of &lt;a href="http://www.jdlit.com/"&gt;Jennifer DeChiara Literary Agency&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: black;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;table cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="float: left; margin-right: 1em; text-align: left;"&gt;&lt;tbody&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td style="text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TVMEgZVvDCI/AAAAAAAAALM/whgDKnLMH9s/s1600/FraserStephenWb_2010-2.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TVMEgZVvDCI/AAAAAAAAALM/whgDKnLMH9s/s1600/FraserStephenWb_2010-2.jpg" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"&gt;Stephen Fraser&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/tbody&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: #6aa84f;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: large;"&gt;&lt;span style="color: #073763;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: #0b5394;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: #0b5394;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: #0b5394;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: #0b5394;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: #0b5394;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: #0b5394;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: #0b5394;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: #0b5394;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: #0b5394;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: large;"&gt;&lt;i&gt;1.&amp;nbsp; What makes for a healthy working relationship between you and your authors?&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: large;"&gt;Clients need to know that the onus is one &lt;i&gt;them&lt;/i&gt; to stay in touch. I will stay in touch with clients as I submit manuscripts and then as I get rejections or offers. I am good about responding right away. But an e-mail or call from a client as a reminder doesn’t hurt; and I don’t mind.&amp;nbsp; If a client hasn’t heard from me for months, that is really &lt;i&gt;their&lt;/i&gt; fault. With more than 40 clients to handle, I can’t be in touch with all of them all the time. Except, of course, if I am selling all their books!&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: #0b5394;"&gt;&lt;i&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: large;"&gt;2.&amp;nbsp; What are you always looking for but never receive in a submission?&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: large;"&gt;I have been extremely fortunate.&amp;nbsp; The most wonderful manuscripts have found their way to me…and into publication. So, I can’t complain. We had a PEN award winner last year and a Newbery Honor winner this year. Yahoo!&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: #0b5394;"&gt;&lt;i&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: large;"&gt;3.&amp;nbsp; What is your agent style?&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: large;"&gt;I am quick to respond, honest in feedback, friendly with editors - albeit persistent. One of my clients called me "a true gentleman of the business," which was extremely kind. But I like to think it's true. I do think civility is important. And I think Fun is an important part of this whole thing, too. It's a joyful thing to be involved with children's books.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: large;"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: #0b5394;"&gt;&lt;i&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: large;"&gt;4.&amp;nbsp; What do you see as upcoming trends in the industry? What themes do you see as having endurance?&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: large;"&gt;Y.A. has been having a comeback, thanks to certain vampires.&amp;nbsp; I think paranormal is probably here to stay, but I think vampires may be replaced by other creatures. I’m frankly am bored by the dystopian novel, because I think it’s too easy to get depressed about the world right now.&amp;nbsp; I’d rather see someone try something bolder like optimism or humor.&amp;nbsp; Middle grade certainly is not going anywhere, either historical or contemporary.&amp;nbsp; Chapter books are becoming more of a staple.&amp;nbsp; And I would [like] to believe that picture books, lyrical and imagistic and beautiful, will always have a place.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: large;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: #0b5394;"&gt;&lt;i&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: large;"&gt;5.&amp;nbsp; What would you like to see more of and why?&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: large;"&gt;I’d like to see more mysteries and ghost stories (really scary ghost stories). Love stories are always fun. Nonfiction that is one of a kind and fresh is always welcome. I adore poetry – though it can be hard to sell (I’ll try!) And funny books, truly funny books.&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="color: #0b5394;"&gt;&lt;i&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: large;"&gt;6.&amp;nbsp; What conferences will you attend this year?&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: large;"&gt;Right now I have three invitations, including Montana and Iowa SCBWI. I’ll probably accept a couple more.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-5604444026480283909?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/5604444026480283909/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/02/nescbwi-2011-agent-quick-query.html#comment-form' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/5604444026480283909'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/5604444026480283909'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/02/nescbwi-2011-agent-quick-query.html' title='NESCBWI 2011 Agent Quick Query Sneak Peek Interview with Agent Stephen Fraser'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TVMEgZVvDCI/AAAAAAAAALM/whgDKnLMH9s/s72-c/FraserStephenWb_2010-2.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-2051427938786221697</id><published>2011-02-03T10:17:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2011-02-03T10:17:17.230-05:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Agents'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writer'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Authors'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Young Adult Novels'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='NESCBWI'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Conferences'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Conference'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Middle Grade Novels'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writers'/><title type='text'>Get Rady! Get Set! Register! NESCBI 2011 Agent Quick Query</title><content type='html'>&lt;div class="asset-content entry-content"&gt;          &lt;div class="asset-body"&gt;             With Registration for the &lt;a href="http://bit.ly/dWFewZ"&gt;NESCBWI 2011 Conference&lt;/a&gt; opening  very soon, we'd like to remind everyone who plans to register for an  Agent Quick Query, to please have your query letter ready to submit at  time of registration.  &lt;br /&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Agent Quick Query Letter Guidelines:&lt;/strong&gt; &lt;br /&gt;&lt;ul&gt;&lt;li&gt;One Page&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;Addressed to: Dear Agent:&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;Middle grade or young adult novels only&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;No picture books or nonfiction&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;You may not request an agent. The AQQ coordinator reads every query  letter and will match you with an appropriate agent based on each  agent's submission guidelines.&lt;/li&gt;&lt;/ul&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="asset-more" id="more"&gt;             &lt;strong&gt;The six agents are:&lt;/strong&gt; &lt;br /&gt;&lt;ul&gt;&lt;li&gt;Stephen Fraser - Jennifer DeChiara Literary Agency&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;Jennifer Laughran - Andrea Brown Literary Agency&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;Ammi-Joan Paquette - Erin Murphy Literary Agency&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;Linda Pratt - Wernick &amp;amp; Pratt Agency&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;Lauren MacLeod - The Strothman Agency&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;Chris Richman - Upstart Crow Literary&lt;/li&gt;&lt;/ul&gt;&lt;strong&gt;How it works:&lt;/strong&gt;  &lt;br /&gt;&lt;ul&gt;&lt;li&gt;When registering for NESCBWI, you can select Agent Quick Query for an additional $25. &lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;Once you are registered and confirmed, you will receive an email  request from the AQQ Coordinator for your one page Agent Quick Query  letter for a middle grade or young adult novel, saved in a PDF format. &lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;The AQQ Coordinator will send your query to the agent. &lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;The agent will critique your letter and return it to you during your 10 minute AQQ critique at the conference.&lt;/li&gt;&lt;/ul&gt;This is the 3rd year of AQQ and it has been a very successful event.         &lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;h4&gt;Do you have more questions?&lt;span style="font-weight: normal;"&gt; Post by Comment and I'll answer.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/h4&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-2051427938786221697?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='related' href='http://bit.ly/hNbhiZ' title='Get Rady! Get Set! Register! NESCBI 2011 Agent Quick Query'/><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/2051427938786221697/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/02/get-rady-get-set-register-nescbi-2011.html#comment-form' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/2051427938786221697'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/2051427938786221697'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/02/get-rady-get-set-register-nescbi-2011.html' title='Get Rady! Get Set! Register! NESCBI 2011 Agent Quick Query'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-6323872921594736257</id><published>2011-01-20T19:29:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2011-01-20T19:29:03.635-05:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='picture books publishing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Agents'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Authors'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Young Adult Novels'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='NESCBWI'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Books'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Giveaways'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='book covers'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Middle Grade Novels'/><title type='text'>So Many Giveaways!</title><content type='html'>&lt;div style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;           &lt;style&gt;@font-face {  font-family: "Times";}@font-face {  font-family: "Cambria";}p.MsoNormal, li.MsoNormal, div.MsoNormal { margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; }h3 { margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 13.5pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; }a:link, span.MsoHyperlink { color: blue; text-decoration: underline; }a:visited, span.MsoHyperlinkFollowed { color: purple; text-decoration: underline; }span.Heading3Char { font-family: Times; font-weight: bold; }div.Section1 { page: Section1; }&lt;/style&gt;         &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: &amp;quot;Helvetica Neue&amp;quot;,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;In the last few minutes, the number of giveaways by authors, bloggers and publishers seems to have grown.&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;So here is a quick list of the last five just tweeted.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: &amp;quot;Helvetica Neue&amp;quot;,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; font-family: &amp;quot;Helvetica Neue&amp;quot;,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TTjShQW1h-I/AAAAAAAAALE/i8HHAFDzdgU/s1600/8306857.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TTjShQW1h-I/AAAAAAAAALE/i8HHAFDzdgU/s1600/8306857.jpg" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: &amp;quot;Helvetica Neue&amp;quot;,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;goodreads Giveaway ! Enter to win an advance copy of &lt;a href="http://www.goodreads.com/book/show/8306857-divergent"&gt;Divergent&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;a href="http://bit.ly/dNsUL1"&gt;http://bit.ly/dNsUL1&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: &amp;quot;Helvetica Neue&amp;quot;,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: &amp;quot;Helvetica Neue&amp;quot;,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: &amp;quot;Helvetica Neue&amp;quot;,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: &amp;quot;Helvetica Neue&amp;quot;,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;a href="https://twitter.com/#%21/WritersDigest"&gt;WritersDigest&lt;/a&gt; Writer's Digest ~ Colleen Houck is giving away a copy of her YA fantasy, TIGER'S CURSE: &lt;/span&gt;&lt;a href="http://bit.ly/eXwund"&gt;http://bit.ly/eXwund&lt;/a&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: &amp;quot;Helvetica Neue&amp;quot;,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: &amp;quot;Helvetica Neue&amp;quot;,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;Lit &amp;amp; Pub peeps: I Want to Design Your Book Cover for Free. (giveaway judged by @&lt;a href="http://twitter.com/mansionstreet"&gt;mansionstreet&lt;/a&gt;) Enter to win: &lt;a href="http://tinyurl.com/49gdp7m"&gt;http://tinyurl.com/49gdp7m&lt;/a&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: &amp;quot;Helvetica Neue&amp;quot;,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;h3 style="font-family: &amp;quot;Helvetica Neue&amp;quot;,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; margin: 0.1pt 0in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: normal;"&gt;Faboolosity ~ I Want to Design Your Book Cover for Free. &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/h3&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: &amp;quot;Helvetica Neue&amp;quot;,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;http://bit.ly/hAOoQM&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: &amp;quot;Helvetica Neue&amp;quot;,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: &amp;quot;Helvetica Neue&amp;quot;,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;wastepaper prose and other literary woes ~ Mockingjay and Hunger Games Swag Giveaway ~&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;http://bit.ly/dQjcB9&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: &amp;quot;Helvetica Neue&amp;quot;,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: &amp;quot;Helvetica Neue&amp;quot;,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;Chronicle books ~ Why did the chicken cross the road? &lt;a href="http://ow.ly/3HvZd"&gt;http://ow.ly/3HvZd&lt;/a&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;All you need to do is post your favorite “Why did the chicken cross the road?” joke by Thursday, January 27th and we’ll pick one winner at random to win a FREE autographed copy of &lt;a href="http://www.chroniclebooks.com/index/main,book-info/store,kids/products_id,8983/"&gt;Chicken Big&lt;/a&gt; by Keith Graves!&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: &amp;quot;Helvetica Neue&amp;quot;,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: &amp;quot;Helvetica Neue&amp;quot;,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;"&gt;Good Luck! &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-6323872921594736257?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/6323872921594736257/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/01/so-many-giveaways.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/6323872921594736257'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/6323872921594736257'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/01/so-many-giveaways.html' title='So Many Giveaways!'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TTjShQW1h-I/AAAAAAAAALE/i8HHAFDzdgU/s72-c/8306857.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-9100226707061571232</id><published>2011-01-02T10:31:00.001-05:00</published><updated>2011-01-19T17:43:19.415-05:00</updated><title type='text'>The Future is Now! Welcome 2011</title><content type='html'>&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TSCaNUbiWVI/AAAAAAAAAK8/ZaWZhqau0MI/s1600/2011.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="240" src="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TSCaNUbiWVI/AAAAAAAAAK8/ZaWZhqau0MI/s320/2011.jpg" width="320" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;style&gt;@font-face {  font-family: "Cambria";}p.MsoNormal, li.MsoNormal, div.MsoNormal { margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; }div.Section1 { page: Section1; }&lt;/style&gt;     &lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;When I was nine, my parents had a New Years Eve party. It was just for their Cousin’s Club. The club was made up of my parents second cousins. It was how they all stayed in touch after prosperity for many of them, allowed the all moved to Westchester or Rockland counties and one or two even, out to New Jersey.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;That night, as they laughed and drank, I listened to their talk of what they hoped for in the new year, 1970. The new decade. One voice cut in and said, “What I can’t believe is how it seems so sudden, that it’s here.”&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;I heard my father ask, “what’s, so sudden, Sue?”&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;The pause hung there, and I sat up in my bed to get closer to her answer.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;“You know, our future. Remember how we used to say we have so much time?”&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Her words seemed to quiet the festivities. I pictured everyone turning to her, to wait for more of what she had to say.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;“You know Moe, whenever we were told ‘you have your whole future ahead of you’. &amp;nbsp;Our future is here, we are living it right now. We’ve become the grownups.”&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;The silence grew, someone cleared their throat. &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;“Sue, why so melancholy all of sudden?” dad asked.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;“This is my future, and it’s not what I thought it would be. I didn’t become the artist, or go to Paris. I didn’t do any of the things I wanted to do.” I hear her sniffle and then someone put a record on and the room grew loud again.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;I sat in my bed for a long time thinking about cousin Sue’s words. She seemed so sad, lost, and lonely in a room full of people.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Fast forward forty years, New Years Eve, 2010.&amp;nbsp; As fireworks exploded over my house, set off from the bottom of my driveway, I thought of Sue and vowed to get off the couch and live more deeply. Live more graciously. Show my gratitude to my family, to my friends, and to my community. &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;2011 is bursting with potential. I’m stepping into it with gratitude for all I have, my future is now.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-9100226707061571232?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/9100226707061571232/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/01/future-is-now-welcome-2011.html#comment-form' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/9100226707061571232'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/9100226707061571232'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2011/01/future-is-now-welcome-2011.html' title='The Future is Now! Welcome 2011'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TSCaNUbiWVI/AAAAAAAAAK8/ZaWZhqau0MI/s72-c/2011.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-8006730433824618047</id><published>2010-11-17T20:24:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2010-11-17T20:24:54.120-05:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Novels Lake'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Agents'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Authors'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Young Adult Novels'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='NESCBWI'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Retreats'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='revision'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='toolbox'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Conference'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Picture Books'/><title type='text'>Inside my Revision Toolbox</title><content type='html'>&lt;style&gt;@font-face {  font-family: "Courier New";}@font-face {  font-family: "Wingdings";}@font-face {  font-family: "Cambria";}p.MsoNormal, li.MsoNormal, div.MsoNormal { margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; }p.MsoListParagraph, li.MsoListParagraph, div.MsoListParagraph { margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.5in; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; }p.MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst, li.MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst, div.MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst { margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.5in; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; }p.MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle, li.MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle, div.MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle { margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.5in; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; }p.MsoListParagraphCxSpLast, li.MsoListParagraphCxSpLast, div.MsoListParagraphCxSpLast { margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.5in; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; }div.Section1 { page: Section1; }ol { margin-bottom: 0in; }ul { margin-bottom: 0in; }&lt;/style&gt;         &lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TOR-unuXt4I/AAAAAAAAAKs/sh_Mz1zjEbw/s1600/j0382971.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: right; float: right; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="142" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TOR-unuXt4I/AAAAAAAAAKs/sh_Mz1zjEbw/s200/j0382971.jpg" width="200" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;The 10 Most Important Tools For Revising&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst" style="text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;span&gt;1.&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;What is the story that I am telling?&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;span&gt;2.&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;How will my character change?&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="margin-left: 63pt; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Symbol;"&gt;&lt;span&gt;·&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;Does my character get to where s/he needs to be?&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 81pt;"&gt;No – How do I make her change?&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 1.5in; text-indent: -13.5pt;"&gt;~&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;Introduce a crisis situation that makes my character &lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;change.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 1.5in; text-indent: -27pt;"&gt;Yes – Do the things that happen along the way help get my character where s/he needs to be?&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 135pt; text-indent: -27pt;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst" style="text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;span&gt;3.&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;What does it mean to move forward?&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="margin-left: 63pt; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Symbol;"&gt;&lt;span&gt;·&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;Reveal something about the character.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="margin-left: 63pt; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Symbol;"&gt;&lt;span&gt;·&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;Propel the plot.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="margin-left: 63pt; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Symbol;"&gt;&lt;span&gt;·&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;Build a relationship that is important later in the book.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst" style="text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;span&gt;4.&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;Summarize the things that don’t move the story forward.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="margin-left: 63pt; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Symbol;"&gt;&lt;span&gt;·&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;An example of this is Charlie Brown, Linus, and Lucy speaking, but the adults always sound like, “Blah, blah, blah.” &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="margin-left: 63pt; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Symbol;"&gt;&lt;span&gt;·&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;One sentence summary of the scene.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 45pt;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst" style="text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;span&gt;5.&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;Is my main plot a character development arc?&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="margin-left: 63pt; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Symbol;"&gt;&lt;span&gt;·&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;Subplots&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 63pt;"&gt;~&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;Do they fit in?&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 63pt;"&gt;~&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;When do they resolve?&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 63pt;"&gt;~&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;How do they resolve?&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst" style="text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;span&gt;6.&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;Characters&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="margin-left: 63pt; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Symbol;"&gt;&lt;span&gt;·&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;What are my character's quirks and personality traits?&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="margin-left: 63pt; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Symbol;"&gt;&lt;span&gt;·&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;Do my secondary/minor characters grow with each appearance they make in the book?&amp;nbsp;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst" style="text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;span&gt;7.&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;Dialogue&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="margin-left: 63pt; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Symbol;"&gt;&lt;span&gt;·&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;Do my characters have unique voices?&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="margin-left: 63pt; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Symbol;"&gt;&lt;span&gt;·&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;Do they reveal everything about their characters?&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 63pt;"&gt;An example of this is sub vs grinder (sandwich)&amp;nbsp;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 63pt;"&gt;Their socio-economic placement&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst" style="margin-left: 63pt; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Symbol;"&gt;&lt;span&gt;·&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;Does the dialogue let their relationships evolve?&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="margin-left: 63pt; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Symbol;"&gt;&lt;span&gt;·&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;How authentic do they sound?&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst" style="text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;span&gt;8.&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;Setting and Description&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="margin-left: 63pt; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Symbol;"&gt;&lt;span&gt;·&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;Picture it then brushstroke the description. Let the reader envision it, unless it must be specific. &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="margin-left: 63pt; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Symbol;"&gt;&lt;span&gt;·&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;For it to be specific, it must be important later in the book. If not, take it out.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 45pt;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst" style="text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;span&gt;9.&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;Wordsmith&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="margin-left: 63pt; text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Symbol;"&gt;&lt;span&gt;·&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;Search for commonly used, but unnecessary words. &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 63pt;"&gt;~&amp;nbsp; Examples are just, so, next, that, but.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 63pt;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;span&gt;10.&lt;span style="font: 7pt &amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;;"&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;Show, don’t tell.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent: -0.25in;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-8006730433824618047?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/8006730433824618047/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/11/inside-my-revision-toolbox.html#comment-form' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/8006730433824618047'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/8006730433824618047'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/11/inside-my-revision-toolbox.html' title='Inside my Revision Toolbox'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TOR-unuXt4I/AAAAAAAAAKs/sh_Mz1zjEbw/s72-c/j0382971.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-3437444185724022832</id><published>2010-11-14T20:41:00.004-05:00</published><updated>2010-11-18T00:20:30.626-05:00</updated><title type='text'>Christmas Cards Ordered</title><content type='html'>&lt;div class="sflyProductPreviewWidget" style="height: 494px; width: 425px;"&gt;&lt;div class="sflyProductPreviewWidgetTop" style="background-image: url(&amp;quot;http://cdn.staticsfly.com/img_/share/preview/msc/widget/top.gif&amp;quot;); height: 6px;"&gt;&lt;img src="http://cdn.staticsfly.com/img_/share/preview/msc/widget/logo.gif" /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="sflyProductPreviewWidgetCenter" style="background-image: url(&amp;quot;http://cdn.staticsfly.com/img_/share/preview/msc/widget/bg.gif&amp;quot;); background-repeat: repeat-y; height: 482px; padding: 0pt 6px;"&gt;&lt;div class="sflyProductPreviewContainer" style="height: 350px; padding: 0pt; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.shutterfly.com/cards-stationery" style="clear: right; float: right; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: 1em;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="sflyProductPreviewMessageContainer" style="background-color: #f4f4e9; height: 55px; line-height: 19px; padding: 15px 0pt; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;div class="sflyProductPreviewTitle" style="color: #333333; font-family: arial,sans-seris; font-size: 15px; font-weight: bold;"&gt;Oh Holy Night Religious Christmas Card&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="sflyProductPreviewSEOText" style="color: #333333; font-family: arial,sans-seris; font-size: 13px;"&gt;Make a statement with custom &lt;a href="http://www.shutterfly.com/cards-stationery" style="color: #6666cc;"&gt;Christmas cards&lt;/a&gt; at Shutterfly.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="sflyProductPreviewViewCollection" style="color: #333333; font-family: arial,sans-seris; font-size: 13px;"&gt;View the entire &lt;a href="http://www.shutterfly.com/cards-stationery" style="color: #6666cc;"&gt;collection&lt;/a&gt; of cards.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="1" src="https://os.shutterfly.com/b/ss/sflyshareprod/1/H.15/111?pageName=sharekey&amp;amp;c1=msc&amp;amp;c2=blogger" width="1" /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="sflyProductPreviewWidgetBottom" style="background-image: url(&amp;quot;http://cdn.staticsfly.com/img_/share/preview/msc/widget/bottom.gif&amp;quot;); 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I was surprised that he wanted such a traditional look. He reminded me that this is a card card his mother would have loved. So enjoy. &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-3437444185724022832?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/3437444185724022832/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/11/christmas-cards-ordered.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/3437444185724022832'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/3437444185724022832'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/11/christmas-cards-ordered.html' title='Christmas Cards Ordered'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-432650718522105157</id><published>2010-09-10T09:01:00.001-04:00</published><updated>2010-11-18T06:59:26.339-05:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Agents'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Authors'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Young Adult Novels'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing Retreats'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Family'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Conference'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Picture Boks'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Summer'/><title type='text'>Jumping Back In</title><content type='html'>&lt;style&gt;@font-face {  font-family: "Cambria";}p.MsoNormal, li.MsoNormal, div.MsoNormal { margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; }div.Section1 { page: Section1; }&lt;/style&gt;     &lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Six weeks or so since the last blog entry! Summer must have been a success. Actually, yes it was. The entire family was busy having fun in the sun! And sun there was plenty of this year.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Week two of back to school is ending. The leaves are turning. Thor has started doggy day care twice a week and he is loving it. My husband has a new motorcycle, and me, I am revising and getting ready for my school year to start. Some of the kids are already on &lt;a href="http://www.proctoracademy.org/"&gt;campus&lt;/a&gt; for sports camp training. I have a new office and have been organizing and decorating. This year my office has a window. &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Next weekend is my 9&lt;sup&gt;th&lt;/sup&gt; Writer’s Schmooze hosted by &lt;a href="http://www.thethreegrumpies.com/"&gt;Tamra Wight&lt;/a&gt; at her &lt;a href="http://www.polandspringcamp.com/"&gt;Poland Springs Campground&lt;/a&gt;. This year I am tenting it. No cozy trailer for me, I have decided to be brave.&amp;nbsp; I hope my tent site has electricity so when I wake up from that unknown noise (a raccoon most likely) I can surf the web until I fall to asleep again. &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Maybe, just maybe, I should bring Thor!&lt;/div&gt;&lt;table cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="float: left; margin-right: 1em; text-align: left;"&gt;&lt;tbody&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td style="text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TIorpWPaNXI/AAAAAAAAAKk/imd0Fr3dOaw/s1600/DSC00296.JPG" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="200" src="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TIorpWPaNXI/AAAAAAAAAKk/imd0Fr3dOaw/s200/DSC00296.JPG" width="150" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"&gt;This is Thor&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/tbody&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-432650718522105157?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/432650718522105157/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/09/font-face-font-family-cambriap.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/432650718522105157'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/432650718522105157'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/09/font-face-font-family-cambriap.html' title='Jumping Back In'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TIorpWPaNXI/AAAAAAAAAKk/imd0Fr3dOaw/s72-c/DSC00296.JPG' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-3383935005208689782</id><published>2010-07-25T18:42:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2010-07-25T18:42:04.059-04:00</updated><title type='text'>Back At It!</title><content type='html'>Vacation is winding down. The kids came home from camp yesterday. I've done seven loads of laundry and now I am catching up with blogs and email.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Dave and I had&amp;nbsp; great week in Maine!&lt;br /&gt;We hung out with Ellen and Frank.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TEy1BWKTolI/AAAAAAAAAJU/MdnmpJ6ORec/s1600/DSCN1304.JPG" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TEy1BWKTolI/AAAAAAAAAJU/MdnmpJ6ORec/s320/DSCN1304.JPG" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Dave swam in the ocean at Sebasco Bay.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TEy0hqbeiYI/AAAAAAAAAJE/WiIvcQg67Fk/s1600/DSCN1318.JPG" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TEy0hqbeiYI/AAAAAAAAAJE/WiIvcQg67Fk/s320/DSCN1318.JPG" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;He relaxed.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TEy0x4PL2xI/AAAAAAAAAJM/fyvjsZj3_NA/s1600/DSCN1305.JPG" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TEy0x4PL2xI/AAAAAAAAAJM/fyvjsZj3_NA/s320/DSCN1305.JPG" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I relaxed.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TEy5fH80gqI/AAAAAAAAAJk/V1wvhmILr1A/s1600/DSCN1301.JPG" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TEy5fH80gqI/AAAAAAAAAJk/V1wvhmILr1A/s320/DSCN1301.JPG" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;We ate dinner with friends and watched the sunset.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TEy60vUb1RI/AAAAAAAAAKE/zNldTgW375g/s1600/DSCN1309.JPG" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TEy60vUb1RI/AAAAAAAAAKE/zNldTgW375g/s320/DSCN1309.JPG" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;It was glorious!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TEy8h_4GuhI/AAAAAAAAAKM/qMye0AtFgFQ/s1600/DSCN1356.JPG" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TEy8h_4GuhI/AAAAAAAAAKM/qMye0AtFgFQ/s320/DSCN1356.JPG" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;"&gt;Then we repeated many of these activities for the rest of the week.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;"&gt;I recommend the following B&amp;amp;Bs for a little indulgence. Both fantastic places to stay for a little R&amp;amp;R (Rest and Romance). &lt;a href="http://www.spouterinn.com/"&gt;The Spouter Inn&lt;/a&gt; in Lincoln, ME and the &lt;a href="http://www.atlanticarkinn.com/"&gt;Atlantic Ark Inn&lt;/a&gt; in Booth Bay.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;"&gt;It's summer, go have some fun! &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-3383935005208689782?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/3383935005208689782/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/07/back-at-it.html#comment-form' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/3383935005208689782'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/3383935005208689782'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/07/back-at-it.html' title='Back At It!'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TEy1BWKTolI/AAAAAAAAAJU/MdnmpJ6ORec/s72-c/DSCN1304.JPG' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-1290232889192901871</id><published>2010-07-14T09:15:00.002-04:00</published><updated>2010-11-18T06:58:02.382-05:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Novels Lake'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Agents'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Authors'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Young Adult Novels'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing Retreats'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Retreats'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Picture Books'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Middle Grade Novels'/><title type='text'>Last Day of the BEST retreat ever!</title><content type='html'>As I write this, I'm looking out at Lake Champlain.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TD5I-MModyI/AAAAAAAAAI0/jhAyUu1rclI/s1600/DSCN1287.JPG" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="480" src="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TD5I-MModyI/AAAAAAAAAI0/jhAyUu1rclI/s640/DSCN1287.JPG" width="640" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The fog glistens from a ray sun fighting it's way through the moist air. Not enough light for a rainbow today, maybe later when I'm on the ferry heading home.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Last night, shortly after midnight, I finished writing the novel I have been working on forever. I keyed in the last word. I realized that this word has a new meaning for me. Instead of running away, I run toward. I have faced all the demons of my adoption.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I want thank everyone at this retreat for their support. Go buy their books!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Jeannine Atkins&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.jeannineatkins.com/" target="_blank"&gt;http://www.jeannineatkins.com/&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Julie Berry&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.julieberrybooks.com/" target="_blank"&gt;http://www.julieberrybooks.&lt;wbr&gt;&lt;/wbr&gt;com/&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Elizabeth Bluemle&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.elizabethbluemle.com/" target="_blank"&gt;http://www.elizabethbluemle.&lt;wbr&gt;&lt;/wbr&gt;com/&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Erin Dionne&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.erindionne.com/" target="_blank"&gt;http://www.erindionne.com/&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Sibby Falk&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://elizabethfalkbooks.com/" target="_blank"&gt;http://elizabethfalkbooks.com/&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Cindy Faughnan&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://cfaughnan.livejournal.com/" target="_blank"&gt;http://cfaughnan.livejournal.&lt;wbr&gt;&lt;/wbr&gt;com/&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Stephanie Gorin&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://gemella1.livejournal.com/" target="_blank"&gt;http://gemella1.livejournal.&lt;wbr&gt;&lt;/wbr&gt;com/&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Jennifer Groff&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://jenlibrarian.livejournal.com/" target="_blank"&gt;http://jenlibrarian.&lt;wbr&gt;&lt;/wbr&gt;livejournal.com/&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Sara Lewis Holmes&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.saralewisholmes.com/" target="_blank"&gt;http://www.saralewisholmes.&lt;wbr&gt;&lt;/wbr&gt;com/&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Joyce Johnson&lt;br /&gt;http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://thewritejoyce.livejournal.com/" target="_blank"&gt;http://thewritejoyce.&lt;wbr&gt;&lt;/wbr&gt;livejournal.com/&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Marjorie Light&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://marjorielight.livejournal.com/" target="_blank"&gt;http://marjorielight.&lt;wbr&gt;&lt;/wbr&gt;livejournal.com/&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Sarah Darer Littman&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://sarahlittman.com/" target="_blank"&gt;http://sarahlittman.com/&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Cynthia Lord&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.cynthialord.com/" target="_blank"&gt;http://www.cynthialord.com/&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span class="il"&gt;Kate&lt;/span&gt; Messner&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.katemessner.com/" target="_blank"&gt;http://www.katemessner.com&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Jenny Moss&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.jenny-moss.com/" target="_blank"&gt;http://www.jenny-moss.com/&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Joan Paquette&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.authorsnow.com/the-tiptoe-guide-to-tracking-fairies-by-ammi-joan-paquette/" target="_blank"&gt;http://www.authorsnow.com/the-&lt;wbr&gt;&lt;/wbr&gt;tiptoe-guide-to-tracking-&lt;wbr&gt;&lt;/wbr&gt;fairies-by-ammi-joan-&lt;br /&gt;paquette/&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Susannah Paterson&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.learncentral.org/profile/susannapaterson" target="_blank"&gt;http://www.learncentral.org/&lt;wbr&gt;&lt;/wbr&gt;profile/susannapaterson&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Mona Pease&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.monapease.com/" target="_blank"&gt;http://www.monapease.com/&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Peggy Thomas&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.peggythomaswrites.com/" target="_blank"&gt;http://www.peggythomaswrites.&lt;wbr&gt;&lt;/wbr&gt;com/&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Alyson Whatcott&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.goodreads.com/user/show/1073553-alyson-whatcott" target="_blank"&gt;http://www.goodreads.com/user/&lt;wbr&gt;&lt;/wbr&gt;show/1073553-alyson-whatcott&lt;/a&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-1290232889192901871?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/1290232889192901871/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/07/last-day-of-best-retreat-ever.html#comment-form' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/1290232889192901871'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/1290232889192901871'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/07/last-day-of-best-retreat-ever.html' title='Last Day of the BEST retreat ever!'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TD5I-MModyI/AAAAAAAAAI0/jhAyUu1rclI/s72-c/DSCN1287.JPG' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-8898735929320089297</id><published>2010-07-13T11:43:00.001-04:00</published><updated>2010-07-14T19:48:21.180-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Lake'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Agents'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Authors'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><title type='text'>Swinger of Birches</title><content type='html'>I am so blessed to a part of this wonderful retreat for the first time. I was so nervous when I arrived on Sunday. It was like walking out of the locker room at middle school all over again. Would I get picked last for a team, or at all.&amp;nbsp; &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Everyone here is amazing! I arrived later than most. the genuine welcomes from everyone were so warm and truly appreciated.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The words are flowing and I am two chapters from being completely done with my fifth and final draft of my YA novel.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The breeze from the lake is like distant applause, hedging me along to the finish line. This short break to blog is just away to step back from the raw emotion of writing some very difficult scenes. This novel takes place in numerous places in New York State. It's only fitting that I finish writing this book, sitting here in Upstate New York.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TD5Mqlu7WKI/AAAAAAAAAI8/2w_iehlOL-s/s1600/DSCN1282.JPG" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="480" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TD5Mqlu7WKI/AAAAAAAAAI8/2w_iehlOL-s/s640/DSCN1282.JPG" width="640" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-8898735929320089297?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/8898735929320089297/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/07/swinger-of-birches.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/8898735929320089297'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/8898735929320089297'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/07/swinger-of-birches.html' title='Swinger of Birches'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TD5Mqlu7WKI/AAAAAAAAAI8/2w_iehlOL-s/s72-c/DSCN1282.JPG' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-4063239810089207119</id><published>2010-07-06T21:53:00.001-04:00</published><updated>2010-07-06T22:15:15.162-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Lake'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Family'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='beach'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='work'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='life'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Conference'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Mom'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Happiness'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Summer'/><title type='text'>Countdown to Summer Camp for Mom!</title><content type='html'>&lt;div style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;Lately, time is not my friend.&amp;nbsp;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TDPaApasDsI/AAAAAAAAAIM/NzcvmgAkXf4/s1600/images-2.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TDPaApasDsI/AAAAAAAAAIM/NzcvmgAkXf4/s320/images-2.jpg" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;It refuses to slow down even though I am on summer vacation. Now that the July 4th weekend is gone, I need to have Monday back. I am scurrying to pack both kids for camp.&amp;nbsp;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TDPaaBXKPhI/AAAAAAAAAIU/MbynJcdko4c/s1600/packing-for-camp.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="132" src="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TDPaaBXKPhI/AAAAAAAAAIU/MbynJcdko4c/s200/packing-for-camp.jpg" width="200" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;I must have this done by Wednesday, even though they don’t leave until Sunday. Why? I have other commitments.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;Even though I've tried very hard not to make any commitments for this summer, this one is for work, made last February when it was COLD.&amp;nbsp;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TDPbgM4ojhI/AAAAAAAAAIc/gGEk16V3EvA/s1600/2007_02_14SnowBike.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="133" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TDPbgM4ojhI/AAAAAAAAAIc/gGEk16V3EvA/s200/2007_02_14SnowBike.jpg" width="200" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;Off I must go at the crack of dawn on Thursday, then again on Friday. Spend two days of gorgeous summer weather sitting through this seminar. &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;Is it worth it? Yes it is. &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;Would I rather be sitting on beach or working in garden?&amp;nbsp;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TDPb4BWhThI/AAAAAAAAAIk/Chv_wTc5vP4/s1600/images-4.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TDPb4BWhThI/AAAAAAAAAIk/Chv_wTc5vP4/s320/images-4.jpg" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;Absolutely!&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;Once I return, I have a day with my kids before they leave for summer camp. I will review their camp bins one last time and make sure each has adequate underwear for two weeks.&amp;nbsp;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;Then I pack for me. I am off to four-day writing retreat on the shores of Lake Champlain.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TDPddArkKUI/AAAAAAAAAIs/LqF6t07CivE/s1600/images-5.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="132" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TDPddArkKUI/AAAAAAAAAIs/LqF6t07CivE/s200/images-5.jpg" width="200" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Georgia,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;Summer camp for mom!&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-4063239810089207119?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/4063239810089207119/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/07/countdown-to-summer-camp-for-mom.html#comment-form' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/4063239810089207119'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/4063239810089207119'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/07/countdown-to-summer-camp-for-mom.html' title='Countdown to Summer Camp for Mom!'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TDPaApasDsI/AAAAAAAAAIM/NzcvmgAkXf4/s72-c/images-2.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-5689525817787405220</id><published>2010-06-22T18:30:00.022-04:00</published><updated>2010-06-22T18:40:44.406-04:00</updated><title type='text'>Talk About Writing and You Shall Write</title><content type='html'>My writer friends get it! Just talking about writing, even for a few  minutes, can light a fire under the old muse. Stimulate the words in my head and get me to the keyboard. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TCE3fjKPLoI/AAAAAAAAAIE/dqO9QLB8ACQ/s1600/7192theonly1212writingrulesyoulleve.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TCE3fjKPLoI/AAAAAAAAAIE/dqO9QLB8ACQ/s320/7192theonly1212writingrulesyoulleve.jpg" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div style="text-align: center;"&gt;This poster can help! &amp;nbsp;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.amazon.com/Writing-Rules-Youll-Subject-Poster/dp/B000EEIUCM?ie=UTF8&amp;amp;tag=thew092-20&amp;amp;link_code=btl&amp;amp;camp=213689&amp;amp;creative=392969" target="_blank"&gt;You can buy it.&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;I spent this afternoon sitting at the lake, watching the kids have a great summer day and talking about writing. It was an impromptu conversation; neither of us knew the other would be there. Just what each of us needed; we talked about what we are working on, how it was going to be hard to find time to write this summer. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;We spoke about how sometimes you just have to move forward, even though you hope to hear from or fear you never will hear from, an editor or agent about your submission. We talked about how we have to stay positive and persevere, and keep writing, rewriting, and stay open to all the possibilities. How we have to stay Focused on the craft, the story, and all the elements that make our writing stellar. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;We talked about what we thought was our individual highlights from this past NESCBWI conference and what we found inspiring, helpful, insightful, even what could be improved or changed for next year. All the things we brought home that will keep us going until the next big gathering of our writing comrades. The people who encourage us, support us, and are never afraid to tell the truth using kind words and love.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I left the beach content. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Here is some great reading for this summer:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.amazon.com/Writing-Great-Books-Young-Adults/dp/1402226616?ie=UTF8&amp;amp;tag=thew092-20&amp;amp;link_code=bil&amp;amp;camp=213689&amp;amp;creative=392969" imageanchor="1" target="_blank"&gt;&lt;img alt="Writing Great Books for Young Adults: Everything You Need to Know, from Crafting the Idea to Landing a Publishing Deal" src="http://ws.amazon.com/widgets/q?MarketPlace=US&amp;amp;ServiceVersion=20070822&amp;amp;ID=AsinImage&amp;amp;WS=1&amp;amp;Format=_SL160_&amp;amp;ASIN=1402226616&amp;amp;tag=thew092-20" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;img alt="" border="0" height="1" src="http://www.assoc-amazon.com/e/ir?t=thew092-20&amp;amp;l=bil&amp;amp;camp=213689&amp;amp;creative=392969&amp;amp;o=1&amp;amp;a=1402226616" style="border: medium none ! important; margin: 0px ! important; padding: 0px ! important;" width="1" /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.amazon.com/Writing-Great-Books-Young-Adults/dp/1402226616?ie=UTF8&amp;amp;tag=thew092-20&amp;amp;link_code=btl&amp;amp;camp=213689&amp;amp;creative=392969" target="_blank"&gt;Writing Great Books for Young Adults: Everything You Need to Know, from Crafting the Idea to Landing a Publishing Deal&lt;/a&gt;&lt;img alt="" border="0" height="1" src="http://www.assoc-amazon.com/e/ir?t=thew092-20&amp;amp;l=btl&amp;amp;camp=213689&amp;amp;creative=392969&amp;amp;o=1&amp;amp;a=1402226616" style="border: medium none ! important; margin: 0px ! important; padding: 0px ! important;" width="1" /&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-5689525817787405220?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/5689525817787405220/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/06/my-writer-friends-get-it-just-talking.html#comment-form' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/5689525817787405220'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/5689525817787405220'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/06/my-writer-friends-get-it-just-talking.html' title='Talk About Writing and You Shall Write'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TCE3fjKPLoI/AAAAAAAAAIE/dqO9QLB8ACQ/s72-c/7192theonly1212writingrulesyoulleve.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-5368913754854932825</id><published>2010-06-14T06:41:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2010-06-14T06:41:06.567-04:00</updated><title type='text'>Finally, Unstuck the Stuck Part By Giving Birth.</title><content type='html'>Getting unstuck is hard! I have been trying to write a certain scene for months. Actually, longer; much, much longer.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Turns out the answer was not to face it alone.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;It has one of those write what you know moments (years), but what I knew about this particular event was absolutely nothing. I was there but not in anyway I would ever remember.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;This past weekend was spent in, the Catskill Mountains. The old Borscht Belt as it was known, in the early to mid part of the last century. It is where she met my birthfather and well from their monikers, I’m sure you get the picture.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;My birth mother was recently diagnosed with stage-four bone cancer. Since it had been a while, I wanted the kids to see her before her hair fell out, so they had a clear picture of her in their heads to remember. Photos of this time with her will also help. What is so amazing about this woman is that she is one of the most positive people I know. Even after the hard, sad life she’s led. Giving up a baby for adoption at sixteen was something she never recovered from. It has affected her her entire life. But she tells me, “Finding you eighteen years ago was like winning the lottery.” She really is my biggest fan, my flaws and all.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;So writing the scene where my MC is giving birth knowing she is supposed to give the baby up was like looking into a black hole. Dark and empty. I couldn’t figure out why I was having such a hard time. I had given birth to two children, watched numerous litters of puppies being born, seen a horse calve, I have even watched as a giraffe gave birth. Birth shouldn’t be so hard to describe.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;A while back, I was at the inaugural Falling Leaves Novel Writing retreat and Sarah Shumway was speaking. Something she said triggered the reason why I could not write the scene.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;DUH! Why hadn’t I seen that it was really all about me writing about me being born and then being given up – not something anyone wants to admit to themselves still hurts forty-something years later! Like I said, “Duh!”&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Okay, so after that huge “AHA” moment, I’ve spent a great deal of time thinking about the reason for my writing black hole, but knowing the big reason for the holdup wasn’t getting me to complete the fifth, and I mean thrown-it-away-four-times-prior-and-rewrite-the-entire-manuscript, because of THIS issue. Because I always got stuck here before and thought it was the writing, not the scene. So how to get through the black hole and have a completed manuscript?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Because even at forty-eight your mother’s cancer makes you feel like your are being abandoned again. The real reason for going to see her.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;However, this time, writing the scene was different. That woman, the one that has the most amazing, most positive outlook on everything, she talked and loved me through it. YES SHE DID!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;This morning I am cruising to the completion line.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Thanks, mom!&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-5368913754854932825?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/5368913754854932825/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/06/finally-unstuck-stuck-part-by-giving.html#comment-form' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/5368913754854932825'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/5368913754854932825'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/06/finally-unstuck-stuck-part-by-giving.html' title='Finally, Unstuck the Stuck Part By Giving Birth.'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-3353719277017168087</id><published>2010-06-08T12:57:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2010-06-08T12:57:15.826-04:00</updated><title type='text'>90 Days to a Slimmer ME! :)</title><content type='html'>Yes I am!&lt;br /&gt;Well I have been trying for a year and a half. I work out like crazy, eat just the right number of calories a day, and workout again. Not losing anything, but I can crack walnuts with my tush.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;So, what now?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Well, I'm thinking online accountability. Maybe if I really write it all down, track everything, I'll get it right.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;So feel free to comment on my &lt;a href="http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/p/summer-2010-fitness-journal.html"&gt;Summer 2010 Fitness Journal&lt;/a&gt; and help achieve my goal: Lose 20 lbs., by September 1, 2010.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Right now I am thinking of using the Flat Belly Family Cookbook to make it easier for the whole family to support the diet. Anyone have any other suggestions?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Let me know!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;iframe align="left" frameborder="0" marginheight="0" marginwidth="0" scrolling="no" src="http://rcm.amazon.com/e/cm?t=thew092-20&amp;amp;o=1&amp;amp;p=8&amp;amp;l=bpl&amp;amp;asins=1605294594&amp;amp;fc1=000000&amp;amp;IS2=1&amp;amp;lt1=_blank&amp;amp;m=amazon&amp;amp;lc1=0000FF&amp;amp;bc1=000000&amp;amp;bg1=FFFFFF&amp;amp;f=ifr" style="height: 245px; padding-right: 10px; padding-top: 5px; width: 131px;"&gt;&lt;/iframe&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-3353719277017168087?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='related' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/p/summer-2010-fitness-journal.html' title='90 Days to a Slimmer ME! :)'/><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/3353719277017168087/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/06/90-days-to-slimmer-me.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/3353719277017168087'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/3353719277017168087'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/06/90-days-to-slimmer-me.html' title='90 Days to a Slimmer ME! :)'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-8744059217311410702</id><published>2010-06-04T14:01:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2010-06-04T18:31:27.826-04:00</updated><title type='text'>To Find A Wonder - Jennifer Carson</title><content type='html'>Here in New Hampshire we have an endless supply of wonderful writers and authors. One of these is &lt;a href="http://web.me.com/jenniferccarson/findawonder.com/About_the_Author.html"&gt;Jennifer Carson&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TAk94UE-5tI/AAAAAAAAAHA/84-7be96lO8/s1600/60386024_c-1.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TAk94UE-5tI/AAAAAAAAAHA/84-7be96lO8/s320/60386024_c-1.jpg" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&amp;nbsp;Her book &lt;a href="http://www.findawonder.com/"&gt;To Find a Wonder&lt;/a&gt; is masterfully crafted and weaves a sweet and powerful story about a squire discovering what it takes to be a knight. Read along as this young squire, named Mortimer, discovers the power of friendship, loyalty, and honor. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;To &lt;span id="goog_268678109"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span id="goog_268678110"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.amazon.com/Find-Wonder-Jennifer-Carson/dp/1603181768/ref=sr_1_2?ie=UTF8&amp;amp;s=books&amp;amp;qid=1275690609&amp;amp;sr=8-2"&gt;Find A Wonder&lt;/a&gt; has been adapted to the stage and can be seen this summer, August 5, 2010 at the New London Barn Playhouse. You can order tickets &lt;a href="http://www.nlbarn.org/childrenstheatre.html"&gt;here&lt;/a&gt;. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;b&gt;This summer Jennifer can be found at:&lt;/b&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="paragraph_style"&gt;&lt;span class="style_1" style="line-height: 25px;"&gt;Grantham Library, Grantham, NH June 23rd, 7 pm&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span class="style_2" style="line-height: 25px;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="paragraph_style_2"&gt;&lt;span class="style_4" style="line-height: 23px;"&gt;Market on the Green, New London, NH&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span class="style_5" style="line-height: 23px;"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span class="style_6" style="line-height: 23px;"&gt;, Every Wednesday afternoons, rain or shine! &lt;br /&gt;June 30- September 15th. &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="paragraph_style_2"&gt;&lt;span class="style_6" style="line-height: 23px;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="paragraph_style"&gt;&lt;span class="style_4" style="line-height: 23px;"&gt; Hopkinton Library, Hopkinton, NH most of the Month of July &amp;amp; July 22nd, 6pm&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span class="style_7" style="line-height: 23px;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="paragraph_style"&gt;&lt;span class="style_7" style="line-height: 23px;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="paragraph_style"&gt;&lt;span class="style_4" style="line-height: 23px;"&gt;Tattered Pages, Sunapee, NH Sunday, August 1 @ 1 pm&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="Body"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;span class="style_6" style="line-height: 23px;"&gt;Hay Days at The Fells, Newbury, NH August 14th&lt;/span&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-8744059217311410702?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/8744059217311410702/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/06/to-find-wonder-jennifer-carson.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/8744059217311410702'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/8744059217311410702'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/06/to-find-wonder-jennifer-carson.html' title='To Find A Wonder - Jennifer Carson'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TAk94UE-5tI/AAAAAAAAAHA/84-7be96lO8/s72-c/60386024_c-1.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-5116550090857553955</id><published>2010-05-22T11:32:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2010-05-22T11:32:32.841-04:00</updated><title type='text'>An Early Harvest</title><content type='html'>This morning turned into a lesson on how to harvest granite. I have three young fruit trees (2 apple, 1 pear) that need to be planted. I picked the perfect spot, measured the distance between each, and aligned them. All was perfect!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I began to dig!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;And dig.&lt;br /&gt;Then, CRACK!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Rock, Kennie yelled!&lt;br /&gt;DUH! I thought.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;So I widened the hole, and wider, and wide... until finally, I harvested this bad boy.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S_f4AVU-kSI/AAAAAAAAAGY/lXhdb6SzakE/s1600/DSCN1189.JPG" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S_f4AVU-kSI/AAAAAAAAAGY/lXhdb6SzakE/s320/DSCN1189.JPG" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S_f4UgYYjLI/AAAAAAAAAGo/rtoiqKg_-qA/s1600/DSCN1193.JPG" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S_f4UgYYjLI/AAAAAAAAAGo/rtoiqKg_-qA/s320/DSCN1193.JPG" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;What are we going to do with it, you might be asking?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S_f4ucBx7RI/AAAAAAAAAGw/AepGwfNH_Ys/s1600/DSCN1196.JPG" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S_f4ucBx7RI/AAAAAAAAAGw/AepGwfNH_Ys/s320/DSCN1196.JPG" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;We need to replace the wooded step that leads into the mudroom. I always wanted granite!&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-5116550090857553955?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/5116550090857553955/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/05/early-harvest.html#comment-form' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/5116550090857553955'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/5116550090857553955'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/05/early-harvest.html' title='An Early Harvest'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S_f4AVU-kSI/AAAAAAAAAGY/lXhdb6SzakE/s72-c/DSCN1189.JPG' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-906104105888406756</id><published>2010-05-19T19:44:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2010-05-19T20:12:09.954-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Reflection'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Life in a small town'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Happiness'/><title type='text'>From my yard!</title><content type='html'>&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;o:p&gt;&lt;/o:p&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;I love living in New Hampshire. The mountains, lakes and wildlife calm me and keep me grounded.&amp;nbsp; Everyday, I discover hidden beauty in my yard, yesterday was no different. I went to burn the brush pile. Just as I was about to toss the match in, I look down and saw.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S_RykmqT5PI/AAAAAAAAAE4/8y-Iabrrkms/s1600/DSCN1171.JPG" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="360" src="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S_RykmqT5PI/AAAAAAAAAE4/8y-Iabrrkms/s640/DSCN1171.JPG" width="640" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;The brush pile will look like this for a while longer.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S_RywYwcgsI/AAAAAAAAAFA/FwbzLiDmopU/s1600/DSCN1174.JPG" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="225" src="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S_RywYwcgsI/AAAAAAAAAFA/FwbzLiDmopU/s400/DSCN1174.JPG" width="400" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;I decided to walk the property to see what else I had been overlooking lately. This is what I found on the pond.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S_RzlQazXQI/AAAAAAAAAFQ/tUMxrQbJ0mE/s1600/DSCN1163.JPG" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="180" src="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S_RzlQazXQI/AAAAAAAAAFQ/tUMxrQbJ0mE/s320/DSCN1163.JPG" width="320" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;In the garden.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S_Rz6pJC0pI/AAAAAAAAAFY/MTYp9EAUgbg/s1600/DSCN1168.JPG" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="225" src="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S_Rz6pJC0pI/AAAAAAAAAFY/MTYp9EAUgbg/s400/DSCN1168.JPG" width="400" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;a href="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S_R0Da1ulfI/AAAAAAAAAFg/7rbaovoGMRk/s1600/DSCN1165.JPG" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="225" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S_R0Da1ulfI/AAAAAAAAAFg/7rbaovoGMRk/s400/DSCN1165.JPG" width="400" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;a href="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S_R0LqYaGFI/AAAAAAAAAFo/ICA1ZNAkYh4/s1600/DSCN1183.JPG" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="300" src="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S_R0LqYaGFI/AAAAAAAAAFo/ICA1ZNAkYh4/s400/DSCN1183.JPG" width="400" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S_R0961XVBI/AAAAAAAAAFw/F2KRtZRvOgI/s1600/DSCN1185.JPG" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="300" src="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S_R0961XVBI/AAAAAAAAAFw/F2KRtZRvOgI/s400/DSCN1185.JPG" width="400" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S_R27FYdTvI/AAAAAAAAAGI/hEPPUN1vVgI/s1600/DSCN1180.JPG" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S_R27FYdTvI/AAAAAAAAAGI/hEPPUN1vVgI/s320/DSCN1180.JPG" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt; I looked along the pond and took in the texture of the trees. I love how the birches bend over the water and the lilac bushes throw purple in amongst the fresh new greens.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S_R2fHuyzvI/AAAAAAAAAGA/2-__Ya2mO5c/s1600/DSCN1164.JPG" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="225" src="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S_R2fHuyzvI/AAAAAAAAAGA/2-__Ya2mO5c/s400/DSCN1164.JPG" width="400" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;But what I saw today was my dream of turning my 205 year-old barn into my writing studio/retreat edging closer to the top of my wish list.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S_R3ajhM1QI/AAAAAAAAAGQ/0E66c9Ow1Mg/s1600/DSCN1157.JPG" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" height="360" src="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S_R3ajhM1QI/AAAAAAAAAGQ/0E66c9Ow1Mg/s640/DSCN1157.JPG" width="640" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; text-align: center;"&gt;Someday soon!&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="font-family: Times,&amp;quot;Times New Roman&amp;quot;,serif; text-align: center;"&gt;Tell me, what do you wish for?&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-906104105888406756?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/906104105888406756/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/05/from-my-yard.html#comment-form' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/906104105888406756'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/906104105888406756'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/05/from-my-yard.html' title='From my yard!'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S_RykmqT5PI/AAAAAAAAAE4/8y-Iabrrkms/s72-c/DSCN1171.JPG' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-3603292141666741571</id><published>2010-05-17T22:31:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2010-05-18T15:30:47.856-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Agents'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Authors'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Writing'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='NESCBWI'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Conference'/><title type='text'>NESCBWI 2010 - Thank You everyone!</title><content type='html'>This year’s conference was incredible. &lt;a href="http://cynthialeitichsmith.blogspot.com/"&gt;Cynthia Leitich Smith&lt;/a&gt; said so much and even included tidbits on her man. &lt;a href="http://www.marlafrazee.com/"&gt;Marla Frazee&lt;/a&gt; and &lt;a href="http://imprints.simonandschuster.biz/beach-lane-books"&gt;Allyn Johnston&lt;/a&gt; showed me what Santa looks like naked, rear and front. ☺ &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.sudipta.com/"&gt;Sudipta Quallen&lt;/a&gt; is my girl. She just keeps knocking out some the most creative and fun picture books ever.  Sudipta’s hands-on sessions shows what it takes to write incredible picture books and how to amp of your chances of writing and selling great books.  &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Super Kudos to &lt;a href="http://www.lisapapa.com/"&gt;Lisa Papademetriou&lt;/a&gt;, for jumping in and getting me all Unstuck!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;I loved &lt;a href="http://www.erindionne.com/"&gt;Erin Dionne's&lt;/a&gt; Hysterical Epiphanies session. On the ride home, I found myself thinking about ways to make my characters laugh for just a second in some of their darkest moments.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://ozandends.blogspot.com/"&gt;John Bell&lt;/a&gt;’s So You Want to Write a Graphic Novel? Was really just perfect! I arrived knowing nothing about this genre and left enlightened.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;But most of all, the Agent Quick Query Session was a complete success all because of &lt;a href="http://www.greenhouseliterary.com/index.php/site/sarahs_blog"&gt;Sarah Davies&lt;/a&gt; of The Greenhouse, &lt;a href="http://www.strothmanagency.com/about-us"&gt;Lauren Macleod&lt;/a&gt; of The Strothman Agency, &lt;a href="http://www.andreabrownlit.com/agents.php"&gt;Jennifer Laughran&lt;/a&gt; of the Andrea Brown Literary Agency, &lt;a href="http://www.kwlit.com/ouragents_lesliekaufmann.html"&gt;Leslie Kaufmann&lt;/a&gt; of Kneerim &amp;amp; Williams, &lt;a href="http://www.mcintoshandotis.net/agent.htm"&gt;Edward Necarsulmer IV&lt;/a&gt; of McIntosh &amp;amp; Otis, and &lt;a href="http://emliterary.com/about.php"&gt;Ammi-Joan Paquette&lt;/a&gt; of Erin Murphy Literary Agency, because it was so apparent how much time and effort each put into the queries. Thank you!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S_H60hmBtuI/AAAAAAAAAEY/aLnaLhzgRvI/s1600/DSCN1144.JPG" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S_H60hmBtuI/AAAAAAAAAEY/aLnaLhzgRvI/s320/DSCN1144.JPG" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-3603292141666741571?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/3603292141666741571/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/05/nescbwi-2010-thank-you-everyone.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/3603292141666741571'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/3603292141666741571'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/05/nescbwi-2010-thank-you-everyone.html' title='NESCBWI 2010 - Thank You everyone!'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S_H60hmBtuI/AAAAAAAAAEY/aLnaLhzgRvI/s72-c/DSCN1144.JPG' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-2103013535493843234</id><published>2010-04-06T20:51:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2010-04-06T20:51:59.895-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Quotes'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Family'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Reflection'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='friends'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Inner Peace'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Love'/><title type='text'>Two for Tuesday! April 6, 2010</title><content type='html'>&lt;div style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;All right, I may be flashing back or just having hot flashes, but I am still into the following quote by Jimi Hnedrix.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;h3 class="UIIntentionalStory_Message" data-ft="{&amp;quot;type&amp;quot;:&amp;quot;msg&amp;quot;}" style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span class="UIIntentionalStory_Names" data-ft="{&amp;quot;type&amp;quot;:&amp;quot;name&amp;quot;}"&gt;                &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span class="UIStory_Message" style="font-weight: normal;"&gt;1. &lt;i&gt;"When the power of love overcomes the love of  power  the world will know peace."&lt;/i&gt;  Jimi Hendrix&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/h3&gt;&lt;h3 class="UIIntentionalStory_Message" data-ft="{&amp;quot;type&amp;quot;:&amp;quot;msg&amp;quot;}" style="font-family: inherit;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span class="UIStory_Message" style="font-weight: normal;"&gt;&amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; The word peace has been on my mind a lot in the last few weeks.&amp;nbsp; Finding my inner peace, keeping my inner peace, even sharing it quietly or in silence, because that is what peace is all about. Not recognition, just being and giving and knowing who I am, and how I have changed.&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/h3&gt;&lt;h3 class="UIIntentionalStory_Message" data-ft="{&amp;quot;type&amp;quot;:&amp;quot;msg&amp;quot;}" style="background-color: white; color: black; font-family: inherit;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span class="UIStory_Message" style="font-weight: normal;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;2.&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="background-color: white; font-size: small; font-weight: normal;"&gt;&lt;i&gt;"Most                 folks are as happy as they make up their minds to be."&lt;/i&gt; Abraham Lincoln&lt;br /&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; This from a man who truly knew what it was like to be unhappy and depressed.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/h3&gt;&lt;h3 class="UIIntentionalStory_Message" data-ft="{&amp;quot;type&amp;quot;:&amp;quot;msg&amp;quot;}" style="background-color: white; color: black; font-family: inherit;"&gt;&lt;span style="background-color: white; font-size: small; font-weight: normal;"&gt;No bonus quote today. But I would like it if you would share these quotes with at least one person. Let me know what tehy say by leaving me a comment. Thanks!&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/h3&gt;&lt;h3 class="UIIntentionalStory_Message" data-ft="{&amp;quot;type&amp;quot;:&amp;quot;msg&amp;quot;}"&gt;&lt;span style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span class="UIStory_Message" style="font-weight: normal;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/h3&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-2103013535493843234?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/2103013535493843234/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/04/two-for-tuesday-april-6-2010.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/2103013535493843234'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/2103013535493843234'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/04/two-for-tuesday-april-6-2010.html' title='Two for Tuesday! April 6, 2010'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-8940674434354356851</id><published>2010-03-23T18:29:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2010-03-23T18:29:13.259-04:00</updated><title type='text'>Two for Tuesday!</title><content type='html'>&lt;!--StartFragment--&gt;  &lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Two Quotes for Tuesday!&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;1) &amp;nbsp; &lt;i&gt;"What do want: to be right or to be happy?"&lt;/i&gt; Dr. Phill.&amp;nbsp;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp;I have embraced this concept completely. Truth is… being right all the time is too much work!&amp;nbsp;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;2) &amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp;&lt;i&gt;“There is no mistaking a real book when one meets it. It is like falling in love.”&lt;/i&gt; Christopher Morley&lt;br /&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp;I fall in love all the time. You really can be in love with more than one at a time!&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;i&gt;&lt;b&gt;Bonus:&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/i&gt; &amp;nbsp;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;i&gt;"&lt;/i&gt;&lt;i&gt;Anger makes you smaller, while forgiveness forces you to grow beyond what you were."&lt;/i&gt; Cherie Carter-Scott&lt;/div&gt;&lt;!--EndFragment--&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-8940674434354356851?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/8940674434354356851/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/03/two-for-tuesday.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/8940674434354356851'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/8940674434354356851'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/03/two-for-tuesday.html' title='Two for Tuesday!'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-4224570242891657641</id><published>2010-03-07T15:13:00.003-05:00</published><updated>2011-04-13T18:22:49.828-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Struggling with life skills'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Family'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Kendra'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Mothering'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Dyslexia'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Love'/><title type='text'>Kendra is a poet, and I Know It!</title><content type='html'>&lt;a href="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S5QIjPoGqCI/AAAAAAAAAEI/LFMBui8_WLI/s1600-h/dyslexia2.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;a href="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S5QIjPoGqCI/AAAAAAAAAEI/LFMBui8_WLI/s1600-h/dyslexia2.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;a href="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S5QIjPoGqCI/AAAAAAAAAEI/LFMBui8_WLI/s1600-h/dyslexia2.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;a href="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S5QIjPoGqCI/AAAAAAAAAEI/LFMBui8_WLI/s1600-h/dyslexia2.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;a href="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S5QIjPoGqCI/AAAAAAAAAEI/LFMBui8_WLI/s1600-h/dyslexia2.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;a href="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S5QIjPoGqCI/AAAAAAAAAEI/LFMBui8_WLI/s1600-h/dyslexia2.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;a href="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S5QIjPoGqCI/AAAAAAAAAEI/LFMBui8_WLI/s1600-h/dyslexia2.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;a href="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S5QIjPoGqCI/AAAAAAAAAEI/LFMBui8_WLI/s1600-h/dyslexia2.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;a href="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S5QIjPoGqCI/AAAAAAAAAEI/LFMBui8_WLI/s1600-h/dyslexia2.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;a href="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S5QIjPoGqCI/AAAAAAAAAEI/LFMBui8_WLI/s1600-h/dyslexia2.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;a href="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S5QIjPoGqCI/AAAAAAAAAEI/LFMBui8_WLI/s1600-h/dyslexia2.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;a href="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S5QIjPoGqCI/AAAAAAAAAEI/LFMBui8_WLI/s1600-h/dyslexia2.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Well it’s official, my daughter is a poet.  This year has marked a major change in how Kendra’s feels about writing.  A positive change, something I was sure would never happen.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Everything  changed in October 2009, once she was diagnosed with Dyslexia . She  hated writing, cried on the mornings she had to go into school knowing  it was spelling test day.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;a href="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S5QIjPoGqCI/AAAAAAAAAEI/LFMBui8_WLI/s1600-h/dyslexia2.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S5QIjPoGqCI/AAAAAAAAAEI/LFMBui8_WLI/s320/dyslexia2.jpg" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;This is what dyslexia looks like to Kendra.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I knew we had accomplished a lot when she finally wanted to read on her own.But spelling still was not something she could do. Learning to read had been a four-year struggle of me battling the school to get her tested for dyslexia, the school telling me the tests were inconclusive and she wasn’t dyslexic, and then finally being told that they (the school) would never diagnose her as dyslexic because they “Just wouldn’t.) Her teachers, the reading specialist, nobody could teach her how to read, no matter how hard they tried. And they did try! Everyone was getting frustrated, most of all Kendra. &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;In March of 2008, I heard about a program from a mom in town. She was like, “really, try it. It works.”&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;So we did.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;It is called Kumon and it did work! &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Does work!&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;i&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Calibri;"&gt;www.kumon.com&lt;o:p&gt;&lt;/o:p&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;i&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: Calibri;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;o:p&gt;&lt;/o:p&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Every Wednesday for a year, we drove to Norwich, VT and Kendra worked on new reading skills, made slow progress, and came home and worked 20-30 minutes of everyday, of every week, practicing and working on her worksheets. She did it when she was sure she would never be any good at reading, she was diligent, and then she hit a wall. No amount of practice sheets or repetition seemed to help her reading advance. Through the tears, she kept plugging away. She wanted to be a reader!&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Suddenly, one day it all clicked. (It was amazing. I actually saw the light bulb above her head blink on!) Kendra figured out how to compensate for her dyslexia, and overcame the dyslexic obstacles preventing her from reading. To this day she can’t explain how she figured it all out, she just did. Now, two years later, she is an avid reader, who cannot spell at all. I don’t know how she does it, but it is amazing!&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Kendra keeps trying though. She writes her own poetry and stories, and spell check is her pal. On most days, writing is all done with a pencil, and on these days she is still frustrated. She has to go back and read what she has written, which is hellish for her. It’s not easy to read her writing, everything looks the same to her. Phonetically spelled words are never written the same way twice. It’s hard work. But, she keeps trying and this is why I am so proud of her.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;The poem below is beautiful, just like Kendra. Here it is:&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;b&gt;&lt;u&gt;What If Trees Had No Leaves&lt;o:p&gt;&lt;/o:p&gt;&lt;/u&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;By Kendra Johnson&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;What if trees had no leaves? &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;They would look bare, &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;shiver in the cold,&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;look lonely, like all their best friends &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;will never come back.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;And everything would darken in the snow,&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Finally, the snow melts, &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;The leaves don’t come back.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Though it is lighter than in winter,&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;The trees were yearning for their leaves.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;After crying a hundred tears of missing them,&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;the trees finally go silent.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-4224570242891657641?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/4224570242891657641/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/03/kendra-is-poet-and-i-know-it.html#comment-form' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/4224570242891657641'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/4224570242891657641'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/03/kendra-is-poet-and-i-know-it.html' title='Kendra is a poet, and I Know It!'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S5QIjPoGqCI/AAAAAAAAAEI/LFMBui8_WLI/s72-c/dyslexia2.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-3067598070523951558</id><published>2010-02-26T16:40:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2010-03-24T18:30:05.509-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Motherhood'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='growing up'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='mourning'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Family'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Dysfunction'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='life'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Mom'/><title type='text'>Coming to terms with "Being at Peace!"</title><content type='html'>&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 200%; text-indent: 0.5in;"&gt;“Being at Peace” whether it is with a person, thing, or an emotion, is a concept I understand but had never experienced. Until recently.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 200%; text-indent: 0.5in;"&gt;I have always been open about my falling out with my mother (adoptive) several years ago. Our relationship has always been stormy to say the least. The reasons, dark and convoluted for many, and for me today, not ones I will delve into here. &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 200%; text-indent: 0.5in;"&gt;But it has been two and ½ years since I’ve spoken to her. She is now 75, and I know there is always the chance that I might not speak to her ever again. I have worked out this possibility over the last few years and have come to accept the consequences. Choosing to stay away from our toxic relationship has been difficult, but has slowly faded into the background of my hectic life. I think of her at random, when a memory tickles it way to the forefront of a thought. &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 200%; text-indent: 0.5in;"&gt;She’s my mother and I love her, but still…she is toxic. I remind myself when thoughts of her surface.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 200%; text-indent: 0.5in;"&gt;I was in Florida earlier this week, saying goodbye to a friend who is dying. Her children and I grew up together. I know her as well as I know my own mother. In fact, they have been close friends for almost 45 years. As different from each other as any two people can ever be. They embraced and accepted their differences, sadly something she could never do with me.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 200%; text-indent: 0.5in;"&gt;Walking through the hospital with my friend’s eldest daughter, our conversation went like this (she didn’t know my mother and I hadn’t spoken at all in 2 ½ years):&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 200%; text-indent: 0.5in;"&gt;“We were all surprised that your mom and dad aren’t coming down to say good bye to mom.”&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 200%; text-indent: 0.5in;"&gt;“Really,” I said. I was surprised as well.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 200%; text-indent: 0.5in;"&gt;“Well, especially after your father’s bout with cancer last year.” &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 200%; text-indent: 0.5in;"&gt;“He has cancer? I didn’t know,” I said. She stops walking and looks at me.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 200%; text-indent: 0.5in;"&gt;“You didn’t know?” she asked.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 200%; text-indent: 0.5in;"&gt;“We haven’t spoken in 2 ½ years,” I reminded her.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 200%; text-indent: 0.5in;"&gt;“Oh, early last year, your mother had a mini stroke. No one told you?” she asked.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 200%; text-indent: 0.5in;"&gt;“Not until now,” I said, waiting for the tears. They didn’t come.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 200%; text-indent: 0.5in;"&gt;I realized I was at peace. Seriously, it was like getting smacked. It struck me so hard. I stammered. “I...I’m at peace with her.” I actually said the words and knew I meant them.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 200%; text-indent: 0.5in;"&gt;Over the last few years, I had worked out all of the anger and frustration and I had buried her. I had forgiven her for everything. She was old and unhealthy and would never change, never understand, and never admit her shortcomings at being an adoptive mother and a biological mother all at once. I forgave her for telling me, in front of my children, that she wished she had never adopted me. That she hated me. That I was the reason her life had been shit. &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 200%; text-indent: 0.5in;"&gt;Because the truth is, I know all of these feelings are hers and probably about herself. I know that she is an angry person, one who never achieved all of her desires. I understand she has always felt trapped in a life she didn’t want. I am at peace with her, because carrying all of &lt;i&gt;&lt;span style="font-family: &amp;quot;Times New Roman Italic&amp;quot;;"&gt;her&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/i&gt; around had stalled my own life; has been a burden I just could not carry any longer. So much of my energy poured into someone who was so negative, who would never see the real me, because she could not see past her own&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 200%; text-indent: 0.5in;"&gt;I know, by removing her from my life, I have become the person I was always meant to be: a happy, healthy, and loving mother, wife, friend, teacher, poet, and author. I have achieved so much and worked so hard to become this person. &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 200%; text-indent: 0.5in;"&gt;I no longer worry that I won’t meet her expectations, because they were always unattainable, ever-changing before my eyes.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 200%; text-indent: 0.5in;"&gt;Don’t get me wrong I miss her, but not the mother portion. I miss the educated, intelligent woman, the one that had real fire, who could convey her ideas and argue a point. The woman whose hands could form clay into sculptures, who could paint, could recommend a great book, and talk philosophy. The woman I always wanted as a mother, but never felt connected to, nor a part of.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 200%; text-indent: 0.5in;"&gt;“She’s old an walks with a cane, maybe even a walker,” The eldest daughter told me. “I can’t believe she isn’t coming to see my mom.”&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 200%; text-indent: 0.5in;"&gt;I can believe it. I can even take a guess at why. But I won’t put that into words here. Instead, I’ll share a poem I wrote while working through this experience &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;August 2009&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;MOURNING CLOAK&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;The mourning happens&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;When I most miss you,&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;My mother.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Each longing a small death,&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Leading me through &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;the family crypt of dysfunction.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;I break the lock, swatting cobwebs &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;of memory from my face, spewing angry epitaphs &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;etched into granite heart.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;I wonder if your skin has papered thin. &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Have you forgotten what you need to remember?&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Preferring age as your excuse.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;The sharp shards of your slated words,&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;“I wish,” impaling me. &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;The “never had,” scraping, flaying me, exposing &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;“You!”&amp;nbsp; &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Gasping, I turn back to my life,&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Shrugging off the mourning cloak&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Of my life, of you&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Locking the crypt once more.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 200%; text-indent: 0.5in;"&gt;So for now, just for a moment, I wonder if my mother can’t travel because of her health, because she can’t walk, or because coming to see her friend dying would be admitting that she is so much closer to the ending than to the beginning? &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 200%; text-indent: 0.5in;"&gt;I wonder most of all, if she has made peace with herself.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 200%; text-indent: 0.5in;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S4g_k94kr5I/AAAAAAAAADg/MRm4xFHC9RM/s1600-h/images-3.jpeg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S4g_k94kr5I/AAAAAAAAADg/MRm4xFHC9RM/s320/images-3.jpeg" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 200%; text-indent: 0.5in;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-3067598070523951558?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/3067598070523951558/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/02/coming-to-terms-with-being-at-peace.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/3067598070523951558'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/3067598070523951558'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/02/coming-to-terms-with-being-at-peace.html' title='Coming to terms with &quot;Being at Peace!&quot;'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S4g_k94kr5I/AAAAAAAAADg/MRm4xFHC9RM/s72-c/images-3.jpeg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-338845375980563846</id><published>2010-02-21T08:53:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2010-02-21T08:53:26.112-05:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Living'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='saying goodbye'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='old friends'/><title type='text'>Goodbye To a Friend!</title><content type='html'>&lt;span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: 'Lucida Grande'; font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: 12px;"&gt; &lt;!--StartFragment--&gt;  &lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Less than twenty-four hours ago, I was celebrating my daughter’s birthday with a bunch of girls. We were making necklaces and then going to a French bakery for tea and cake, to complete the festivities. In the middle of this, my cell rang.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;“Joyce?”&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;“Yes, this is Joyce.”&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;“My mom is very sick, dying.”&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;So now, I sit at terminal B20, waiting for my flight to board to Orlando. My destination is not the ‘House of Mouse’, but a hospital in Ocala. I’ll be saying goodbye to a woman I have know since I was 5.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Peg Errico has always had a kind word, and a shoulder, and an ear for me. Childhood was spent with her six children. July fourth parades watched from their big front porch at 52 Ramapo Avenue (by the way, the house is currently for sale). Barbeques in their back yard, and an occasional elusive view of grandma Errico in the little house out back. &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;As we all grew up, we would visit them at the ponderosa, camp with them in the massive tent, which we could almost fit everyone from both families in.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;But what I remember most, sitting in the kitchen with Mrs. Errico and talking about everything, while she cooked dinner for her brood. The years slipped away, and after they moved to upstate New York, we would visit. The old farmhouse they bought was massive, and everyone fit. We would go to the Altamont Fair and run through the cornfields playing hide-n-seek, but it wasn’t the same. &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;After Frank retired, they moved to Ocala, FL, I saw them rarely for a few years.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;A few years later, my parents bought a summer place in Willsboro, NY and Frank and Peg Errico did shortly after. Our families were deeply, lovingly entwined, and this was the natural progression of staying close.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;I would see the Erricos during summer visits and always tried to plan to see Frank and Peg. A few years back, I stopped going to the lake house. Mrs. Errico called me just before last Christmas, wanted to let me know she wanted to see me. &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;“I’ll come to the lake,” I said.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;“I don’t think I’ll be there this summer.”&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;I knew what she meant.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;“Call me and I’ll come to Florida.”&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;“You will?”&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;And I am. Waiting for the flight to board. &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;I tucked my children into bed last night after booking a flight, explaining to them why I was going and wishing it were a vacation with them, to swim in the ocean and make memories. My son tells me to tell them [Erricos] he loves them; my daughter in tears, her current struggles with mortality rampant at 10; sad that people die. Sadder still, her memories of the Erricos are fuzzy, and hard to recall.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Instead, I leave them semi-asleep in their beds at 5:30 this morning. Wishing I were home, angry with my nomadic self, at how happy a small part of me is, to be getting on a plane, even for this journey.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;This trip signifies so much; with her passing, Peg Errico takes my childhood with her. Causing me, to reflect on things I would rather forget. Choices I’ve made, words I’ve tossed around. Peg always had a smile for me, and loved me unconditionally, my successes meant something to her, and she always let me know how much she appreciate who I was.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;I go to say goodbye, with a light heart. To give support her children and to show her I loved her.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Peace.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;!--EndFragment--&gt;   &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;  &lt;!--EndFragment--&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-338845375980563846?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/338845375980563846/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/02/goodbye-to-friend.html#comment-form' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/338845375980563846'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/338845375980563846'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/02/goodbye-to-friend.html' title='Goodbye To a Friend!'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-3453174522216410473</id><published>2010-02-17T16:39:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2010-03-24T18:31:41.069-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Dysfunctional Families'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Dyslexia'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Happiness'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Love'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Poetry'/><title type='text'>A Decade Gone!</title><content type='html'>&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Today my daughter turns 10. It may not seem like a major milestone to some, but it is for me. I find it hard to believe she is changing from a little girl to an emerging teen.&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S3xem9XuJ9I/AAAAAAAAADI/kRvPVDhG5rk/s1600-h/DSCN0981.JPG" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S3xem9XuJ9I/AAAAAAAAADI/kRvPVDhG5rk/s320/DSCN0981.JPG" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Her beauty isn’t just skin deep.&amp;nbsp;At 10, she possesses much poise, has a great sense a humor,&amp;nbsp;is learning the flute, is very creative and artistic, and is still young enough to dream big, which she does.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S3xe6b3PXSI/AAAAAAAAADQ/Xjn34c4Hgq0/s1600-h/DSCN0983.JPG" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S3xe6b3PXSI/AAAAAAAAADQ/Xjn34c4Hgq0/s320/DSCN0983.JPG" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;She is beautiful!&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;With double digits, comes more sophisticated problems; navigating the endless girl drama, the beginning of hormone changes, self image conflicts, confidence issues, and so much more. I forgot how hard this all was. Or maybe, it was so traumatic I pushed it way back into the dark recess of my mind. But either way, I hope she doesn't get to caught up in it all and forget to be true to herself.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;What I do know, is that she is a gift. Unexpected, but welcomed more so than any other event in my life. I want her to always know she is loved and cherished, and never want her to question her origins, like I did. She is flesh of my flesh, not adopted like me. Therefore, she was always wanted from the very first moment when I realized she was possible.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;I wrote this poem shortly after she was born, knowing my miracle had happened.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;So for Kendra on your 10th birthday, here is your poem.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;INFERNO&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;The spark exploded&lt;br /&gt;from within. &lt;br /&gt;I held you deep inside; &lt;br /&gt;the suddenness of your being possessed me. &lt;br /&gt;I knew you existed from that moment. &lt;br /&gt;Whispered you were inside me, an untold story &lt;br /&gt;the first words, the first sentence above: &lt;br /&gt;The Spark.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;I warmed as you ignited into a tiny flame; &lt;br /&gt;I had not experienced this before. &lt;br /&gt;Not with your brother &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;or the one I lost before him. &lt;br /&gt;Only you. &lt;br /&gt;Was it because you were so unexpected, &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;created from joy? I don’t know.&lt;br /&gt;But there you were:&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;My Spark.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;I whispered your arrival to a stunned face, &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;hazel eyes dipping, reaching into me. &lt;br /&gt;Those words surprised me, filled me with wonder &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;as astonishing as you, &lt;br /&gt;&lt;i&gt;I felt it too&lt;/i&gt;! he said.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Our Spark.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Now, thousands of hours later, I look at you &lt;br /&gt;and burn inside, womb clenching, &lt;br /&gt;trying to hold on. &lt;br /&gt;The world outside beckons, tempts you &lt;br /&gt;with twigs of knowledge &lt;br /&gt;once consumed by your fire, &lt;br /&gt;your hunger grows.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;I can only contain you for a short time longer.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;Your Spark.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;You are an inferno of life, a fire, a light &lt;br /&gt;so bright,&lt;br /&gt;my own spark pales, &lt;br /&gt;but never does my joy for you,&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="MsoNormal"&gt;My Inferno.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3082438809880534785-3453174522216410473?l=thewritejoyce.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/feeds/3453174522216410473/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/02/decade-gone.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/3453174522216410473'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3082438809880534785/posts/default/3453174522216410473'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://thewritejoyce.blogspot.com/2010/02/decade-gone.html' title='A Decade Gone!'/><author><name>Joyce Shor Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/17148686080324252038</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/TB6hO3JCWmI/AAAAAAAAAHk/-QdMhil_jas/S220/DSCN1147.JPG'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S3xem9XuJ9I/AAAAAAAAADI/kRvPVDhG5rk/s72-c/DSCN0981.JPG' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3082438809880534785.post-6168419459293095079</id><published>2010-02-07T14:27:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2010-02-07T14:27:31.399-05:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='winter'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Living'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Life in a small town'/><title type='text'>Seven Years Of Small Town Living</title><content type='html'>&lt;span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: 'Times New Roman', Times, Palatino, Georgia, serif; font-size: 19px; line-height: 23px;"&gt;I love my small town!&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: 'Times New Roman', Times, Palatino, Georgia, serif; font-size: x-large;"&gt;&lt;span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: 19px; line-height: 23px;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S27ovvNq04I/AAAAAAAAACw/ha3dlEVn2Fg/s1600-h/17havens-600.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_TT-VrtJz88E/S27ovvNq04I/AAAAAAAAACw/ha3dlEVn2Fg/s320/17havens-600.jpg" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: 'Times New Roman', Times, Palatino, Georgia, serif;"&gt;&lt;span class="Apple-style-span" style="line-height: 23px;"&gt;&lt;span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: small;"&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.nytimes.com/2008/10/17/greathomesanddestinations/17havens.html"&gt;New London, NH a NY Times Best Destination&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: 'Times New Roman', Times, Palatino, Georgia, serif; font-size: x-large;"&gt;&lt;span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: 19px; line-height: 23px;"&gt;&lt;span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: medium;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: 'Times New Roman', Times, Palatino, Georgia, serif; font-size: x-large;"&gt;&lt;span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: 19px; line-height: 23px;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: 'Times New Roman', Times, Palatino, Georgia, serif; font-size: x-large;"&gt;&lt;span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: 19px; line-height: 23px;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: 'Times New Roman', Times, Palatino, Georgia, serif; font-size: 19px; line-height: 23px;"&gt;I have for the entire time we’ve lived here.&amp;nbsp;&lt;br style="margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 0px;" /&gt;&lt;br style="margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 0px;" /&gt;Seven years ago, this month to be as close to exact s I can. We came to New London for the first time when the company my husband was interviewing with invited to spend the weekend and check out area. We drove through down Main Street and fell in love. The snow was heavy that winter. We awoke to 13 inches of bright white snow. We drove all around the town, down snow covered dirt roads, looked at houses, dreamed of all the new possibilities and fell in love with New Hampshire.&amp;nbsp;&lt;br style="margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 0px;" /&gt;&lt;br style="margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 0px;" /&gt;My husband moved up at the end of April, the kids and I arrived the day we closed on the sale of our home in Connecticut. We moved into a rental. A safe bet, until we found just the right home for us.&amp;nbsp;&lt;br style="margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 0px;" /&gt;&lt;br style="margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 0px;" /&gt;Our first summer in New London was just wonderful. Our days were spent at the beach; sunset swims and picnics whenever we wanted. Weekends were spent exploring the state. It was the most relaxed summer we’ve ever had.&lt;br style="margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 0px;" /&gt;&lt;br style="margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 0px;" /&gt;Then winter struck!&lt;br style="margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 0px;" /&gt;&lt;br style="margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 0px;" /&gt;Winter can get to you. Frost heaves the size of Mt Washington, potholes you could swim in if they weren’t frozen solid, sand ground into the carpet, and road salt making jagged rings on your favorite boots. Not the wonderland we remembered from the winter trip the year before.&lt;br style="margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 0px;" /&gt;&lt;br style="margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 0px;" /&gt;Now seven winters later - I still wouldn’t trade it all in. It might be February 2, and we are certain to have more snow, but try as I might to get over it all, I would miss this place. I don’t remember exactly when it became home to me. The moment that matters most, is the moment I realized I wanted to call this place my home for the remainder of my life.&lt;br style="margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 0px;" /&gt;&lt;br style="margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 0px;" /&gt;Even on the winter days when the people I like the most really get under my skin like a jagged splinter from the woodpile. When words spew forth without a filter from their lips, because cabin fever has set in, and everyone is irritable and waiting for the thaw. Small scandals grow ripe for gossip and even friends get snippy.&lt;br style="margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 0px;" /&gt;&lt;br style="margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 0px;" /&gt;I wrote a poem about it.&lt;br style="margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 0p
